Os we shared with each other(on precap)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav just walk in room as he does not have courage to face anyonean more

Buaji:Khushi

Amma:" Khushi yeh kya ha"

Khushi: just choke as she was hurt deep inside with his words she could feel his pain .."hum " she was not able to say anything, just walk in room it was all dark he was standing next to the window

Arnav" leave me alone"

Khushi just walk & stand next to him ,slide her hand in his ,he felt her hand was freezing & it shiver in his warm sweating palm ,he turn & look at her "hamari bhi maarchuki hai woh dekha woh ha "with other hand she pointed at a star

Arnav look at her she was into tears

Khushi" hum ko maaf kar da hum"she choked

Arnav felt she was shivering badly

Khushi : "aap tou lucky ha aap na apni maa ka saath waqat ghuzara hum "she paused look out side

Arnav" Khushi" he said politely

Khushi "aap na acha kiya hum ko daanta , aap ko tou hum ko marna chaiya tha."

Arnav: just forgot his grief he just look at her

Khushi :" hum ko tou bus dhudlaa dhudlaa se yaad ha , hum kaise ko maa bolta tha , aap ko pata ha hamara paas aik bhi picture nahi, hum na khud maa ki picture bani ha . there was a silence hum aap ko dekhai "

Arnav just shake his head in yes she didnot leave his hand just pull him with her

Khushi" woh neecha uttar da "she pointed at a bag

Arnav just with one hand taken off the bag gave her .

Khush"i hum na sab se chupa kar rakhi ha kasie ko kabhi nahi dekhai" she just sat on floor leaving his hand she was hunting something ,she taken out a box & stand walk to the bed

Arnav look at her she just open it & taken out few papers

Khushi "light on kara"

Arnav on it she sat on bed

Khushi "yeh hum na 9 saal kai umar mein banai thi ",she forward a page .. it was a childish drawing

Arnav : look at it he just touch the drawing with his hand as if wanted to feel it , Khushi forward other he just saw that it was bit better , this way she forward him 10 paper last few has only lips & eyes "why all on 26 April ?"

Khushi :" hum haar saal birthday ka din baanata hai."

Arnav: look at her your birthday is coming , khushi took back the papers from him "Let me see "

Khushi: look at him was was touching the features

Arnav : her eyes is just like you , lips too , check here her smile is like you . of course daughters are like their Maa like di is true copy maa , our daughter will be copy of you , he was very busy in comparing he said it

Khushi just stared at him

Arnav you made eyes same in every pic , i have a idea on your this birthday i will ask a sketcher ,you tell him he will sketch maa pic ,then you will have a proper pic .

Khushi look at him he was looking at all again.

Arnav : look at her as she was not speaking "what"

Khushi kuch nahi .

Arnav "did i said any thing wrong?" he just place the paper on bed move towards her "khushi"he hold her hand

Khushi: just hug him "you will never leave me as Maa promise me"

Arnav just hug her back more tight "i will never leave you "both stay like that they suddenly free each other

Khushi:"tell about your maa i told you about mine"

Arnav look at her he saw her hand he hold it "this is maa , she kept it for you " he touch the kangan

Khushi: look at him he was caress it holding her hand

Arnav "when you wear it i feel maa is there ? today morning during that public bath i just felt like childhood , when maa use to give me shower ? and i use to shout maa shampoo went in my eyes pani dalo "

Khushi: felt his eyes was again moist

breeze just made Khushi's sketch fly here & their

Arnav : "Khushi Maa" he just left her hand & quickly picked all ,she look at him he just wipe all with his shirt & almost kissed it "sorry " as it was bit dirty

Khushi : just felt she was always wrong in understanding him.

Arnav: "keep it i will frame all, we can hang all in our bedroom other wise it will be tore " he just gave her back.she just kept all back

Arnav "khushi i he look at her with embarrassment

Khushi :kya ?

Arnav:" i should apologize with "he paused

Khushi" no need to"

Arnav look at her why?

Khushi" it was my fault i was poking you ,i will say sorry to her "she just walk out "amma"

buaji: kya titlya

Arnav "hum dono ko "

Khushi "maaf kar da " she saw him standing next to her

Amma:"beta koi baat nahi , khushi na mujhe ko amma pura saal ka baad bola tha "

Khushi : look at her

Amma: "yeh muhje ko hamasha bolti thi aap meri amma nahi ha aap jiji ki amma ha , phir aik din" she paused

Arnav :"kya huwa" he was inquisitive to hear

Amma": yeh bemara hogai tab iss na muhje ko pehla baat bola tha"

Arnav look at her" see you too didnot said , meri jaan khati hoon mein bhi bol do ga Amma "

Khushi look at him he was pulling her legs ...

Amma just hide her tear as he had call her Amma indirectly

Arnav "she want very thing to be done at once "he just stare at her

Amma:" beta tum kuch bhi bolo bus khush raho"

Arnav : just look at her ..."sorry for shouting "he said and walk in

Khushi: "mujhe se bola na sorry ,shout tou muhje per kiya tha"she walk behind him

Arnav "kyun bolo tum ,per tou aur karoga shout"

Amma n buaji just smiled as they have started again

Khushi"soch la phir public shower do gai"

Arnav "in your dreams , now i know timings, i will take shower before you "

Khushi: "aap ro raha tha khushi pani do khushi "

Arnav "tum ko tou acha lag rah tha na, tumara pati ko sub iss haal mein dekha"

Khushi: "yeh tou hum na socha nahi"

Arnav " tumhara paas brain nahi ha sochna ka leya , waise tum time batado sab ladies ko ASR ko shower mein dekhna ha tou aa jai aur tum ticket lana"

Khushi "achi idea ha ASR ka show 10 rs 10 rs"

Arnav" am i so cheap "

Khushi "phir kitna maango"

Arnav: "i am your husband , you will sell me for only 10 rps"

Khushi "why other ladies see my husband ?"she realized

Arnav just look at her she was in back form teasing him he look at her hand " really i am more lucky than her she don't even remember her maa face "she was playing with the kangan and thinking some thing ..

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago


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Newbiesoapfan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very sweet Naddiya! Hope some of this happens!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very touching one Naddiya. I keep hoping some of the things that all our FF and OS and SS writers are writing be shown sometime in our show too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful dear!!
I was wondering where were you OS's through out the day really missed them😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another cute one from u... how sweet Arnav talking about his daughter looking like Khushi,making sketch for her- wht cute ideas u get !😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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emotional di.made me remember my mom who left me very early.miss u mom!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rukuswasthika

emotional di.made me remember my mom who left me very early.miss u mom!

i am very sorry dear really sorry 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so beautiful os
and so emotional also i just cried while reading it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love reading yours OS's.. Look forward to them everyday. Keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb emotional one but loved it

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