A&K OS - It was always about you... Last Part Pg 4

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Love the twist at the end. Really enjoyable OS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Hey Sara!

That's one awesome chapter! Its such a refreshing change from the usual stories! 🤗

I simply loved the OS. . .you've done a brilliant job in portraying the characters of Khushi n Arnav. . . their vulnerabilities. . . their fears! Everything has come across beautifully! =)

Add me to your PM list. . .and PM me if you write anything in future! 😳

-Sharmi

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

aww I loved the concept as well as your writing style😍Prom nights always add to the dreaminess : ) PM please n continue!😳

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Sara 🤗 I adore you completely!!

Pretty please continue this, It was soo good, loved all the characters!!

P.S. love you

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@..Winter_Soul..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hey guys! Thank you so much for your response :) This story is based on my personal experience; hence there is no continuation. However I might write something along these lines in the future but as of now, there is nothing I can write that will lead to its continuation :)

Much Love...
Sara

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awesome bt poor khushi ! Do continue n plzz send me a pm :)

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

First proof read it once again,second its high time you continued an os and turned it into a SS/FF. I'm not giving you a choice, continue this. I'm sure other readers have also told you this but you should really continue this.

I think the twist was pretty smooth and amazing. I started out believing that the description of the girl matched Khushi and did a double take during the twist. Good one.!