OS: Will you be able to do this? 2 Part Updt (Pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PLease update soon, it was wonderful
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Like it a lot. Please do update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update 👏
it was realistic,simply superb
plz update soon ,waiting for ur next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really gud...pls continue wud luv to read the 2nd part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW mindblowing... to tell u the truth this is exacly wat i was thinking... sm1 will definetly disturb them AGAIN before arnav could accually say something.
btw plz pm me the next part.
i'lladd u to my pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you have to write a part 2 this was nice and the nok jhok was there pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was so good ,plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os dear
pls continue and pm me
da precap is really interesting wnt to find out more...will she kiss arnav???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So here is the second part.

Please do ignore any grammatical mistakes...kyunki aj grammar ki chuti hai!!...Jokes apart b/c i dont have the time to read it again!!!

I will make the english translation for the dialogues later on!!!



At night Khushi was trying her best to sleep, but the kiss that Arnav had placed on her cheek kept on repeating in her mind, as if somebody had set the replay button. She tried her best to ignore her thoughts of the laad governor. She kept tossing from one side to another without realizing that Payal was now awake.

Payal: "Kya huwa khushi? Hum kab say dekh rahay hain kah jab say tum ghar ayi hokuch pareshan si lag rahi ho. Sab theka tuo hai?"

Khushi whispered to herself: "Kaisay batayay jiji app ko?...Kuch bhi theak nahi hai!"

Payal: "Pata nahi Khushi tumhay kya ho gaya hai aj kal'.lekin please humein ab sonay do kyun kah Havan main jana hai kal. Aur tum bhi ab chup kar kay so jao."

Payal had fallen asleep after sometime. But Khushi's dhak dhak and thoughts could not be controlled. She got up from the bed to go to the kitchen. She knew that the only way to stop this was to make some jalebis.

She was walking towards the kitchen when her mobile rang. Khushi saw Arnav's name blinking on it. Should she pick up the phone? She was really confused. And why was Arnav calling her at this time of the night?

Khushi: "Ab hum kya karein?" She picked up Arnav's call with trembling hands. "Hello."

Arnav: "Hi Khushi. Tum abhi tak soi nahi? Ya tumhay neend nahi arahi? Kya tum meray baray main tuo nahi soch rahi thi?" The smirk quite visible in his voice.

"Hum app kay baray main kyun sochnay lagay. Aur wasiay bhi hum tuo so hi rahay thay." Khushi answered Arnav stuttering.

Arnav: "Tum jhoot bool rahi ho. Kyun kah mujhe tumhari awaz main tumhara darr saaf sunayi dae raha hai."

Khushi: "hum kyun jhoot bolayn gay app say? Aur hum kisi say dartay wartay nahi hain."

Arnav: "tum kisi say tuo nahi lekin kiss say tuo zarror darti ho. Warna aj subha tum aisay bhagti na."

Khushi was silent for a moment. She did not know what she had to do to prove Arnav that she was not scared. She will never kiss him back but that would mean accepting her defeat.

Arnav: "Kya huwa Khushi chup kyun hogayi?"

Khushi: "tuo theak hai. Hum tiyar hai. Hum who karein gae jo app nay humein kaha hai'lekin humari aik shart hai''.kah app ko humaray ghar per akar lena ho ga who!"

Arnav was taken by surprise by the condition put by Khushi. "Haan'lekin aisi koi shart ''"

Khushi: "Agar app ko manzoor hai tuo kal humaray ghar ajayiyay ga." Warna app ki marzi hai." And she cut the phone.

Arnav looked incredulously at his mobile and thinking how his plan had backfired on him.

Khushi Kumari Gupta knew what she was doing. She knew that the next day was havan and Arnav would never come to her house. Quite happy and relieved by herself, Khushi went to sleep.

'''''''''''''''''..

The next day Guptas were getting ready to go the Havan. Everybody was ready to leave the house when the door bell rang. Khushi went and opened the door just to find Arnav standing at the door. Khsuhi was shocked to see Arnav in the doorway, while Arnav was smiling at her shocked expressions.

"Kon hai titliya?" Buaji came walking behind Khushi. "Oh app hain." On seeing Arnav.

Arnav: "Ji, who main app sab ko Havan kay liyay laenay aya hoon. Naniji nay kaha tha kah app logo ko takleef na ho anay main kyunki babuji ki taiyat bhi theak nahi hai."

Amaji: "Tuo hum sab tiyar hain'.chalay phir?"

Arnav: "Ji chalay."

Everyone went and sat down in the car. Arnav with the help of Khushi placed babuji's wheelchair in the car. Arnav went and sat in the car. He knew what he had to do now. He had planned everything out. He purposely picked up the coffee mug from the coffee holder and spilt it on his clothes.

Arnav: "What the..? Yeh kaisay ho gaya?

Khushi was about sit in the car when Buaji said: "Koi baat nahi bitwa'..Khushi in ko zara washroom tuo lay jao."

Khsuhi stood there without moving. She knew where this was going. All the while Arnav was giving Khushi a naughty smile.

Buaji: "Suna nahi sanka devi'.Jaldi un ko washroom lay kar jao'..pura din nahi hai humaray pass."

After a moment of hesitation Khushi went back to the house with Arnav. Khushi opened the lock and guided Arnav to the washroom. Arnav was silently washing off the coffee from his from his dress. Khushi was standing at the door of the washrrom. She was surprised at the sudden silence maintained by Arnav. But she was quite relieved also. Shukr hai inhay kuch yaad nahi hai, thinking to herself.

She was just about to leave when Arnav caught her hand and pulled her towards him. "Kahan ja rahi ho Khushi? Kya tumhay yaad nahi hai kah tum nay mujhe yahan kyun bulaya hai?"

Khushi's heart beat started to increase with mere closeness with Arnav. She knew that there was no going back from here. She was the one who had called him. But how would he have known that Arnav would come to her house.

Arnav: "Tum prove kardo kah tum darti nahi ho'..warna tuo apni har maan lo."

Khushi said stuttering, "Theak hai."

Arnav: "Tuo tum apni haar maan rahi ho."

Khushi: "Nahi humara matlab hai hum kah hum tiyar hain."

Khushi closed her eyes. She was really scared but she did not want to admit this to Arnav.

Arnav could see that Khushi did not want to do this. He could see that the her every move was making her really tensed.

Khushi leaned on her toes and was just about to kiss Arnav on the cheek that Arnav let her hand. Khushi stopped in midway.

Arnav: "Tumhay yeh sab karnay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main janta hoon kah tumhay yeh sab pasand nahi hai."

Khushi was shocked but happy at the same time, hearing Arnav say this.

Khushi, smiling at Arnav: "Shukriya Arnav ji."

They both walked towards the car.

Buaji: "Itna time kahay laga kay ayi hai sanka devi'.wahan ja kar so tuo nahi gayi thi?..."

Both Arnav and Khushi ignored buaji's rant and sat down in the car to go to the Havan.


I really wanted to write something like this...so I just wrote it!!

I know that everybody in the forum wants the kiss but please do let me know how u like my ending!! And this also goes with the new tagline...which says that Arnav cannot see Khushi pareshan!!

Do leave ur lovely comments.

Edited by ss374 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i personally definitely want the ending to be somewhat like that 😊 i dont want arnav to look desperate for that kiss..because he isnt.. and i want khushi to kiss him, when she really means it!

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