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@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey nice one.. Though sad! But i liked it!!

One thing to point out - Font.. U know it's night here and reading this made my eyes paining!! Please use darker and bit bigger fonts buddy!😛

With update - Kushi's feeling was so so good.. I loved the way she lied just to protect Arnav..! Very true feelings..!

Nice work!😊

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haminasto

@haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

it was superbly written👏👏👏👏...i wasnt able to find any flaw with da emotions u wanted to convey....but 4 my own peace of mind i just changed da names to some XYZ's as i wont b able to c Arnav n Khushi lyk dis....it was hurtful painful n remorseful where u can see dat love was bruin...happiness was sortin itself n forgiveness was chasin awy da demons one fights till the end of their lives...
im sooo very impressed...
P.S. Nadiya is right...do change da color..its difficult 2 read