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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

awww...so sweeettt..good os..☺️

Thank you so much..! 😃


Hey, thank you...😃



Thank you very much...😳

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika

so so so so sweet.refreshing after watching frustrating episodes😊


Aww...! Thank you so much for leaving a comment...🤗

P.S. I like your DP...they look so cute...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: arshiforeva

UR amaaazing !! :)

I so wish this happens <3 but don't think it'll happen soon!!! :)
continue writing im sure the CV's will be amazed to c dat sum1 can write better than them :)

Awww...! Thanks! 😃

Yeah, we have to wait...hope its not for too long...😳

Aww...such a lovely comment...thank you very much...🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: zaniax

Brilliant os..i loved all those dialouges

And the last part was sooo cute😳

Thank you so much...😳

The last part was added at the last moment...i wasn't sure about it...glad i added it...😆

Thanks once again! 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zafi

Fantastic OS.⭐️

Loved it.
Thanks.😊

Thank you veyr much...😳

Thanks for reading, liking and commenting...xx 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

Hey all. Thanks you for liking my first ever OS on ArHi. Made me really happy. Well, i thought of posting all my works in one thread for the easy access (plus, it will look tidy as well...😆)

I am having a hard time writing another story on them. I keep getting few scenes of running in my mind and that is how i thought to write "short scenes" on them.. Maybe in future i will write another story on them but for now i have written 3 short scenes.

The Shirt.

She unwillingly got ready for the "muh dikhayi rasam"'donning the lehenga which Anjali gave her for the rasam' She was looked herself in the mirror and realized that she hasn't worn the jewelry yet'she walked to the bed but stopped in the midway as her payal loosened from her ankle and lay on the floor'she bent to pick it up'but ripped her blouse in the process'she was surprised as the loss'she had to be downstairs any moment and here she created a mess'.she quickly got into one her husband's white see through shirt without giving a thought about it' In a typical Khushi Kumari Gupta style she fetched a needle and thread for herself and started stitching the blouse as quickly as possible' but the shirt she wore started troubling her'it was too long for her petite body' She pulled the sleeve up which was disturbing her and in the process she ripped it as well'.she was scared now...as she realized she tore HIS shirt'she was scared of the consequences' Still she continued with her stitching spree'.

He walked in to check if she was ready'hearing the footsteps Khushi jumped in horror and hid herself behind the curtain' He looked around and called out her name when he didn't find her'"Khushi?" he looked on'"Haan Arnavji? Hum yahan hain'" she answered from her hiding spot' "I can hear you but cannot see you'.where are you?" he looked confused'she slowly came out of the curtain pulling her shirt closer with an embarrassed look' He looked at her forgetting about the guests, the functions, the people waiting for them'everything'.he dropped the box of Kangan from his hands'.he slowly walked up to her scanning her every expression' She could sense his gaze on her'she looked at him coyly'" Sabke saamne aise jaane ka iraada hai?" he said in a husky voice'sending chills down her spine'he was so close to her, she could count his heartbeat' "N'Na..Nahi woh'" she was stammering'she was uncomfortable at their closeness'"Woh, hum'"'"Sshh"'he shut her up putting his index finger on her glossy lips'she looked at him'he held her by her arms and pulled her closer'moving his head towards her ear'"Tum aise bhi bohat acchi lag rahi ho'.jee chahta hai tumhe aise hi dekhta rahoon..lekin kya karoon'sab hamara neeche intezaar kar rahe hain..aur main tumhe aise toh neeche nahi lejaasakta na'sab apne hosh kho baithenge.." he smirked'she looked at him with a surprised look'not believing at his comment..she pushed him softly and asked him to wait out while she gets ready and closed the door not letting him to speak'


The Letter

After doing her daily chores she lingered into her room'it was late'he had already slept after having another round of argument with her for no reason' she was fed up now'she couldn't take his hatred anymore'every time she asked for a reason he ignored her'she wanted a reason for his behavior'she looked at him sleeping soundly on his cozy bed'she took her pillow and duvet and made her bed on the floor'he pitied on her and allowed her to sleep inside the room..but the condition was, she would sleep ON the floor'she made her bed and sat there'looking at him sleep..he looked peaceful'like a kid who gets tired after a whole tiring day'and hits the bed'.she had forget the last time he looked so peaceful'she pulled the duvet and was ready to sleep when her eyes darted towards the letter he held in his hand'curiosity made her take the letter from him and give it a read' It looked like it was written a very long time ago'she looked at him before reading it'" Meri pyari bahu, abb tak toh tumhe chote ke swabhav ke baare mein pata chal gaya hoga' Lekin main tumhe chote ke baare mein kuch bataana chahti hoon' Chote ka gussa uske naak par rehta hai'lekin tum usske gusse darr mat jaana'who jitna upar se sakht(tough) hai utna hi andar se narm(soft) hai'Uske gusse ko sehlena aur uske pyar ko sooth sameth wapas dena.. Uska hamesha khayal rakhna."

After reading the letter she felt herself more close to him. She felt like the letter helped her in understanding him better. She faintly smiled and looked on.

The Kangan

She was struggling with her bangles, trying to wear them. In the process her mother-in-law's kangan slipped and flung into the pool. She looked on tensed and bewildered. She quickly bent in & slid her hand into the cold pool water. The kangan was out of her reach. She bent in a little more and suddenly slipped into the pool splashing the water all over. Hearing the noise Arnav came out of the restroom to check on the problem. He was shocked to see her struggling to get out of the pool. "khushi?" he came running making her look up. "Khushi, tum yahan kaise gir gayi?" he questioned whilst pulling her out. "Who hum'" she couldn't complete the sentence as she was still concerned about the kangan. He pulled her out and cupped her face. "Tum theek ho?" she looked at him completely forgetting about the kangan. "Jee Arnavji, hum theek hai" she nodded allowing him to heave a sigh of relief. " Tum yahan kya kar rahi thi?" his tone had a sense of confusion'" Who hum maa ke kangan nikaalne ki koshish kar rahe thay" she pointed at the kangan which lay in the pool'He looked at the kangan and then at her'He took the kangan and looked at her. "Tumhe pata hai tum paagal ho. Agar tumhe kuch hojaata toh?" he held her wrist making her wear the bangle. "Hosakta hai hum paagal hain'lekin hamey kuch hua toh nahi na. Hamey kuch nahi hoga'" she shook her head convincingly. He sighed at her childish innocence and looked into her eyes. "Mrs. Khushi Singh Raizada, abb tumhari zindagi sirf tumhari nahi rahi, you belong to me now, isliye tumhe apna khayal pehle se bhi zyada rakhna hoga. I can't afford to lose you, EVER. Samjhi?" he smiled while she looked at him lovingly.

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That is it for now.

Hope you guys like the update.

Leave your comments/ criticism's.

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Love 😳

Bushra. xx

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index

OS- Realization - Pg 1

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2803169

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Short Scenes Update 1 - Pg 3

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2803169&PID=53905472&#53905472

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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st chap--realisation...bushy u chalo aurat...u gt me 2 read the 1st OS without realising this is the sme 1 u had tld me abt sumtym bk...wen i had promised i wudnt read it til u do tasha's OS..ab maine par liya toh tum tasha ka OS bhi likho...lol..
it ws gr8...right 4rm the beginning wer she is expressing her feelings n he is jus listening i hpe tht does happen... becos she indeed does hav a point he didnt bother 2 confront khushi abt the whole terrace scene... if onli he did al this wud hav been avoided...ufff shyam annoys me yt agen...thnk god arnav reached on time n khushi realised he loves her...i liked the ending wer he's apologising n she's refusing up until he confesses his love n she cnt say no 2 him...it was so cute n so like khushi ...lol
short scenes wer gr8 2...wish dey wer longer bt jus glad dey didnt hav ne1 else in thm... i liked the letter 1 in particular...cos it was a letter 4rm arnav;s mum 4 khushi...😃do mre n if u can put ur fav character in2...hello hi bye bye...LOL
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

1st chap--realisation...bushy u chalo aurat...u gt me 2 read the 1st OS without realising this is the sme 1 u had tld me abt sumtym bk...wen i had promised i wudnt read it til u do tasha's OS..ab maine par liya toh tum tasha ka OS bhi likho...lol..

LMAO... Yayy...I won i won i won...😆 Arey, the Tasha OS is in process...i just can't seem to finish it...😕 Will complete it for sure...

it ws gr8...right 4rm the beginning wer she is expressing her feelings n he is jus listening i hpe tht does happen... becos she indeed does hav a point he didnt bother 2 confront khushi abt the whole terrace scene... if onli he did al this wud hav been avoided...ufff shyam annoys me yt agen...thnk god arnav reached on time n khushi realised he loves her...i liked the ending wer he's apologising n she's refusing up until he confesses his love n she cnt say no 2 him...it was so cute n so like khushi ...lol
Thanks...i thought u wouldn't read it at all in the first place...glad u read and comment karne ka kasht bhi uthaaya...😆 Shyam is also good looking...u shud consider making him ur hubby...what say? 😉🤣
short scenes wer gr8 2...wish dey wer longer bt jus glad dey didnt hav ne1 else in thm..Yuvi..these are short scenes...how could u wish them to be longer? 😆i liked the letter 1 in particular...cos it was a letter 4rm arnav;s mum 4 khushi...😃do mre n if u can put ur fav character in2...hello hi bye bye...LOL Yup, the letter one is my fav too...i liked the scene as well where Anjie reads the letter...😳
LOL..yh i should dedicate a scene to my fav Manorama Bond *dhishkiaaun* 😎😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful...Enjoyed it a lot..👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

Beautiful...Enjoyed it a lot..👏👏

Aww, thank you so much...😳

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