OS Khoya hai tune jo ae dil+VM(last part at 6) - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice os..😊
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the PM naddiya as usual another fantastic piece of writing! Loved ASR at the end taking care of khushi and vowing to protect her! Please do continue its an awesome OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wish we could see this on screen. Its fan fictions like this that keeps me going through episodes like yesterday. Pls add me to ur PM list 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav: look at her she was holding his shirt tight in her hand as a child who is scared of losing her teddy bear he just closed his eyes . time flies

Anjali walk in "chota "she saw he was resting his head on hers and sleeping

Arnav: didnot move just open his eyes " kya di"

LA enter " ASR her jiji called she is saying to wake her up and ask her to come home at once "

Arnav: just look at her in anger " i told you both to go let her rest"he said in a harsh tone and bit loud . Khushi just woke up she looked at him .her head was resting at his chest and she was holding his shirt

Khushi"yeh hum" she just said in a low voice .

Arnav: look at her she was staring at him " tum thek ho khushi"

Khushi: hum yahan, she just try to remove his hand off her

Arnav: "wait "he just care fully made her lay down.

Khushi;just got up she just try ot move him

Arnav: what are you doing?

Khushi: hum itni dair soai, she look at the watch it was 4 ..

Arnav: you fainted and you are having temperature

Khushi: "hum aapna khayal rak laga aap pershan na ho."

Arnav: hmmm

Khushi: hum iss baat ka koi matlab nahi laga she just crawl to other side of the bed and get out of bed from there.

Arnav: just regret why in anger he last night shouted at her.

Khushi : just came near to his side to wear her slippers ... she was about to go he hold her hand . she look back

Arnav: "i am sorry"

Khushi: sorry sorry for what , jo kuch aap na bola tha kal woh sub sach tha , hum sharmida ha hum na ..she paused as she saw him getting up

Arnav: softly "Khushi"

Khushi: raise her hand "please hum ko kuch nahi suna hum ko ghar jana ha , 6 baja humari engagement ha " she just choked

Arnav: look at her face he knew she is dying from in side ..

Khushi: just try to composed her self she just walk out without looking at him .

Anjali : aap kahan jarahi ha ,

Khushi: hum ko ghar jana ha abhi.

Anjali: chota chor da ga aap ko.

Khushi: please Anjali ji . hum khud

Arnav walk ahead of her " i am waiting in car "

Anjali: khushi chota itna bhi bura nahi

Khushi: hum ko maloom ha . she walk down with Anjali.she walk to nani

nani: betiya kaise tabiyat ha

Khushi: thek ha nani

Nani: aap na tou bus ko dardiya tha.

Khushi: nani hum ko maaf kar da agar hum na koi galti ki ho

Nani: smiled hug her aap na koi galti nahi ki

Khushi: just control her self as she saw he was looking at her . ." hum chalta ha "

Nani: hum aata ha betiya.

.Khushi: just gave a weak smile. she said bye to everyone . and walk out he was standing with open door

she just sat . without looking at him , he just drive to her home he didnot said a word as he dont know what to say to her. she just look at him " kya aap khush nahi ha ?"

Arnav: look at her ,he didnot reply

Khushi: acha na da mubarak baat.

Arnav just hit the brake and the car stop with a jerk .

Khushi: Get out bolan ha aap na , hum khud she try to open the door

Arnav:placed his hand on the control , it didnot open ..

Khushi :look around there was no one the road was hunted

Arnav: "i know you are not happy as for last 4 hours you were in my arms sleeping taken my name , if you were happy you would have not taken my name"

Khushi:woh

Arnav: shhh congrats stay happy if you can without me .

Khushi: look at him

Arnav; you will say you can but Khushi admit it you cannot stay without me nor i can stay without you ,we are for each other, last night after coming back from your home i felt i have lost all my happiness and my life has became dull again. i will not be able to smile again which i want to. you are the charm of my life . you have enter my heart from a secret door which i had forget to lock and very slowly you turn me in to you.. it is very hard for me now to go back

Khushi: ab iss ka koi faida nahi

Arnav: acha jao karlo shadi ..he started car

Khushi: kya sach .she look at him in shocked

Arnav hide his smile " jab faida nahi and i am late then you go"

Khushi: per hum

Arnav: kya closed the car .

Khushi: look out

Arnav: look at me and say turn her chin towards him she was in to tears .."bolo"

Khushi: aap phir hum ko daant daga yeh bol kar ka hum apni aukat bhool raha ha .

Arnav: i am sorry

Khushi:agar aap na phir se bola tou , mein aap ko

Arnav: smiled "promise i will not "

Khushi: hum ko soch na tou da .she closed her eye he just look at her innocent face

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JI5t4ZPXGjc[/YOUTUBE]

Love me tender,

love me sweet,
never let me go.
You have made my life complete,
and I love you so.

move to her side remove the curl from her face with his finger , she look at him as he touch her ,

Khushi: kya

Arnav : shhh he moved close

Khushi: aap kya kar raha ha

Arnav: which i could not do yesterday .turn her towards him

Love me tender,

love me true,
all my dreams fulfilled.
For my darlin' I love you,
and I always will.
Khushi: arnav ji

Arnav: placed his finger on her lips , she look at him he was switching off his cell ,free from belt
Khushi:koi
Arnav: placed his lips on hers to stop her to saying any thing else . placed his hand behind her head to support.

he rub his nose with her's whisper "you are very sweet now my sugar level will increase"

Khushi: shyly smiled

Arnav: peek again

Khushi hum na ha to nahi bola tha

Arnav: na bhi nahi bola tha , waise ab kuch nahi hosakta . try to kiss her again she placed her hand on his lips

Khushi: over dose horhi ha yeh

Arnav smiled moved her hand kissed her again .


as they apart

Arnav: placed his forehead next to her's ""I LOVE YOU "

Khushi: " I LOVE YOU TOO"

Love me tender,

love me long,
take me to your heart.
For it's there that I belong,

and we'll never part. THE END


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Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
v goood..loved it..a positive one..liked it so,.loved the end..they r together
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
sigh...haiii...this to tooo romatic and cute.
lovely
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Good one. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Naddiya you are truly sweet for giving us such a lovely OS! It made me smile so much when I read the end! If only arnav would say all this to khushi in the drama! Thanks for the PM and thanks for the wonderful update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
naadd! Eid Mubarak 2 u 2!
That was awesome,luv it luv it!
Superb as usual..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eid Mubarak to u too
Pls add me to ur Pm list

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