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(totally rubbish mind you)

khushi fix her bed

Arnav come in room

Khushi no

Arnav saw mami standing with her binoculos "khushi sorry na ok if you say i will hold my ears "he hold

Khushi: got he is again acting "i said till everyone will forgive us we will not stay together you go and sleep in"

Mami: oh

Arnav: look at her in confusion

Khushi: aap ko acting karan ki zaroorat nahi ha

Arnav: look at her face it was straight "you are coming with me right now "

Khushi i am not

Arnav saw mami talking to mama ji and mami left" go to hell"

Khushi: look at him "i am in hell, you married me and not telling me the reason ."

Arnav:why dont you leave the hell ? as i will not tell you the reason even if you die

Khushi: ok fine i will die now , your this was stopping me

Arnav: you can take it off and go i will not stop you,

Khushi: she in shock look at him "if i die i will not be orphan i will be with my amma babuji up there"

Arnav: i just dont want to see your face in morning that is final ,just get lost of my life .he said and walk to bed room , he was not able to get ready of her cute face in his shirt ,he just try to sleep he twisted here and there he saw the box he saw the letter " i hate her maa , for Di i had to give her your kangan sorry maa forgive me "

Khushi saw him in tears she could not take it more she just waited for him to sleep as he slept she taken off the kangan and kept it on the pillow and walk out of the room. where she was going she didnot knew


next morning

Arnav heard mami talking to some one he look out she was looking at bed

Mami: lagta ha dosti hogai

Mama: it is bad manners to see in someone's bed room

Mami: she is not here since 12 she must be in bedroom

Arnav just sat 12 he recollected what he said to her in anger

Mama:you again came to see them i asked you not to come

Mami:smiled i am 007 when i saw she is not here then i went to sleep

Arnav just waited for them to go he just ran to her bed he saw the kangan on the pillow he picked it up " khuhsi" he walk in to check the washroom she was not there too" dammit it was all my fault i shouted at her "he just walk out of the RM"where she can go ? not to her home, but i should check there too" he drive straight there he bell

Buaji: NK kon ha

Arnav: khuhsi ha

Buaji: kon khushi we dont know any khushi

Arnav just drive away without asking other question, " i cannot go home if i will go home what will i tell to every one?" her crying face with pain started coming in front of him "she is scared of dark how she left in dark "he was roaming here and there no sign of her "what if any thing happen to her " he had flash back of goonds and the ambulance " i will ,," he paused "why i am getting worried i dont care for her i hate her ?" he felt his tears are dropping ." she did right to get insulted daily to face all these thing daily she left the Hell " he was just having flash back how her amma slapped her , how mami and other insulted her ,and how cutely she looked at him when he placed the kangan .he hold the kangan "it was for her, i didnont meant to say her that ,.what what if she really try to do something silly , as she really dont have any one of her own ". he hit the brake as he was not able see any thing

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav: blink his eyes as he was not able to see "Khushi where to find you"

Khushi: why you want to find me?

Arnav :look back she was lying "TUM"

Khushi: please dont shout let me sleep.by the way if i am not sitting next to you you drive very fast.

Arnav: just step down and open back door and pull her out "what you think of your self?"

Khushi with closed eyes "what i did now?"

Arnav:why you left poolside?

Khushi: firstly Mami was again and again coming and spying.

Arnav you could not come and sleep in room? and why you didnot woke me?

Khushi: i came to wake you but you were not getting up , i asked you where to sleep you said not in room go some where else,hum itni raat ko kahan jata

Arnav: you came and slept here all alone you where not scared

Khushi i was not alone yeh tha i hold it she showed her mangalsutar

Arnav: how you open car? his eyes moist

Khushi: pin

Arnav: and by the way if any one else had taken the car

Khushi: i knew you only use this car

Arnav: and why you left this ? show her the kangan he just decreased the gap

Khushi: aap na bola tha i dont deserved it

Arnav: i said and you listen since when you have started listening me ?

Khushi:aap ko problem kya ha ,why i listen you? why i take off the kangan ? why i slept here?

Arnav: sub

Khushi: hata mami is not here

Arnav: just decreased the gap didnot left a single inch between them "stop me if you can"

Khushi just push him ,he didnot move a inch ,hold her hand which was on his chest placed the Kangan

Arnav: if you ever try to take this off i will

Khushi: kya

Arnav: i will not leave you,chalo beto aaga

Khushi: no

Arnav:why?

Khushi i dont want to go in Hell and that with you

Arnav: picked her up "just want this i know that"opened the door

Khushi:why you were crying and worried for me?

Arnav: i was not

Khushi you were he tied her belt

Arnav: walk to his side and seated ,he was relaxed .she cannot leave me .he seated .

Khushi:why you were crying ?she started again

Arnav: i was practicing if you

Khushi: turn to him what if i died

Arnav: shhh placed his finger on her lips

Khushi: kya shhh aaj aap bola raat ko tou aap hum ko bol raha tha go from hell now why you want to take me back

Arnav: lets go back then i will tell you

Khushi:nahi i will not go to your room

Arnav: it is yours too he said politely as he was not at all in mood to shout on her.

Khushi: aap ka ha hum tou aap kia patni nahi hai ,he didnot listen and start car ,dekha hum na bola na hum nahi

Arnav: i will tell you in room why i want you back no can i drive ?

Khushi: just sit quietly sona bhi nahi data ha pata nahi kon se paap ki saaz haan yeh ... just rested her head with the back and closed her eyes

Arnav:smiled

They reached home

Khushi woke up as the car stop "first tell me "

Arnav: khushi you come with me i will tell you i swear

Khushi no she placed her hand on her belt

Arnav just walk her side open the door , opened her belt "if you want i do it here then ok "kissed her neck

Khushi:just look at him

Arnav: who had open the belt was moving out "want more here or you are coming in bedroom"he just brush his lips with her's

Khushi: just closed her eyes he just pick her up as he knew she will not be able to walk now :"let me take you to room and welcome you in my style"



Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its nice! Waiting for the next part..!!!!
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Awww U knw naddiya i knew u were gng to write something or other on this track!! if nt i would have asked u!! The reason is so realy and dare nt call it rubbish! Its awsm please upate fasttt
Edited by poojawal_Pooja_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon
it was really good!
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Love it continue soon plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww it was so sad!!
Please update the next part ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...how painful...Arnavs suffering making her suffer n shes suffering all together...poor souls...
awesome work Nadiyya
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Hey naddiya.. this one's too good... Please continue..
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very sad
awesome update naddiya,loved it

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