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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This is just amazingly brilliant!! YOU ARE A COMPLETE GENIUS!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

That was just amazing Sadaf,you really are very talented...your writing just takes me into another dimension altogether...into a world which is so full of beauty.
Thanks so much for the pm...hope you can pm me again in future to let me know when your next masterpiece is...
take care...

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I don't know what to say Sadaf...you left me speechless...

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hey dear once again beautiful written awesome

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ChaiBiskoot

@ChaiBiskoot

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

As the time ticks away; i'll be near where i supposed to be

You and Me alone quiet night; plenty of silence,

I know the feelings can't be overlook when you're with me,

Still keeping my senses sharp not to lose the control,

Clutching you near to my Heart ; essence of my Love,

But, are you trying to take a peek inside my heart ?

I wish you could see that there's nothing; a Lonely man

I wish you could see how my World revolves in isolation

I know you're better than anyone else,

My heart feels you're the one who can see my wounds,

Trembling and haunting with the past memories,

Pretend to be normal, but the agony over takes me,

Unable to feel What love is About,

Unable to smell the fragrance of being loved,

Unable to touch the Colors Of happiness,

Like me, none can feel the afflictions and aggressions,

I'm startled and exhausted with the clashes of my heart,

Come and Change my Life, Come and make me whole,

Its a long time stayed back since I'm awake

Countless Dawns, Countless Nights, Countless Hours and Secs,

Come and make me sleep in your arms with solace and serenity,

Still the Question hanged; Do you know how ?

Can you realize my pain ? Can you turn my World a better place to be ?

sadaf... this poem is among the most beautiful poems i have readso far..

i could imagine arnav crying silently as these thoughts ran wildly in his head..

love ur writing ...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wonderfully written, Sadaf..❤️

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Really Awesome sadaf ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Very Beautifully written...Fab job as always👏👏👏👏
Thanx for the PM👍🏼

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UltimateBarun

@UltimateBarun

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Can you feel the turmoil of my shaded grey memories when single scream is to be heard without emitting any sounds ? Can you acknowledge that numbness of Losing someone eternally is the only pain which can't be cured ? Can you feel how it feels when you stand solitude in the amidst of broken alleys, and no one cares to stay with you and dares ti pick you up ? Can you feel what how i had been survived in the hurricanes all alone ? Can you feel how it looks like when each second passes like a years without getting any familiar stroke ? Do you know that the feeling of being grasped in Iron Chains is parallel to give away yourself in the Dark shadows ? Can you make out how it feels when the memories of your past haunts you at every Nocturnal ?

This made me really emotional n i soo feel for Arnav Singh raizada, even thooug he is fictional but ur words are awesoem n u r fantastic with them!!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Wow!! I must say u r too good with the eng vocabulary. U remind me of a dear friend i met on the forum, he too was just as u r- too good with words!! Thks for the pm