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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Guys,

This is a new SS/FF that I wrote. Please like it and I hope you enjoy it. I changed the title, it used to be I came for you, Arnav. But, the title didn't really pull in many readers so why not give this one a try. Right? and if you have any other better suggestions then please let me know. Thank you and ENJOY!

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Khushi had finally figured out where that bas***d Shyam had taken her husband. As she entered the dark, old building, scared to death.

Khushi: Nothing is going to happen to Arnav ji as long as I am there. I will be his shield before any pain comes towards him, it will have to pass through me first.

Khushi bravely stepped onto the first step and she heard laughing upstairs.

Khushi stepped on the second step and then she saw a dim light.

Khushi stepped on the third step and saw three men sitting down, playing cards, and drinking alcohol.

Man 1: What the hell, man? The sun has come out in so many days, we should be enjoying outside not in here!

Man 2: Ya exactly right, If this stupid Arnav Singh Raizada could've waited for a couple more of days then we would've been out there enjoying the sunshine.

Man 3: You guys, I think we should go out for a little while, just a little time and anyways Arnav is unconscious right now, he won't wake up.

The three men got up and started heading towards the staircase that Khushi was going up, Khushi started heading towards the bottom, when she heard her own payal making noise. She stopped dead in her track, sure that her payal's noise was loud enough to reach the ears of the kidnappers.

Man 1: Did you hear that? It was the voice of a girl's payal.

Man 2: What? Dude, what are you saying, have you gone mad? That is impossible, sounds like you drunk too much, let's go outside and get freshened up!

The three men head outside, while Khushi runs upstairs to find her Arnav ji! She looks in every room, but not even a single clue of where Arnav is. Then Khushi sees her last option, a staircase that lead to the third floor of the dirty, old building. She runs up the stairs, but doesn't notice the nails laying in the stairs and steps on them. Not worrying about her injury, she keeps on running up the stairs while more and more nails prick her feet. But Khushi was determined. Khushi got upstairs and looked in all the rooms but still not a single clue of Arnav. Then'''''. Khushi saw a door with a big chain and lock. She looked around for something big enough that would break the lock, she then spotted an axe.

Khushi picked up the axe, with all the might she had, she hadn't eaten even a crumb since she found out about Arnav's kidnap. But she lifted the axe and banged it against the lock with all the strength she had. She kept on banging it but the lock wouldn't open, she finally tried for the last time and finally the lock opened, and what she saw gave her the strength that she had lost in the past two weeks but at the same time it tore her heart apart.

Khushi: ARNAV JI! Arnav ji!

Arnav unconscious and Khushi runs over to him. And unties him. She looks around for water and spots a glass of water. She takes the water and sprinkles it over his face while shouting his name as loud as she could. Arnav finally wakes up.

Arnav: Khushi! What are you doing here? You came here to save my life? How could you? How could you risk your life for such a horrible husband like me? How could you? Just leave, I will not even let you get a scratch, just leave!

Khushi: Arnav ji, I am your life partner. Even though our marriage was forced, I still vowed to protect from every evil in your life. Besides, you are my life and without you there is no me, without Arnav there is no Khushi. Arnav ji, today I want to confess to you that I love you more than any other thing in the world. You are the most important person in my life. You come before amma and bauji, you come before jiji, you come before buaji. You are the only person that I need in my life. You are the person that I cannot live without, so then how I could leave you when you needed me the most. I will not let anyone harm out, before death comes over you, it will have to come over'..

Arnav puts his index finger up to her lips

Arnav: Don't you dare? Nothing will happen to you as long as your love is with, as long as your Arnav is with you. Now let us not waste time and let's get out of here before Shyam gets here.

Arnav stands up and takes Khushi's hand in his and just when they were about to finally run to live life, just about they were about to finally take their relationship to the next step, just when they were going to give their love a REAL NAME. Their world blurred and darkened

Arnav: KHUSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Plz comment guys, I will continue based on the comments please comment and like. Please buddy me for pm's

Edited by Arshifan1 - 13 years ago

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Abi.Na thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting but plz don't let anything happen to Arnav and Khushi... plz continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!
Plz continue soon, what gonna happened next, just can't wait. Plz don't do any harm to our dearest Arnav and Khushi.

send this OS to GUL. She has been asking for ideas naa.

Make me your buddy and send me PM as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update

Please continue soon

cant wait for what happens next?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh Nooo, What Happened :| 🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Come on peoples keep bringing in the likes and comments. I want more comments before i post the next part, i just have to download it but i want to wait for more responses. plz anything will do, even advice on what to do next anything will be accepted. And to those who commented

Thank you sooo much for commenting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz do make the next part and pm me.WHAT HAPPENED TO KHUSHI 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Second Part of my SS

Arnav: KHUSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arnav ran over to support his life as she fell to the ground in Arnav's lap. Arnav cried!

Arnav: Khushi wake up?

Shyam was standing in the doorway with a gun shocked. Shocked that he had missed his goal. Shocked that he had shot the person the he loved the most. Shyam runs over to Khushi and is about to touch her when.

Arnav: Don't you dare touch my wife, because of you I didn't trust her (grabbed his collar) because of you I had to sign a contract with her for a six month wedding knowing that I could not even live without for six minutes, because of you I kept on thinking about the moment when the six months were over and when the heart-wrecking moment would come. Because of you, my life is hanging onto the string of life and death. Because of you, it's all because of you. But not anymore, nor will you touch my wife and nor will you see the face of your child, because I am disowning you. You are no longer part of Raizada family you are no one's husband, no one's brother-in-law, and no one's son-in-law. Now………….

Shyam pushed Arnav's hands off of his collar.

Shyam: whoa there Arnav. Who told you that I want I want to be part of your stupid Raizada family, and what Raizada family, the family that is going to running around the streets of Delhi looking for a house, looking for food. Huh! Shocked na? Well, just in case you have not received the information, I am now the new owner of Shantivan and AR Group of Industries. And let me tell you how all this happened. That day you came back from Khushi ji's maayka. I had found out that you had transferred all of your property to Rani Sahiba and not even one penny for me, so I decided to take out a little part for myself. Those papers that Khushi ji gave you, those were part of our half-done deal. The deal was that she would make you sign the papers and I would tell you. And I assume that you know the truth now, so I have completed my part of the deal and so has Khushi ji. Don't worry, I still gave something to your di, and guess what it was. A lifetime of pain and despair. Because I will now live with Khushi ji happily without you and your di……………….

Khushi meanwhile lay in pain on the floor

Khushi: Arnav ji…… Arna…….vvv……jjj.iii

Arnav and Shyam turn to see Khushi laying in pain with a bullet in her stomach. Arnav runs over to Khushi and just as he is about to pick her up, Shyam's men come up from behind and are about to attack when Arnav grabs the gun that Khushi had been shot with.

Arnav: Don't you dare, no one will come in my way. I will take Khushi from here and no one will follow us. Hey you (looking at one of the goons) give me the key to the car. GIVE ME THE KEY DAMN IT!

The man gave Arnav the key. Arnav lifted Khusi slowly up into his arms with the gun still aiming at the goons and Shyam.

Arnav: Shyam Jha. If anything, ANYTHING happens to my Khushi. Then you will not see the sun of the next day! And that is a promise!

Arnav ran out with his life in his hands. He ran downstairs with Khushi in his arms and drove off in the car.

AT THE HOSPITAL

48 Hours Later

Doctor: Mrs. Raizada is recovering at a very steady pace, but still she is not out of danger, we will have to keep her in the ICU for another day before we can say anything about change in her condition. The bullet was shot in her stomach, and she was not brought to the hospital right after the shooting. So that worsened things up a little bit so all we can do is pray. But you can go meet her, but again I would like to remind you NO STRESS and she is unconscious right now.

Arnav is about to run into to see Khushi when he hear Shyam

Shyam: the second you take one step forward, you will see the dead body of your sister!!!!!!!!!!!

Arnav had forgotten to inform his family members about Khushi. Khushi had also left Shantivan saying that she is going to London to give Arnav ji a surprise, because she didn't want to disclose the information of Arnav's kidnap to anyone!

Arnav took his step back, and turned around to see his enemy standing right there.

Shyam: You heard me right! I will kill Rani Sahiba if you take one step forward. If you want the safety of your sister then take a few steps back because I will go meet Khushi ji first. Or else……

Arnav: Or else, or else what? You will kill di, right? You will kill your wife right? But don't forget that if you kill my di then I will not spare you. If my di even gets a little scratch, I will tear apart your life. I will make you so compelled that you will want to die but you will not get it.

Anjali: CHOTE!

Arnav feels the warm hand of his sister rise to hit him.


Why did Anjali slap Arnav?

Is Anjali the new and real villian?


Plz, plz, plz comment and like. I am really looking forward to reading all of your responses!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I hope everything is fine.

pls dont let anything bad happen to Arnav and Khushi.


What the hell? why did Anjali slap Arnav?
continue soon.

pls PM me when you update
Edited by sooryalekshmi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomeee,do continue soon 😉

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