OS - Me and My Jealousy

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Beautifully written OS & Poem👏

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Khushi's got guts to spoil ASR's party, really..!!!!!! And the kiss... ooo... hot hot hot hot hot...

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

What a follow up Vru!

Simply brilliant.

Arnav's inner demon got the better of him and I loved it.

I do wish Khushi had responded with equal fire though!!

Fab stuff hun.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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swaram

@swaram

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

WOW! That was too good! How well you have described his inner feelings. You have amazing writing skills. Do keep writing more!

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preethika suresh

@preethi12345

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

superb ! d kiss ws perfect !

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Alice

@alice54

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome one yaar:) loved NK and the way they spoiled the party😃...it was damn good:)

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

amazin...i can so see tht happnin in d show...apart from kiss ofcourse

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

He kissed her...awww...
Awesome update...😳

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

thsnks so much...

oh lord i have to reply to everyone... but after sometime

for now...each one of you who lliked what i wrote i am overwhelmed!!

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Fammakhan1

@Fammakhan1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

OMG the kiss ...
Wahhh waahh the way u wrotee is really great..
Havin Mornin' tea wiv ur OS ;D haha feels real good :)
Thanx vurshii its awsum..

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