OS: Beep or Dhak Dhak?

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Fuj

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Posted: 13 years ago

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Its amazing.. Khushi came back.. ❤️

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saucechips

@saucechips

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Posted: 13 years ago

yayy..!! i love happy endings...👏

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

a heart-warming os... you've put down beautifully khushi's confusion about her whereabouts and her determination to escape to save arnav... loved how his voice drew her back to life though she was unsure whose it was... the bits of humor [khushi's thoughts] scattered across the tense situation was a nice touch! love truly conquers all!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

awww his voice broke through to her subconscious.. lovely story. 👏

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the monologue with her self...beautifully written👏

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing os.
Thanks 4 d pm

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it! Awesome job :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

it beep beep and dhak dhak when it gets to your hubby khushi

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maddy1270
a heart-warming os... you've put down beautifully khushi's confusion about her whereabouts and her determination to escape to save arnav... loved how his voice drew her back to life though she was unsure whose it was... the bits of humor [khushi's thoughts] scattered across the tense situation was a nice touch! love truly conquers all!

thankyou so much Maddy for your beautiful comment. really appreciate it 😃 and yes, i wanted to show khushi and arnav's feelings as more powerful and wanted to show their relation to be more connecting! Thankyouuu so much 😃

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