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Posted: 13 years ago
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At first I thought it was ArHi but then realized its Arnav and Anjali and the impact magnified. I dont want Anjali to kill anyone or Arnav or Khushi but I want them to hurt Shyam and grow up in the process in the sense of growing mature and trusting.

Good job! It was full of impact and the suspense remained till the end.

Side note - Humaara effect aap par rub hui gawa hai kiya? ;) :D


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!

See, this is what I mean about the twist in my comment on colors. You can decieve us till the last minute, woman!

It was short, sweet, to the point! Shyam's dead! Yay! What else can I ask for?😆

I thought it was ArHi after the MU was cleared. And then you said "The years, they were yours" and for some reason I thought it was Shyam and Anji, and then when I got to the point of the man lying on the floor, I went, Oh! This might be the siblings! And I was right! I realized it 2 sec before I read it, lol! Great acheivment! 😆

Anyway, I hope Anjali can claim self-defense, Shyam was enough of a creep to warrant that!

BTW, is this by any chance a result of today's episode?

Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelTeen

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At first I thought it was ArHi but then realized its Arnav and Anjali and the impact magnified. I dont want Anjali to kill anyone or Arnav or Khushi but I want them to hurt Shyam and grow up in the process in the sense of growing mature and trusting.

Good job! It was full of impact and the suspense remained till the end.

Side note - Humaara effect aap par rub hui gawa hai kiya? ;) :D



Haha..Nope see as I said this was very random. I've written an OS after some time and it felt..well...cathartic...yep that's the word!

Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one...I so wish Anjali would get much strength to do something like this in future, not by killing him but atleast protecting her baby from that crep and staying strong for the family!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one :D you managed to put suspense into it with just 300 words!! very good :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! Okay so I thought it was Arnav and Khushi bu the dialogues did not seem right. I mean if they were talking about hope and illusions

"Hope is for fools. I thought you knew that."

I would have thought Khushi would say "You taught me that" and then as I read further it seemed unlikely. But Wow! Another scenario where the tables have turned. Anjali who thought she had the perfect life partner and Arnav who had tried his best to stay away from Khushi, the person capable of affecting him without trying too hard, Now they have come to terms with the truth of the relationships with their respective spouses.

Hope the Anjali on the show has half the spine that this Anjali has! Lovely drabbly goodness :) Thanks for the scrap ! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Hey!

See, this is what I mean about the twist in my comment on colors. You can decieve us till the last minute, woman!

It was short, sweet, to the point! Shyam's dead! Yay! What else can I ask for?😆

I thought it was ArHi after the MU was cleared. And then you said "The years, they were yours" and for some reason I thought it was Shyam and Anji, and then when I got to the point of the man lying on the floor, I went, Oh! This might be the siblings! And I was right! I realized it 2 sec before I read it, lol! Great acheivment! 😆

Anyway, I hope Anjali can claim self-defense, Shyam was enough of a creep to warrant that!

BTW, is this by any chance a result of today's episode?

Loved it!


I am sure Arnav will figure out a way to save his sister. After all that's all that seems to do anyway ;)

And I didn't watch today's episode. But then even the thought of a shirtless Shyam made me want to kill him ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Psychedelic

Wow! Okay so I thought it was Arnav and Khushi bu the dialogues did not seem right. I mean if they were talking about hope and illusions

"Hope is for fools. I thought you knew that."

I would have thought Khushi would say "You taught me that" and then as I read further it seemed unlikely. But Wow! Another scenario where the tables have turned. Anjali who thought she had the perfect life partner and Arnav who had tried his best to stay away from Khushi, the person capable of affecting him without trying too hard, Now they have come to terms with the truth of the relationships with their respective spouses.

Hope the Anjali on the show has half the spine that this Anjali has! Lovely drabbly goodness :) Thanks for the scrap ! :)


They found the people diametrically opposite to their inherent selves. And look where they ended up :)

I love Anjali's character..or should I say I love the potential the character has. CVs haven't used it even an iota of what they should have. Shame!

I hope Daljeet's resignation can be the momentum they need to give her some spine and all things good while we are at it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really did think that was Khushi and Arnav talking. Great twist. Poor Anjali hope she never has to go through something like that in the show. I want Shyam to have his comeuppance but not this way.
Fab OS Meera.xx

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