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Posted: 13 years ago
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Khushi was sitting talking to laxmi heard bang of the door she saw him drop him self on the bed she peep in"kya huwa ha tabiyat to thek ha ,hum kyun fiqar kara ,un na kai thi hamari "look at her wrist with burn & cut mark.she waited,when he didnot move she walk in he was moving his head as if he was having night mare or pain she just slowly ask"aap thek ha"he didnot reply she sat & placed her hand on his forehead "maa please make me sleep like childhood "she in shock "hum khushi" he murmur "i wanted to say to her now your kangan sound will make me sleep but i".she look at himin shock "maa it just sound same as it sound on your arm,will she ever make me sleep peacefully".she just pull blanket on him it make more sound "i havn't slept for last 3 days please maa " she just placed her hand on him like a maa does pat him little the sound made him sleep as she stop he moved she sat & pat again she look at the kangan "maa's ka hai yeh maa ka hum aanat nahi hai hamara paas maa hai "


(for my maa as her bangles sound do same thing to me , and off the record i always say to my maa i will take your bangles.she says i will give you better but i say no your is best . Happy birthday ammi)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u r truly creative 👍🏼 👏
loved it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWWW...Tht was LOVELY❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb os.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome stuff Naddiya...

I will forgive CV's for ruining the Kangan scene if they show something like this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yesterday arnav noticed her bangle n chan chan music i was thinking ke koi kangan se related OS likhe n see u wrote and very emotional one Short scene but loved it .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum 😊😊😊
u r sooo gud writter
👍🏼👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so so sweet..say happy birthday to aunty from me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful nadz love u gal ❤️

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