OS: A (modern day) Christmas Carol - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@pari. i have literally no idea what to do now. so...basically im virtually sopping wet and i have no idea how i can get back at you...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: malluangel

@pari. i have literally no idea what to do now. so...basically im virtually sopping wet and i have no idea how i can get back at you...



๐Ÿคฃ sorry thats a game yar...

see this

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2396143
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey madmaxine,๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Just came across your OS. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I must say, it is SPLENDID!!!๐Ÿ‘
Never felt so emotionally drained...๐Ÿ˜ณ This story was 'Seriously' a Roller coaster ride for me.
Those emotions of fear, pain, despair, hatred, innocence, love, resentment, revenge, and then, the realisation that suddenly dawned on him. And then, his contentment and happiness and his pure love...
Simply Beautiful! Marvellous!! Outstanding!! Encapsulating!!๐Ÿ‘

Regards
Annie
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it! That was amazing. Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Glad everyone liked it. I tried to do something different. Wanted to think from Shyam's POV...what made him what he is today..that kind of thing. For those of you who are into subliminal messages, the 1st ghost is the baby Khushi, because it begins with Shyam's childhood...and what could be more innocent and childlike than KKG as a kid. The present ghost is Shyam himself, because it deals with the ground reality. And the future is Shyam's son for obvious reasons. And Shyam comes full circle in the story, from being an abused child and jilted boyfriend, to a man who avenges his mother's death and becomes the abuser in relationships, and finally ending with his redemption. I quite enjoyed writing it...sorry for prosing on๐Ÿ˜†. Will update Highway to hell tonight.

Cheers!
Vidhya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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BRILLIANT WORK VIDHYA!! THIS IS AWESOME!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow' that was an amazing os' very easily turns into a topper for me' ๐Ÿ‘ it had the all the ingredients to a gripping story' a fine balance between each and every emotion'. i'm glad you introduced shaym once we were getting into the story otherwise i probs' would have gone back and thank for the PM! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by lilmissmuffin - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bravo! beatifully written. Our ASR sounds hot in the future, and yay he married khushi!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A classic story with IPKKND twist...loved it!!
Many thanks for PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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brilliant OS ya...so heart-warming!! ๐Ÿค—

love the original story and love ur twist to it!

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