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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

There has to be some black and white between "Once upon a time" and "Happily ever after", her sister had told her. Was it ironic that her mind only saw grey all around?
i cud not have agreed with u more...the last line is so true...
well its something everyone wishes for , but ends up muddled ...when things are anything but happily ever after...
i simply adore ur themes...short and concise yet so impactful that it always leaves something to ponder...
a wonderful attempt😉

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

The last line is so thoughtful...

Amazing OS

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

i loved the last line! so well written! highly philosophical, and even highly intellectual! damn, not only you're good with linguistics, but you're brilliant with professing opinions! very well written! is this your only work? please PM me your reply! there are so many on-going topics, i hardly think i'll be able to find this topic again!😆

thank you once again, for restoring my love for beautiful, thoughtful stories!😳

i'm shalini btw. :)

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Bloomysunday

@Bloomysunday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

wow beautiful lines awesome os u r amazing loved it...!!!!

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Mihika

@banditqueenn.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Kya Hua aaj Kal Ever1 Writing OS
Anyway sunday is going Out To Be So Perfect now ! last Lines Was Really Very Well Written ! Very nice ! Loved It ! 👏

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

There has to be some black and white between "Once upon a time" and "Happily ever after", her sister had told her. Was it ironic that her mind only saw grey all around?

loved the last line... 👏

fabulous dear... loved it