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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow awsum luvd da os

fanx 4 da pm x

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Very nice Mya!!.. Like it a lot!

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princess14

@princess14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

great one shot!! loved it...i was actually expecting him to say that when khushi actually told him about her engagement in the show..

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vanshika sharma

@vanshika456

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

that was sooo coool!!! ego really kills people... sigh people and their egos...but awesome u really portrayed their feelings well...

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Shuveniya

@niya_s

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Mya !!! I was beginning to wonder where u were hun !!! Don't go MIA on us again chicka;my heart can't take that. Poor Arnav baby !!!!!! An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind. RIGHTLY said !!!! I hope he learns his lesson cuz if not he ain't gonna have a vision to make it right in the future😳 I actually really loved the OS. It was short but sweet and very realistic. So kudos to u 😆 BTW I am dying to read your Virman FF too chickas. So Kushi, YES u princess Kushi (U) plz do update soon ladies. 🤗Hugs and kisses to u for your never ending energy, talent and writing ideas

Edited by NiyaluvsArhi - 13 years ago

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shybabe

@shybabe

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

i can scream at you...😆! it was awesome...but why so short darlin...i wish i got more...

great job!😉

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I loved it! No seriously maybe you were expecting it to come out different that's why you dont like it. But its really good.

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Sanjana

@akhilash

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

really good. Keep it up

👏👏👏👏

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Loved the ending quote Mya!! always gotta read what you write!!🤗

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guessimgreat

@guessimgreat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

This was not bad at all, but very good actually! I loved the song with it! I guess I get where your coming from because every single thing I have ever written, I think it is crap until I go back and read it a couple months down the line. But I loved that the scene is so real, and he did really put on a show and ultimately when the show ended he didn't have anything left!

Btw, what is your name? I follow almost all of your pieces(promise I am not a stalker😆) so it would be nice if I could attach a name to your writing!