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smritiz

@smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Got an idea seeing the promo on 30th June ...so here it goes...
Kushi...KUSHI...Arnav called her but she was detached and pushed into the ICU by the doctors and nurses .Akash and NK held him back and tried to console him...but to no avail
A total broken Anjali limped towards them after putting Shyam in jail along with nani's and mami's support.
Anjali-"Chote.." She placed her hand on his shoulder and he turned to look at her tearfully and hugged her...He let all his emotions to come out...
The ICU opened and all of them turned in anticipation only to find a nurse who ran past them without answering any queries. She came with two bottles of blood and another doctor running behind her...they disappeared as fast as they came...
Payal who stood there shocked ran to hug Garima and Buaji who pushed a tearful Babujiin the wheel chair...
Buaji-"Haire Nand kisshore...iss ladki aur kitna sehange...?
Arnav went to take Babuji but one glare from Garima was enough to make him retart...
He looked at Payal who refused to even acknowledge anything around her...praying desparetly for her sister who was ultimately everyone's KUSHI...
No one knew how long but it looked like a decade to Arnav who sat there his eyes gazed on particularly nothing...
After a matter of 3hours an expressionless doctor came out...
Everyone got up and crowded to ask him...
Arnav-"Doctor meri Kushi...teek to hai na?...plz jawab dejiye...I BEG YOU..."

SO GUD ,BAD,BAKWAS OR RATHER SHLD THIS BE AN SS,FF OR OS?upto u guys to tell me wat u want to do...

Edited by smrithi1234 - 13 years ago

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@Tish_Ani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey...i liked it a lot

But dis is my confusion, clear kardo koi, pls...:

if she reached hospital means arnav wil b recued...

den wat bout d hug in dat orange dress?

and dat scene were arnav is in rm???

wats going on??

cvs, pls allow me to sleep...!!

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smritiz

@smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

The doctor looked at the expecting faces of the patient's relatives and wondered if they could face his worst doubts regarding the patient.He took a deep breath to calm himself down before he spoke...
D-"She's fine and conscious you can go and see her but do not disturb her too much...
Even before he could complete Arnav was inside the ICU , he walked in towards her bed...
His heart breaking seeing her lying pale and weak.He took her delicate hand in hers and pressed a kiss on it.She immediately opened her eyes and looked at him ,She kept quite just looking at him and lost in her own thoughts."Kushi".The voice of her jiji brought her back and everyone came pouring inside...
Arnav-"Kh.Khushi..."
That was enough for her to realize that it was reality... A flash of incidents passed before her eyes... and she got up and cuddled to Payal in fear...
Payal was confused but began stroking her hair and hugged back like she did when Kushi was a child...
Khushi-"DI...YHE YAHAN KAR KYA RAHA HAIN...?pointing her fingers at Arnav and shaking ...
Payal-"Kyun puch rahi ho tum Isko yahan hona chayihe..."
Kushi-"Magar inki wajah se aapki shaadi tooy gayi the ...isne mujhe bazadti ki..."
"ISNE MUJHE BEZADTI KI"...was the last line she spoke before falling unconcious

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smritiz

@smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

PROMO:
"I am sorry Mr.Raizada but she 's suffering from selective amnesia...and this explains her wired behaviour"
For Arnav the world stopped moving while
A person who was hidden in the shadows smirked-"Ab maza ayega" he said to himself...

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smritiz

@smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

DIS s d theme of the story...but the end may not be the same...lol
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlTR0tfzpTA

check it out...

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

Please Continue Soon 😳

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smritiz

@smritiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER-3

The howling of winds,thunder and what not of mother nature was scaring people to a very bad extent.However to the inmates of the room it was nothing compared to the emotional turmoil they had and were going through...Payal sat beside Kushi stroking her hair continuously.When Garima or even any other person had touched her to do the same act Kushi had just flinched and looked uncomfortable with their touch ...Only under Payal's actions was she comfortable and in peace...
Anjali sat cursing herself for being the cause of everything...

FEW HOURS EARLIER
Kushi had fainted repeating the same words about Arnav ...Akash had called the doctors immediately.What the doctor told next shook the Raizada's and the Gupta's out of their wits...
Doc-"She has selective amnesia and hence she has forgotten about all of u Mr. Raizada..."
Mama had to steady Arnav who had felt his life slip away from him...
The doctor had warned all of them to take it slow in remanding all the memories to the patient as if they might rush ,it would become life threatening for her

Doc-"God dose exist Mr.Raizada, we thought we lost her but she escaped miraculously.."

Kushi stirred and all of them focused on her "PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME"... she moaned...Arnav rushed to sooth her...but Nani held him back knowing what Kushi's reaction would be...Nani turned to look at the Gupta's who looked totally pale and scared to be more precise...

Far away the monitor indicating a person's heartbeat began to leap crazily
Nurse-"Doctor...OMG!!!!!! He 's coming to conscious ...hurry..."
The doctors rushed into the room...
A woman uttered."Finally "

AND THE GAME BEGINS!!!!!!!!!!

SO GUD/BAD /HAPPY/NOT HAPPY/BORING????????
WATS ON UR MIND FOLKS?????
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