Os DI why you lie to me ?(last part at 8) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Os...Cant wait for the Next 1...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Hey this was good ... Please do continue this OS if possible ... Thanks for the PM ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
loved it! do continue its fantastic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Loved this one di...Can you continue pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
WOW!! This was just so sweet.. I hope they really go to movie with Akash and Bubbly!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

As you all asked for the next part

Khushi woke up in evening she look around

Arnav how was the movie ?

Khushi sat and on the lamp

Arnav: how was the movie

Khushi: how i came here ?

Arnav pointed at Salman khan poster "he brought you here"

Khushi: really

Arnav shake his head" ya he just came to drop you" he just on the light

Khushi what is this ?

Arnav when we were away someone opened my locker

Khushi just jump out of bed "when how why?

Arnav: look at her she was in shock

Khushi you got new as she look at a new locker

Arnav yes i got new .

Khushi: oh but who open it

Arnav:"i dont know but someone try as see this "he showed 2 keys

Khushi yeh she look at them "it was not in your wallet ,remember i asked you to keep it in"

Arnav "i remember some one had made duplicate of it "

Khushi: did he stole anything of yours ?

Arnav no i think he didnot get time as you slept and i drive back home, Mama and Mami ji was with me at that time.

Khushi oh

Arnav what

Khushi i dont remember any thing

Arnav :hmmm ok here is the key you keep it

Khushi: me you are trusting me ?

Arnav look at her "you are my wife i have to trust you"

Khushi i cannot take this responsibility, i still have to return your money if any thing else get misplace you will not let me die even . she placed the key back on his palm

Arnav: "which money"

Khushi 300 and the old loan and damages

Arnav: khushi hold her hand and placed it on her palm

Khushi give it to Di as she saw Anjali coming in

Arnav: Di tell me one thing

Anjali kya chotee

Arnav DI i misplace my things now i am asking her she is not willing to take irresponsibility.

Anjali: khushi ji your juji give me his pay and every day i gave him as he forgets

Khushi had a flash back shyam i have to beg her for my money she just hold the key"where i will keep it ?"

Arnav that is your problem

Anjali you both come for dinner she walked out

Khushi where ti keep it ?she look around

Arnav look at her she picked up the mattress to keep under it

Khushi no no she drop her idea "oh yes "

Arnav look at her she was finding some thing in her purse she taken out chain and put the key in

Khushi" when you want you take off this ok?except us no one will know where it is "she lock the locket and hide in her shirt

Arnav: became sure she was not party to him , now he had to ask Anjali why she lie to him "come for dinner"she was fixing her duppata

Khushi walk to washroom to freshen up

Arnav walked towards stairs he passed Anjali bedroom

Anjali: please tell me

Shyam Rani SB

Anjali you know for the first time i lie to chotee as i wanted to hide you , why you open his locker ?what you dont have ? what ever you want i give you money i always look after you?you cannot hide from me as i have seen you peeping in choteey room this morning

Shyam: Rani SB i told you that day your all property is mine i dont like your brother taking care of it like that .

Anjali:what are you saying ?

Shyam i want to be next of kin not your brother ,he never trust me so i was planing to take out and transfer it on my name ,dont take me wrong ,just think would you like our daughter to know that his father belong to a poor family , he cannot afford anything everything is done for her is by his mama "

Anjali i will get that for you you dont need to steal it ,khushi ji has the key .i know choteey he will never agree to transfer .


Arnav just look back as khushi poke his shoulder

Khushi"Swami you are waiting for me "

Arnav yes i was waiting for you

Khushi whisper in his ear "i made my friend sit in our room so the thief don't enter"

Arnav: laxmi

Khushi pat his shoulder you guess it right

Arnav : walk ahead as his di had herself told the thief where was the key.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~~~~~~~

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Loved it. Anjali is an idiot. Khushi is so smart and Arnav is finaly seeing the light, that his sister is a ditsy moron and that his wife is his Angel.
I wish you would write a bit more as to what he would do next.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Great update... Seems to me there's potential for part 3.. Please? Pretty please..? :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
omg...di.loved it..its an superb end...awesome
anjali is such an dumbo...

👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poonam786

Great update... Seems to me there's potential for part 3.. Please? Pretty please..? :)

use your imagination

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