OS- Wicked Obsession Part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a surprise I loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Nisha---


sorry hun...I just thought it would be so poetic to kill him off by the one he wanted. I would have written more...but you know work is piling up. I have so much to write. Plus not many people were interested in this (I didnt think they would be since its about Shyam).

nisha he could have been kept alive to die another dayCry But I think folks impatient for his demise there are happy to see it here Understandable
He might have been the uncouth poor persons version of Hannibal Scratch that thought there can be only one Hannibal and he is my sensual icon 😊 He could have been one of the smoothest villains emanating out of soap land but for the PH Tsk Tsk
Hope you revive him one day he is has been brought to life vividly and such a shame to finish him off put in the backburner to be used somewhere else
once again girl i doff my hat to you Mind blowing! and yes work is important so off to it now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, poetic justice, I must say! having expected a grand finale, khushi shooting shyam dead was an anti-climax 😆! but would have given anything to have seen arnav's expression at that instance: he sure must have been flumoxed 😲 !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing! Truly Loved It!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice loved it... Awesome ending...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hooray! Now they lived happily ever after🤗
You have done a superb job of getting into Shyam'd mind and see what makes this guy tick - pyscho? a true lover? a dejected soul?

WOW! Kudos to you girl!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you for the pm and very i mean very good ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great ending! K is observant in this story...nice!

-Sona
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!! What an end. The Creep should be terminated just like this, swiftly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ending loved it thanks for the pm

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