Open Letter to Lalit Mohan and Gul Khan - Update2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Lalit Mohanji, Gul Khan and IPKKND team:

Feb 23rd, 2012:

Arnav Singh Raizada owns a Fashion House, is a business tycoon - he needs NEW and more impressive wardrobe, multiple pairs of shoes, etc.
His haircut and stuble need to be short and crisp as in few of those 'mime' episodes.
Need chic ASR/KASR now.

(I am willing to finance - seriously - please contact me if you wish...)




Today: 21st Feb 2012:

LM, GL and IPKKND Team,


Looks like you guys do take our posts seriously -

Thanks for giving us our 'Sherni' back within 48 hrs today!




Original post on Feb 16th, 2012:

What the CVs could have done better to keep the show's pace and interest on track -

1. Aakash and Payal's wedding day is going to be about three weeks long - they could have broken down events over several days.

2. Arnav and Khushi's soft romance could have lasted a little longer with Payal getting married and Khushi coming over for lots of post-wedding 'rasms'.

3. Arnav could have spent more time exploring his own emotions about Khushi. He could have spent more time trying to find out how Khushi felt about him (Of course, it had be vague from her side so that the current misunderstanding could happen later).

4. Then when it seemed like everything was going to fall in place the 'Big Dhamaka' happens and current events unfold (of course few months from now).


All this would have given some extra months for the show at very high TRP's and without feeling rushed with events in one day (of the show).

What the CVs should do now:

(I am not going to comment on storyline but few suggestions)

1. No matter what do not build up mistrust between the two of them - that never goes away - vague situations can handle the lack of clarity of one's feelings.

2. ABSOLUTELY NO PHYSICAL ABUSE of Khushi - these days it turns off your female viewers

3. A subtle but strong Khushi - she needs to build up a love relationship with gradual trust with Arnav now

4.Better dressed khushi - combo of suits, sarees (simple ones like in teri Meri) and some modern outfits (Oh yes, and little more variety for Arnav)

4. Show Arnav falling in love with this new stronger Khushi with the spark she always had now being taken to a new level

5. Send Khushi for further education, make her more sophisticated but still true to her heart; and make her a stronger working woman with Arnav - that just kills Shyam

6. Ultimately show Shyam's reform - have him realize that he was infatuated with Khushi and actually falls in love with his wife OR ultimately expose Shyam, find a new, right person for Anjali to fall in love with (Yippeee adds another six months to the show!)

7. In the meantime, develop Akash-Payal- Mamiji story so everyone gets the masala and leads get a break from shooting 😊

This will take the show for longer than two years to achieve.

The reason we all love this show on international level is because

1. It was no nonsense
2. It has a strong female character with the male lead
3. It was very romantic - who wants too many tears these days?
4. We all like to see people problem solve but want to see 'Nayee Soach' with Male-Female leads joining together to fight evil
5. Those eye-locks and 'Rabba Ve' add plenty of those reagrdless...
6. All is well that ends well!

Producer and Directorji,

Kya aap itna kar sakte ho?

We love you for this fantastic show and the fantastic team of actors you have - editing and mixing could be better.

Cheers!
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chupachup thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amen to everything youve said..i just want the hatred to be over...even if they work together as friends to unmask shaym..hatred part is unbearable..
Edited by chupachup - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Agree!! Except, I don't want shyam to turn into a positive character...just want him to be exposed n out! he has hurt everyone n tried to kill his wife n khushi's father...that's unforgivable. other than that, agree.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rin630

Agree!! Except, I don't want shyam to turn into a positive character...just want him to be exposed n out! he has hurt everyone n tried to kill his wife n khushi's father...that's unforgivable. other than that, agree.



Okay, I will modify with an option - check it out!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You go girl! šŸ‘šŸ¼

This show should not become like the others!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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As an international viewer, I 100% agree! Despite loving Arnav and Barun's acting, Khushi was the main character who attracted me to the show! Would hate for her to lose her feistiness which is the very essence of her character. I watch the show because I find it modern and the chemistry between these two is AMAZING! And yes, no domestic violence EVER!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Couldn't have said it better myself šŸ‘šŸ¼.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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posting hti on Lm's page.

Well said!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maybe they should just hire you to do their market research and write the show for them

let the people do their job, your job is to enjoy the show, if you dont... you have the remote in your hand, switch to a show better suited to your taste
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well said...

But no way do I want Shyam turning over a new leaf! After showing him as a psycho, it would be really tough to explain the change in heart!

I'd rather Anjali comes out of this stronger, and without a man... maybe his child survives, and she learns independence. Right now, she's too clingy with Shyam. This jhatka might actually give her strength eventually.

Physical violence - no way!! Also no rona dhona!

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