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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mamiji... meri pyari mamiji
friday ho ya Monday
apke jalwon se hardin banjaye funday ji😊

Mamiji in her homage to the detective spirit -dressed in black with over sized glares... stole the show.👏 👏 👏A lady with a sharp tongue and a comparing wit encasing a heart of gold for her kith and kin. Desi marple with shades of Hastings shines bright ...in less than 20 mins-
deduces Arnav is in India;
concocts a plan to raid the airport back office basement;
stealthily breaks into the basement after climbing over the Iron gate with her assistant KKGSR
successfully tackles a sleepy guard with ineffectively use of chloroform (don't pressurize your brains to try and understand the sentence... it is inline with the illogically logical detective work of today's episode.)😆
securing the keys to the office with a jonty rhodes dive😛 ( she has truly emulated her skills from the best)..
Her worthy assistant KKGSR doesnot disappoint she disconnects the CCTV wire before you can finish the sentence"how will she do it"?..😉

Dear crime novel writers please take a cue on how to complete the art of deduction in 20 pages instead of 290. It is just a humble plea of an avid crime fiction reader with no intention of creative cornering. 😳

The night's hard work bears fruit... mami and Khushi have a glimpse of Arnav bitwa along with 4 suspicious characters dressed in black overcoat and hat trailing him.
Khushi gets teary eyed on seeing her "Arnavji".😭 .but the phangurl in me flashed a wide grin onArnav darshan at the start of the week.😃

The defining moment of the day:

Shyam's evil brains are at work too 😈... suspicions regarding Khushi and Mamiji are being stirred in it.

The illusive Will finds itself stashed in the most weirdly innovative places- a pot ,a cradle,to be followed by... reminds me of a Famous Five or a Secret Seven plot... Inspirations comes from all quarters.😎
Shyam as the sole kidnapper🤔.. there is something more than what meets the eye. Is it really Shyam or Mr. Anonymous behind the shadows? S or A? Pretty soon the adversaries will no longer be a secret to each other but till then we play along with the cat and mouse chase.😉

Outstanding characters of the day:

Four MIB who were meant to be a cynosure in the crowd strangely were inconspicuous...Iss fishiness ko kya naam doon?

Last thoughts:
Boiling in suspense,brewed in emotions of love and and familial bonding with a dash of intrigue today's masala chai served without Masala Mama.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very well written Sunshine...loved mamiji...looked like the kidnappers wanted to get caught😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice post...awesum writing!!

loved mamiji!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: showstruck

very well written Sunshine...loved mamiji...looked like the kidnappers wanted to get caught😆

thank you showstruck... for the appreciation.😃 ...a diligent try with their Monday best dresses.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shagun_sarun

nice post...awesum writing!!


loved mamiji!!😃

thank you shagun.😃

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