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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

thank you all :)

@kiii - step it up hun :P 😆

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bahi.

@bahi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I loved it. And I really hope that khushi will say those words to arnav (beautiful written). I want this to happen in the show. Lets wait and see.

Edited by Baki - 13 years ago

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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: --Siva--
Me

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Shiz, WHY? WHY? WHY?

To start with, Rain - I thought it is going to be a pleasant dreamy one.

Then their conversation on Love - I thought may be angst.
Later discussion on Trust - I was like, No, Sad ending!

Then when he asked her to stay, a ray of hope arose in me, May be she'll stay!

But, she went and he is imagining her! Continue this please, Shiz!!

Thanks for the PM

Well i know usually rain should be associated with happier memories but couldn't help it. His emotions just meshed perfectly with the rain :D glad you liked it.

Hmm,i will think about continuing it but first i am going to concentrate on the one ff i started :)thank you siva...😳

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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika
so emotional

Thanks a lot hun.

Edited by InvisibleSmile - 13 years ago

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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: angelina_angel
nice one

Thank you dear :)

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winter.03

@winter.03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

get lost :P

btw, very angst, liked how you used the rain as a contrast to Arnav's emotions very beautiful really :) Aww i felt so bad but i loved how you describe khushi's feelings through her dialouges. Very smart. I really hope we get to see a redemption track in the show soon.

oh, i love the name, Beautiful.