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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anniee!🤗
OMG This poem is so romantic and sweet and stuff😳
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Ahista Ahista is awwesome too! Love the contrast between both of them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww the latest poem is so nice😍
Why don't you write the poems in my FF for me? I can't think of anything these days
Oh oh oh and Annie do you know about the forum decoration contest? It's this contest where we have to make a post all about Christmas...do you think you can write a poem for our forum? Please? :D
<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvi7884

Awww the latest poem is so nice😍

Why don't you write the poems in my FF for me? I can't think of anything these days
Oh oh oh and Annie do you know about the forum decoration contest? It's this contest where we have to make a post all about Christmas...do you think you can write a poem for our forum? Please? :D
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Aww...Thank you Suvi!!! Thanks a lot, mah papi! ❤️
My, My! 😆 Bud, you write so much better than me... In fact I love all of them...Genuinely saying, all your updates are even more beautiful (they are already Beautiful and Amazing) because of those few lines you always add before and in the end! Even then if you want me to write then, no problem...
But mind you, pal, am One Lazy gal!🥱 With all these exams on my head, am a bit busy now. I only update when I get time to. But don't take that as a no!
I'll be more than happy to do that!😃 PM me whenever you want to. I'll try to make it a point to reply. K?
And...about the peom for the forum...🤔
Hmm...A contest... Let's see... Till when is this contest valid?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Ola friends!! 😛

This poem is based on an OS - At peace written by Angels11.
God! Angels you've become my muse actually! 😆 teehee...Whatever you write, is inspiring me to write poems on them. I've already written one on one of your OSs, and here's another!! Hope you like it, pal! Hope all of you like it!😃
(Untitled)*

Bang! Boom! Crash!

That was what I was hearing now..

How I wished to run away,

From this crazy, lunatic place.

Those words, or rather spits of venom,

Just crept onto my veins,

Shivering and fearing for that Angel, you love'I love'

When I saw you, I couldn't stop but pour it all out..

When you touched me, I wept more..

But when your eyes met mine,

I couldn't help but wish that all of it never happened..

That was when my Heart wept' Because..

I saw something flicker,

Something wither,

In and from those pools,

I saw you concerned and almost weak,

Read that you couldn't stand, hated tears'My Tears'

You asked me what it was, and even guessed it right,

Well'almost right..

I was about to say it, just then'. I stopped'

I couldn't do this!!

Never to you, Never to her..

You and she had made a place in my heart,

How can I do this, when I know that it'll break

Her and you..

You and me'

Hence, I sped away'from you, from her,'.from him'

But now, as I sit alone,

Pondering on what was, what is and is going to be'

Those hues floated across..

Reminding me of you'

Please forgive me Arnav!

I cannot do this'to Me, nor to You'

Oh! ' how I wish to hear you'

To hear that voice of you..

That tingles and tickles my ears for long'

Your presence is effective, But your voice'

Your voice is like nectar for a parched, starved soul like mine..

Like a blanket to wrap around,

Like a breeze that whooshes and sweeps my hair,

Like the sun that kisses my face all day long,

Like the moon that shines in that dark, dreary night,

Like rain in drought,

Like Love for Hate'

So much like You'.

I lay down to sleep,

But it did not come'

I closed my eyes to sleep,

But it did not come..

I breathed in deeply to sleep,

But it did not come..

I glided like a feather from the room,

In that eerie silence around'

Not a soul was around,

To keep me wordly bound'

I hugged myself in prayer to keep myself warm,

From those deadly winds, and that storm,

That was slowly brewing to destroy all'

I was lost!

Trrriiing!

Hark! My heart told me'as the sound vibrated as loud as ever'

Khushi'

I was here'yes, I was here and not lost!

You brought me back once,

You brought me back twice'

You brought me back before I was...Lost'

Those words were like dew,

Dropping onto my withered petals,

Helped me bloom again in this storm'

You gave me strength, you gave me hope,

You gave me another way to roam'

I felt myself strolling back to that soft bed of mine,

I lay myself, myself I lay on those sheets of white,

Feeling you there with me, I whispered slowly

Your precious name'with all my soft might'

Arnav'

To drift away to a place of mine,

That I call a Paradise,

To be with you and you'.and you'

Forever and forever till end of time

Thanks Angel for helping me out. You see dear friends, Angels helped me out with some lines here in this poem. I am eternally grateful to you, pal. This one's for you!!
Do comment.
Annie 😛
*Needed some help with the title. Couldn't think of any. All suggestions are welcome. 😳


Oh come on Annie i tweaked only 2 lines. Rest is ur baby. I can think of 1 title Go gentle into that good night a slight modification of the famous peom Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan Thomas!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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good job annie the poem was brilliant👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angels11

Oh come on Annie i tweaked only 2 lines. Rest is ur baby. I can think of 1 title Go gentle into that good night a slight modification of the famous peom Do not go gentle into that good night by Dylan Thomas!

Hey! But you did help me with that, right?😛 So you an equal partner in this!
Aye haaye! Itne sone naam kahaan se laate ho yaar!!😉
So be it! Go gentle into that Good Night!
Thank you!!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manojshonafan

good job annie the poem was brilliant👍🏼

Thanku Thanku!! How're you? And how is college going?
Humaar toh pariksha chal rahi hain...isliye aisan-vaisan time pe aa pahunchte hain!! 😆
Aap bataaiye! Aap kaisan ho, babua?😉
Annie😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hum res karat hain annie bitva😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Aww...Thank you Suvi!!! Thanks a lot, mah papi! ❤️ My, My! 😆 Bud, you write so much better than me... In fact I love all of them...Genuinely saying, all your updates are even more beautiful (they are already Beautiful and Amazing) because of those few lines you always add before and in the end! Even then if you want me to write then, no problem...
But mind you, pal, am One Lazy gal!🥱 With all these exams on my head, am a bit busy now. I only update when I get time to. But don't take that as a no!
I'll be more than happy to do that!😃 PM me whenever you want to. I'll try to make it a point to reply. K?
And...about the peom for the forum...🤔
Hmm...A contest... Let's see... Till when is this contest valid?

You're welcome, Annie :D
Ha-ha, thats okay, I'm even lazier...well, this one is done, but for the next one, I'll be really lost..but anyways, I'll tell you once I'm done with the chapter😉
19th of December, 2011😃
It's actually a Christmas/New Year Poem

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