Heer-Ranjha act - My take...

i loved what i saw yesterday...but...

could this have been better...

Heer: Jinke pass hone ki kabar hamein hava ki laharon se milti hai...

Jinke paas aane se hamaare dil ki dhadkan tez ho jaate hain...

jinke saath rahne se hamein kisi bhi mushkil ki saamna karne ki shakti milti hai...

ranjha...unke saath hamaari shaadi hai...

(she could have stolen glances to look at Arnav when she uttered each of these lines...)...

arnav asking when to come was amiss...that sarcastic comment from kushi could also have been skipped...instead kushi could have turned around and said...

arnavji...heer abhi marnewali hai... aapko nahin...par...ranjha ko tho iss se bahut farak padta hai...and just went ahead to eat the sweet...

icing on the cake would have been...when she goes to eat the sweet...

aaj hum jahar bhi kha lein tho bhi hamein unse koi juda nahin kar sakta hai...kyunki...hamaari dadkanein ek ho gayi hain...(arnav wud be stunned...)

then arnav's act...probably when she falls down...he starts with "Khu..." then corrects himself..."Heer"...

when he tries to eat the sweet, she could have held back...and he cud have remembered her dialog earlier..."arnavji ismein shakkar hai..."...but he forcibly takes and eats it...she cud just frown a little without opening the eyes...

got it out of my head...

how did you like it ppl...please let me know...