OS:Her questions can wait, her pain can wait..

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Sharmila

@ongongong

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Man,that was fantabulous!!Are u having any thought of continuing it?

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Arshi143

@Arshi143

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

i loved it!!! made me wanna cry!!!! and the hand holding is just like what he did at holi! awww why why why do they have to make these two fightt!!

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gheet

@gheet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thank You all, for your comments. I might continue this, will update you guys soon.😊

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Awww! That was well written and well emoted. :)

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Loved it. You showed Khushi's possessive and protective side very well!! I felt all her emotions. I loved how she reacted after hearing the truth from Shyam, she was completely heartbroken but did not show that to Shyam. This showed her immense unconditional love for Arnav. Though I didn't like the fact that Arnav hurt himself like that. He had done the same after the ambulance chase and I didn't like that too. It was too much pain to bear. But beautiful writing!!