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Hello everyone! Thank you everyone for commenting and liking my previous works, I hope you enjoy this as well. 😊 I'm still in the process of writing the update for my SS: A Surprise but I just got the idea for this and decided to write it. Enjoy and please leave me likes and comments!
The chilly air pricked at his exposed skin as he pulled his jacket closer to his body and walked briskly. He put one foot in front of the other, walking robotically, not knowing or caring where he went, where he ended up. With each step ahead, he felt his life crumble behind him. Each step led him farther and farther away from his past. A past that he once had done so much to run from. A past that he would now give up his future to have.

Weak streaks of light illuminated his face every few yards as he continued his march into the unknown. His pale face contrasted deeply with the darkness that lay predatorily around him, threatening to consume him whole. His features made him look a sickly man, one without any life, as if all the soul and happiness in him had been sucked out. There seemed to be nothing human about him. And yet, there was. For hidden in those cold, stony features lay beautiful, soft brown eyes that gave sight into his broken life and his shattered soul.

These beautiful eyes showed his anguish, his pain, his love for those he had lost. For those he would never see again. These eyes were the most vulnerable part of Arnav Singh Raizada. It had been with these eyes that he had witnessed his mother, father and sister committing suicide, ending not only their lives, but also the good memories they had shared with him. He had then known only pain. His eyes had hardened after this, not allowing the beauty of life to delude him from the fact that though life was beautiful, death was ugly. Death was the ugly part of nature that once comes, never leaves. His eyes had not softened again until he had met someone. Khushi Kumari Gupta had softened this man's beautiful yet cold eyes once again.

She had walked into his life. A ray of hope and warmth after the darkest of storms. She had walked, no fallen into his life as an angel sent from above, and made a place in his heart. With every memory of pain, she had added a memory of love, of care, of passion. She had taught him that life was meant to be lived and enjoyed, not endured. She had taught him that death was inevitable and yet had to exist. Life was more precious, more beautiful because it was so limited. Any moment could have been their last. She had broken down the walls that he had built around himself, exposing him to emotions, leaving him feeling raw and exposed. Her lively and chaotic nature had lit up his life. Only she had the ability to make him smile, to cry, to laugh, to hate, and to love.

He stopped suddenly as her thoughts consumed him. No, he couldn't bear it, the pain, the hurt. It was all too much. The moon shone down on the man in the suit sinking down on his knees in the middle of an empty street in Delhi. Seconds and minutes ticked by yet the man continued to sit on the floor in the same position, as if he had no more strength to move, no more strength to carry himself. After what seemed like ages, the strange man lifted his head, looking up at the sky. Three stars shone down on him as he allowed himself to finally let go of his emotions. "Khushi."He whispered into the wind, his husky voice breaking as he stared at the stars so far away, his tears cascading down his face, revealing his broken and tarnished soul.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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R E S : )

Yayyy im first!🥳

OMG that was so sad! So emotional and it felt so real!😭

Arnav's amma and babuji killed themsleves!!?😲 and Anji commited suicide aswell!😳

Very sad and depressinggg! but loved how you wrote it, Its wonderful!😳

Thanks for the PM and keep writing! : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

R E S : )


Yayyy im first!🥳

OMG that was so sad! So emotional and it felt so real!😭

Arnav's amma and babuji killed themsleves!!?😲 and Anji commited suicide aswell!😳

Very sad and depressinggg! but loved how you wrote it, Its wonderful!😳

Thanks for the PM and keep writing! : )

Thank you so much!!!!!! I really really appreciate your comment love 😊 And, yes, I've always had this suspicion that perhaps the cause of Arnav's parents' deaths were because of themselves. Thank you so much again! 😃
Edited by siddy9171 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭😭👏👏thanks...great job...very sad...😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was heart-wrenching! I cried... 😭 Loved it, in a sad, angsty way!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omfg. she commited suicice? and khushi's gone too? o god... that's so sad!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like this sentence. What an apt description of Khushi and her power.

Her lively and chaotic nature had lit up his life.
Edited by Inked - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..you hit the right chords!!! I'm a sucker for tragic stuff, and this is simply beautiful!!!! thumbs up!!

-Mahrukh
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First his both Parents,

Then his sister and then the precious Khushi!!

Oh Lord, i don't blame him for being so stone hearted!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 Oh, heart-wrenching to see ASR like this... 😔
but nice writing. 👍🏼

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