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pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

liked this? no I loved it! (sorry for the really cliched line 😆)

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Raj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

so touching...i luv the bit where her mum and dad gave her their blessings...great os thank you :)

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AnnieARS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow!!! her feeling were so nicely shown, it felt i was myself feeling them. a tear dropped from my eye...I cannot bear her pain

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

it was a hatke attempt and i loved it...
the way she was talking to her parents and was finding solace and seeking answers and support and strength from them and then at last spotting her inlaws...i loved it...
i love such moments which makes us go tearyeyed and feel compassion and affection for K...
penned it down beautifully👏

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Chhaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hey!
It was just lovely. Just loved the way u wrote it. And especially the parents part.

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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

short, but not just sweet... really amazing! it gave me goose bumps :D thanks for the PM

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HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

OMG OMG OMG HER IN LAWS ae supporting her too That's one of my fav OS <3 <3

well written i jst love the way u shown two other Stars shining next to her parents THAT WAS AMAZING

it was alil bit short LOL

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Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wowww this was so beautiful OS.. khushi's loneliness was so touched.. loved the last bit... 2 shining stars which were not only her parents but also her in laws blessing her..