Dark Waltz... updated #2 - 22/1

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.Sandal.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

amazing loved it

continue soon plz

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molten_lava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Awesome description! Wow u really describe everything in details! I love this new concept. Do continue!😃

But I'm a little bit confused with the story!😕

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PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: molten_lava
Awesome description! Wow u really describe everything in details! I love this new concept. Do continue!😃
But I'm a little bit confused with the story!😕

Thank you, Rachel!!😳
Hehehe... that's me for you! Detailing!! teehee...😆 Of course! I will do it, when you guys have given me the green signal!😃
Listen, the dark mustard colour out their is their past,
the dark blue colour is their Present,
the black is the spectator/audience!
And about the timeline...
As they are dancing, their story is being played along side.
You see, that as they dance, their life's story will be played along!
The steps that they carry out in the present, somehow connect to the past, and is a/an direct/indirect link to it! (you name it!)
Did you get it? Confused again?😕

Annie😊

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Tia

@tes_v1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Historical and period pieces are always my favorites! Loved it! Beautifully described. :D

P.S: you forgot to edit the title with the page no.

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Fariha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

WOW that was really beautifully written!! As everyone else mentioned..every little detail was described so beautifully - i could really feel like i was there..you totally took me with you to another breathtaking world😍 Thanks a lot for pm😳 I really enjoyed reading your story - please continue soon!😳

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome superb one loved loved it thanks for pm

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sruthirishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

OMG...wht detailings yaar??

jus awesome...very professional👏

read both in one go... & would luv to read more!!!

& ur title..really different & amazing😃

i think u hav a gr8 passion for writing..

keeep up ur gud work!!!

& mny thks for ur pm,

loadz of luv,sruthi😊

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

very descriptively written! i like it!!

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Ain

@OnepoundChic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

annie 😲 😲 😲

m speechless!!!!

its some thing mindblasting,master piece and what not...how the hell u wrote it so stunningly!!!

ainnuuu m ur huge pankha ur fan from today!

love u ,proud on u baby 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by ainimonaya - 13 years ago

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

Res :)
annie!
What can i say i loved it as always!
You described the start so well with her hair and the candles
then when she heard the voice and saw him it was wonderful
the dance was described beautifully you described everything in detail and it was such a treat to read
it was wonderful
thanks for the pm :)

Thank you so much Mariam!!
Glad that you loved it!🤗
As it is set in the Medieval/Renaissance period, 'Details', for me, matter the most!!
I do want you guys to get the feel of it!!😳