NAFRAT BHARI MOHABBAT-Arshi OS I

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey its my first OS..
the secne continues from friday's scene..arnav grabbed khushi's shoulder..they both near poolside..
khushi was totally disturbed after listeneing to arnav's words "kyunki main tumhe iska credit nahi dena chahta tha"..she was confused on his behaviour..b4 she could ask tell him anything left her shoulder and pushed her..khushi was abt to fall but she controlled her body..they both loking into each other's eyes..
K-"humne aapke baare main itna socha..aur aapne?
A-shut up khushi..plz don't do drama!
K-natak hum kar rahe hai ki aap!(he's quite looking down angrily) aap jaisa aadmi toh sirf apne baare main sochte hai..dusre ke baare main toh bilkul bhi nahi..humne aapke baare mein itna socha..
A-(he interrupts her) itna taklif ho raha hai toh mere baare mein kyun socha?
K-humne appke baare mein isliye socha kyunki aapki yeh halat hamare wajah se hui hai..aapko hamiri wajah se takleef huii...isliye humne aapke baare mein socha..hum aapka woh dukh door karna chahte the..par koi ..
A-(interuptin) tumne mujhe aur bhi dukh diye hai..usko theek kar paogi?
K-dukh!?? kuanse dukh? bataeye
A-he grits his teeth nd is abt to leave..
she cathes his hand
K-ajj aapko batana hi padega MR.raizada ki humne appko kaunsi takleef diye hai..app hamesha ki tarah yahah se nahi jaa sakte..
meanwhile shyam was behind their door watching and listening them..he was fuming in anger and worry..arnav removed khushi's hand and left the poolside and went on to his laptop..seeing this,shyam also goes down..khushi just sat there for a while beside the pool and she recollected the sweet memories spent by him..
K-"he was the one who saved me frm those goons to save me frm that buliding..he took care of me when i was ill..everytime i had a fall he was there to catch me..he bought bangles for me..he kissed me on my cheeks..he danced with me...he laughed coz of mee..he said sorry to me..he was d one whom i started to love..BUT how did he suddenly changed?? he was changing..but what happened that he went back to his rude behaviour?? What happened to him??..nd y did he say that i have hurted him?? he knows abt me evrything! what does he kno..??????
before she could think ahead there's a knock on d door..its anji she comes in with a album in her hand..
"chottey..this is payal-aakash wedding album right frm d sangeet till the pheras..give this to khushi ji coz even she wants to see it"
khushi comes nd says "wow!..jiji's wedding album!"
she takes it frm anji's hand and sits on the bed openeing it
anji smile and leaves..arnav looking at khushi and then again engaged into his laptop..
khushi opens it..first its payal's pic then aakash, the whole gupta family and raizada family..next is the sangeet ceremony pics..its nani nd NK dancing..then manorama and buaji's dance..nd d very next page is her and arnav's pic..the full page was with their pics only..full teri-meri..she recollects d teri-meri dance.how he came on stage,how he lifter her..ho he touched her stomach..how his eyes were looking at her.."but suddenly arnav gets up nd breaks khushi's moments nd comes behind her towards the cupboard..the next page his the haldi rasam pics..its arnav and khushi's pic wherein khushi is showing the bangles to arnav..this brings a smile on her face..she rolls her hands on the pic..lyk she wanted those moments back..arnav is watching her..but nani ji's voice calling them down them for dinner breaks their moments..
she closes d album,keeps it aside nd gets up..right beside her is arnav..she sees into his eyes..he sees into her eyes..but then arnav breaks their eyelock and says" can't u listen nani is calling 4 dinner"..he leaves behind him she comes just lost in his thoughts..thinking again and again that how come he changed soo much?? y did he become soo rude??..walking slowly she reaches and sits beside arnav..food is served by HP..nd arnav starts eating..everyone is talking to arnav and eachother but khushi is lost in her thoughts..she thinks d last day when arnav wasn't rude to him..its was when he told abt her bindi in d mirror..she was in orange dress and he was in his dashing suit..(flashback:-how he came towards her nd the guest were disturbing them..)
she was eating litle and anji asked her "khushi ji are you ok?is everything alright?y r u not eating properly? did u and chottey hav a fight again?"
she doesn't reply..arnav says" everything is alright..don't worry..right khushi?"
no reply frm her..he sees the family looking at them and again asks "right khushi?" by touching her hands which were holding the spoon(which she was rooling)..she came into reality..nd said "AH!..ya d food is nyc.."..
then she lookend at arnav's hand which were on her hands..she looked at his eyes..
nd anjali (confused)- "khushi ji,are u ok?..wat are u thinking? is everything fyn..i m asking something else??"
everyone is furious.
"ya ya..everything is fyn di" khushi replied when arnav took back his hand..
everyone went back to their rooms while khushi nd payal were in d kitchen washing the utensils..
payal -"is everything really fyn between u and arnav?"
K-haan jiji sab theek hai"
P-"khushi tumhare chehra sab bata deta hai..kya hua batao?"
K-kuch nahi..sab theek hi hai..bus hum thak gaye hai..hum jate hai.."
khsuhi leaves..she thinks the next moment when arnav was looking angrily in her eyes..
K- sab theek chal rah tha..fir accanak aisa kya hua? (she thinks the whole day when she had come to RM and when d news of anji's pregnany was announced..) pehle toh woh acche the fir accanak agle din unke man main itni kadwahat kahan se aayi? beech main kya hua khushi..soch soch..kya tune unse jhagada kiya? nahi!..humne toh unse kuch nahi kaha..fir,fir kya??
she was confused..she wanted to get back her arnav who was totally meant 4 her..she wanted his love back..she wanted to win him back..what made him so rude towards her?
she reaches her room nd sees arnav sleeping on d couch..she comes in nd closes d door without making noise..she looks at his face,goes to the cupboard nd open it..
she removes d bangles which he gifted her..she has tears in her eyes..she wears one and looks her in d mirror..remebering d scene when he gifted her..when he accepted d fact that he had bought those bangles 4 her..when he was eagerly waiting to kno whether she had wore d bangles or not..
but then suddenly arnav made a move nd khushi kept d bangle inside the drawer..
A-tum kya kar rahi ho?
K-kuch bhi toh nahi!
she closes d cupboard and moves towards her bed..she lys down nd takes d blanket..arnav also sleeps..
she thinks again that what made him so rude!\???? she wanted to ask him..but she didn't d courage..
she then thinks when he married her forcefully..
k-(to herself) jiji ke shaadi ke pehle toh yeh theek the..par shaadi ke din...beech mein aisa kya hua???
she remebers each and every moment...suddenly one thing strikes her mind...
the moment when shyam had huged her..he told that he wanted to marry her..her heartbeats were raised!..she was scared..she just got up! she looks at arnav who was facing d back towards her..she thought the full moment of shyam and the change in beahaviour of arnav..
K-unhe kahin hamare aur shyamji je baare mein pata chal gaya hoga??she was holind the blanket tightly.. she recollects d moment when arnav said that he knew everything abt her..her mind..nd also her plan..the way he reacted when anjaliji said "hamari umar aapko lag jaye"...each and eveything, everything!!! ..par hum yeh pata kaise lagayein? aur hum yeh sab theek kaise karenge?
Hai devi maiya! nahi hum aapko yaad nahi kareige..aapne hi hamein iss mushkil mein dala hai..ab jo bhi karna hoga hum woh khudh kareinge..hamein sacchayi pata lagani hi hogi
hamien arnav ji ke nafrat ka karan bhi dhundna hi hoga..she keeps her head on pillow holding the blanket very tightly..closing her eyes..she was scared..she could listen her heartbeats...
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wait for the next part..i will upload it soon
precap:- arnav cannot find his locker keys(remember shyam had taken it)..he remembers yesterday's night when khushi was doing something in d cuoboard..he grits his teeth in anger..
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how was it?? do u all like it! plz reply by posting ur comments..and do share it among all Arshians..
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Sheetal(Arshi Raizada)! <3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg! Awsum.. Loved reading it :)
Kindly pm whenevr u update the next part plz! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz continue...xcited to read next...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg that was just beautiful ahhh
can't wait for next bit
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Please continue
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Superb.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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pm me da nxt part.m curious.well done
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Posted: 13 years ago
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-:PART 2:-
<...a new morning...>
khushi woke up but her eyes were swollen coz she didn't sleep properly d last night..she saw arnav was still sleeping nd she had got up very early..she pushed her blanket aside..went 2 washroom to hav a bath..nd she thought to herself
K- aaj main sacchai pata kar ke rahungi..
she came out (wiping her face with towel),saw HP in their room who had come 2 give d medicines nd water..arnav had woken up
HP- arnavji,anjaliji aapko aur khushi ji ko neeche naste ke liye bula rahi hai..aur aapko yeh dava naste ke baad lene ko kaha hai..
A-(looking for khushi) theek hai..tum jao..hum aate hai..(he sees her)
Khushi keeps d towel on bed nd goes to the cupboard to take her cbangles nd all stuff..arnav goes to washroom...
k-arrey..yeh kaise?? (she sees that her things are all messed up){remember-shyam was searching 4 d file},jarror unhe kuch dhundna hoga..par hamare saman kyun kharab kiya? chodho agar hum puchenge toh fir jhagda hoga aur woh hamein kuch na kuch kahenge..arrey haann!! woh hamein chillayeinge...shayad saccayi hi bol de!..yehi accha mauka hai..unse sacchayi ugalne ka..
she waits 4 him 2 come out of d washroom..he open d door..
A- khushi..mujhe towel dena..
K- (acting as if she's angry) hum aapke naukar nahi hai..bed par hai aake le lo
A- dekho natak mat karo..chup chap towel do
K-she closes d cupboard door harchly nd moves to d pool side..
he comes out..bends to pick his towel frm bed nd watches angrily towards khushi who is facing d back..he goes inside again..(bangs d door loudly)
she comes in and sits at her dressing table wearing her bangles,earings nd she puts her sindoor nd then her mangalsutra..she looks up to see that arnav was watching her..he was watching her beautiful face which was with no make up..her hair were open..coming on her face..he was lost in her..she slowly pushed her hair behind her ear...but then she gets up nd says
K- hum aapse kuch puchna chahte hai..
A- (goes to d cupboard,opens it)main tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab nahi dena chahta..(he sees his things messed up)wat d??
K- aapko kehna hi hoga ki..
A- (interrupting her) tumne mera saamaan ko kharab kyun kiya??..agar meinne tum hein apne cupboard mein jagah di hai toh iska yeh matlab nahi ki tum mere saamaan ko haath laga sakti ho!
K- hamne aapke saaman ko hath nahi lagaya..hum aapke saaman ko haath kyun lagayenge??
A- toh yeh sab apne aap kharab hua??
K- kharab????? kharab toh hamara saamaan kiya hai..aur woh bhi aapne!
A- wat d??!! maine?? shut up khushi..don't put ur blame on me..main janta hun ki tum darpok ho but itni..toh maine kabi socha hi nahi tha,,apni galti maan lo KKGSR!
K- hamari galti??
ther's a knock on d door..
Khushi goes 2 open d door..while arnav takes his suit out nd starts 2 wear it..
nd its payal..
P-chalo..naste ka waqt ho gaya hai..arnavji ko office ke liye late ho raha hoga..khushi tumhein dhyan rakhna chaiye
A-(taunting khushi) isse samaan kharab karne se fursat mile tab naa..
K-aapp..
P-(interrupting khushi) khushi tum apna yeh jhagd kabhi aur karna..abi neeche chalo..
K-aap chalo jiji.hum apna bag lekar aate hai..
Payal goes..khushi goes towards her bed,keeps her thing inside d bag nd gets up..arnav is also ready..arnav give a bad look 2 her nd leaves..
K- sheeh!..hamara plan toh nahi chala..ab kya?? koi baat nahi..hum kuch naya socheinge Mr.Raizada ke liye..(she also walks down)..
-:AT D BREAKFAST TABLE:-
Akash(AK)- bhai aaj aap late kaise ho gaye?
Anjali(AN)- haan chottey raat ko late soye kya?? (teasingly)
Arnav(AR)- stop it di!..aise kuch nahi hai..bas woh main api file dhundh raha tha..
Nani- arnav bitua,ab aapka gala kaisa hai?
AR-its alright..
Nani-toh aapne khushi bitiya se jhut kyun kaha? kitna dukh pahucha hoga unhein
An-nani,choteey hai hi aise!..chodiye apna nasta kijiye!
meanwhile khushi comes,keeps her bag on table nd sits beside arnav.
AN- khushi ji,aaj aapki ankhe itni suji hui kyun hai?? ab toh hamein pakka lagta hai ki raat bhar aap dono soye nahi!
every1 giggles..
A-stop it di..enough..(his phone rings)
A- yes MR. Roy( he gets up nd goes away to take d call)
K-aise bhi kaunsi baat jo inhe door jakar baat karni padh rahi hai..
Nani-khushi bitiya..aap apna nasta kijiye..akhir aapke aaj kaam bhi toh karna hai..
shyam comes down nd sees arnav talking on d phone to Mr.Roy(the lawyer)
arnav also sees him..nd walks somewhere inside talking on d phone..
shyam then moves towards d table nd sees that khushi is siting between two empty chairs..he goes nd sits besied khushi's right..
SHyam-aayeye rani sahiba aap hamre saath baithke nasta kijiye..
anji smile nd goes to his right to sit..
he's siting between khushi(on left) and anji(on right)..he then gives his devilish smile to khushi..khushi is abt 2 leave when shyam says
S-khushi ji,aap apna nasta chodh ke kahan jaa rahi hai?
K- nahi bas hamein aur nahi khana..
Nani-nahi khushi bitya aapko nasta pura karna padhega..waise bhi aapki tabyat theek nahi lag rahi..shyad raat ko na sone ki wajah se kamjhoori hogi aapko..baithiye aur nasta khatam kijiye..
K-ji nani ji...
she sits hesitately..
arnav then comes nd sees that khushi nd shyam r siting 2gether..
AR-khushi!!(he shouted)
every1 looks at him
AR- chalo office ke liye late ho raha hai..
AN- par chottey,tuhari aawaz ab theek hai..khushiji toh dopahar mein office ja sakti hai..apna dabba dena..
Shyam-bilkul sahi kaha aapne rani sahiba
AR- di,meri awaaz abhi puri tarah se theek nahi hui hai..chalo khushi..
Nani- jane dijiye anjali bitiya..ab chottey ka man office mein khushi bitiya ke bagair nahi lagta..
(every1 giggles) khushi gets up nd goes..
Shyam(to himself)-kab tak arnav? kab tak khushiji ko apne saath rakehnge..akhir ek na ek din unhe mera hi hona hai!
every1 continuous 2 eat..
b4 going out..arnav remembers that he hasn't taken Mr.Roy's file with him..
A- (to khushi)...main apna file upar bhul gaya hun..yehin rukho abhi aata hun..
K- hmm..
arnav goes upstaris..
ANjali- kya hua chottey??
arnav was abt 2 answer when
K- ji woh apna file bhul gaye hai..wohi lene jaa rahe hai..
An-accha!
he goes 2 d room,opens cupboard nd d drawer in which d keys were kept..he's then shocked 2 knw that the keys r not der..he then remembers when yestersday night khushi was doing something in his cupboar..nd then he remembers hw shyam was siting beside her in d morning..he closes d drawer in anger nd comes out shouting
A-Khushi!! khushi!!
K- ji..ab kya hua??
anji-kya hua chottey..
A- (angrily) mujhe meri file mil nahi rahi..aake dundh ke do
(gritting his teeth)
Anji- accha..jayiye khushi ji..(shyam sees this)
khushi goes upstairs,enters d room and arnav closes d door..he grabs his shoulders
Ar-meri locker ki chaabi kahan hai>??
K-chaabi?? kaunsi chaabi..hamein nahi pata..
AR-jhut mat bolo..tum hi raat ko mere cupboard mein kuch kar rahi thi..aur subah saara saaman messed up tha..bolo kyun liya?
K-KYYAAA>????? raat ko..woh toh hum hameri chudiyan..
AR- tumhara bahana kaam nahi karega..bolo usne maanga tha naa chaabi? bolo?? woh file chahiye thi naaa...say it damit!
K- kaunsi file aur kisne maangi??? aap kiski baat kar rahe hai..
[(shyam was listening 2 their talks nd rushes towards anjali..
Shyam- rani sahiba..rani sahiba..
ANjali- ji kahiye..
(he removes d keys frm his pocket)
shyam- hamein yeh chaabi arnavji ke kamre ke bahar giri mila..aap jara jakar de dengi..mujhe thoda kaam hai..
AN- chottey ke kamre ke bahar,aur yeh kaunsi chaabi hai..
shyam-aap woh sab chodiye aur jaldi se jayiye..
AN- jee theek hai!]
A- Don't lie khushi,main tum jaisi ladkiyon ko acche tarah se janta hun..tum kisiko bhi dokha de sakti ho..kya laga tha tumhein tum mujhe dokha dogi?? mujhe?? woh bhi uske liye! UNbelievable..
(tears rolled down frm khushi's eyes)
K- aap hamein chor keh rahe hai?? aap humpar shaq..??
[there's a knock on d door]
Anjali- chottey,chottey! darwaza kholo,chottey
arnav leaves her..she turns and wipes her tears ..
arnav open d door..
AR- ji di,khahiye
AN- woh hamein yeh chaabi tumhara room ke samne giri hui mili..kya yeh tumhari hai??(she shows d keys 2 arnav)
AR- haan di,yeh meri chaabi hai..thank u!
anjali smiles and was abt 2 leave when she sees khushi who is facing her back towrds them and standing
AN-khushi ji,app dono late ho rahe hai..chottey agar tumhein tumhari file mil gayi ho toh tum office ja sakte ho! she smiles and leaves down..
(shyam who is watching dis..is in relief..)
arnav then goes towards the cupboard,opens his locker nd takes d file..
AR- (to khushi) chalo..
ther's no reply frm her..she is still crying..arnav closes d door..nd tells again
AR- can't u listen?? chalo..
khushi wipes her tears nd follws him..
they come out of the house...he open's his door nd sees khushi who is still crying..he sits inside..she also sits..
AR- seatb(he was abt 2 say seatbelt)
b4 he could complete khushi had already put d seatbelt..she keeps her bag on her laps nd wipes her tears..
on their way..khushi remembers to arnav's harsh words..nd finally tells 2 herself
K-bas!! (to herself) ab hum aur nahi jhelenge..humne soch liya hai ki hamen kya karna hai..
they reach d office..khushi gets out frm car nd walks in..arnav removes his laptop bag nd files frm backseat nd moves behind her..
AR- khushi tum..
b4 he could complete..she walks towards d canteen nd akash comes nd says arnav abt their meeting with new clients..
Akash nd arnav were in meeting while khushi was busy prepairing food..
its lunch time..nd every1 was having food..
arnav was in his cabin..waiting 4 khushi 2 come go give him food..
but khushi on d other side sends a servant 2 give him his lunch..
arnav comes down to meet khushi..but he's shocked 2 kno that khushi had already left 4 home..
khushi reahes home nd moves towards her room..
nani and anjali are shocked
An-aaj fir lagta hai,yeh dono ne jhagda kiya hai..
nani- aap bilkul sahi keh rahi hai anjali bitya..isliye humne is heer-ranjha ke liye kuch naya socha hai..jisse yeh dono kareeb aa sake..
ENDD!
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aage kya hua?? kya hai nani ji ka naya plan? kya arnav khushi ke beech saari mushkilen chlali jayengi?? kya khushi pata kar payegi arnav ke gusse ka karan? akhir khushi ne apne kamre mein jakar kya kiya?? kya shyam kamyab ho jayega? kya arnav ko sacchayi pata chalegi??
Kya..?
there r many such questions running over ur mindd..
keep waiting 4 d next part to get ur answers!
-Sheetal(arhsi raizada)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i just read both the parts!!!!!!
they r really fab!!!!!!!!!!
i loved them!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do continue!!!!!!
thanx 4 PM!😊 AND keep them coming!😊😆

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