ArHi OS | I can feel your gaze

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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im first!! yay! and i LOVED it!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful OS. Showed her pain and confusion so well! I was choking up! Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Risha!

Should i even say it, it was brilliant! Her inner turmoils driving her to the edge.. justified!

And the song! it felt so nostalgic, This song is so dear to me, i used to know the lyrics as well!
Brought back all the memories!
Wspecially this line-- Satrangi sapne, bole ree,, kaahe sataaye aaja!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww.. Poor, poor Khushi.. :(
Looking forward to happier work from you , now that you're on a sadness free sabbatical.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rrr...will come back after sometime n comment...gotta go mom shouting...exams in 2 weeks :(...
i will comment asap

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It was superbly awesomely brilliantly written...
i loved the way u described her emotions...i know u could...
and the way you projected it...it was damn good..
thank you so much for fulfilling my request love you dear
god bless you...hope you write more and more...i really really loved it :)
oh and it was beautiful too...its you and your feelings that could do the justice...
i requested the right person :) ...and i m proud of that
And it really amazes me how u write so well every time...it is god gifted...dont lose it :)
Bye
Take care..last comment on any os...before my exams...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Kryptonite.

Hey Risha!


Should i even say it, it was brilliant! Her inner turmoils driving her to the edge.. justified!

And the song! it felt so nostalgic, This song is so dear to me, i used to know the lyrics as well!
Brought back all the memories!
Wspecially this line-- Satrangi sapne, bole ree,, kaahe sataaye aaja!


Hey Krypto :P [I dont know your name😆]

aww thankyou so much :)
The song was a request from Debby_11 so you should thank her 😉
I heard it almost 10 times before i could write something -it is a beautiful one for sure!

@all others-Thankyou so much!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u r really a very good writer i really like all your works this one is also nice but i loved i wish you had meant it one
it was really nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Risha_ipkknd


Hey Krypto :P [I dont know your name😆]

aww thankyou so much :)
The song was a request from Debby_11 so you should thank her 😉
I heard it almost 10 times before i could write something -it is a beautiful one for sure!

@all others-Thankyou so much!🤗

Haha, call me Paru, also can you give me the link to the OS, falling thrice.. i wanted to comment but couldn't..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww! It was a nicely written piece! I love that song! :) The scenes you've penned down were so good. Feeling happy for her Jiji but at the same time unhappy at her plight. Seeing him everywhere and her frustration at worrying about him. Everything was brought out beautifully! I enjoyed it! :)

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