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Posted: 13 years ago
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I needed some break so am back with an another os... it is very short.. just wrote what I felt after watching today's precap... pls do hit d like and comment...



"kushi " ...

no arnav u r just hallucinating again arnav said to himself


he could feel some warmth.. not the one due to the delhi summer heat.. but this was the warmth he longed for...


he could feel her presence.. he wanted to hold her.. he wanted her all by himself..


the hole he could feel inside his heart is aching without the soul that filled it.. he knew it belonged to his kushi...


kushi.. kushi.. he knew she was there.. he knew she was close to him...



he knew his kushi would find him...




so wat do u thnk????? I know its lame.. but pls comment.. I will definitely try 2 get better...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...u r good...but can be better...please increase ur font size for starters...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yes definitely ..but I am using a tablet.. and it is really difficult to change d font in this..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was nice TJ but u know i m not watching the show

But today i watched one scene where arnav was tied and trust me he looked as innocent as a baby

this is 4 u

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Posted: 13 years ago
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short sweet simple loved it thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well start i will be waiting for your next update 😉

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