The moment I saw you time stood still

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Posted: 13 years ago
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When I saw you walk down the stairs, something changed. Words began to fade. My vision began to blur. No, not my complete vision just the peripheral. Everything is else but you became a haze. My heartbeats began to race. Something changed.

I felt something strange. This feeling was something alien. Why did feel I different? Why did you seem different from the rest? Didn't I see you before? Yes, I did. I saw you everyday. Then why? Then why does it feel like I am seeing you for the first time? Why is everything coming to a standstill? Did something change?


I placed my hand over my heart to feel. It was beating faster then usual. I could hear every heartbeat. I could feel the pulse in my veins. My breathing became faster. Something certainly changed. A heat radiated from within and set me into flames.

It made me feel different. It made me question everything I have ever known. Have I really seen you before?

My heart stuttered and it skipped a beat. I wondered what happened. But my heart knew the answer to my question. It's not that the world turned into a haze. It's just that you became the center of my world and everything else just revolves around you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully summed up.. Loved reading it.. ❤️
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incandescent, your post, well, it was incandescently good-lit up my evening for sure! I hope you keep writing such amazing descriptions, because after reading yours, I went back to the scene and Khushi's emotions resonated so much more than the first time!
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Originally posted by: napstermonster

incandescent, your post, well, it was incandescently good-lit up my evening for sure! I hope you keep writing such amazing descriptions, because after reading yours, I went back to the scene and Khushi's emotions resonated so much more than the first time!

wow. thank you so much. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was just beautiful!❤️ fabulous work!😃
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lovely post dear...great...👏
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Originally posted by: incandescent

When I saw you walk down the stairs, something changed. Words began to fade. My vision began to blur. No, not my complete vision just the peripheral. Everything is else but you became a haze. My heartbeats began to race. Something changed.

I felt something strange. This feeling was something alien. Why did feel I different? Why did you seem different from the rest? Didn't I see you before? Yes, I did. I saw you everyday. Then why? Then why does it feel like I am seeing you for the first time? Why is everything coming to a standstill? Did something change?


I placed my hand over my heart to feel. It was beating faster then usual. I could hear every heartbeat. I could feel the pulse in my veins. My breathing became faster. Something certainly changed. A heat radiated from within and set me into flames.

It made me feel different. It made me question everything I have ever known. Have I really seen you before?

My heart stuttered and it skipped a beat. I wondered what happened. But my heart knew the answer to my question. It's not that the world turned into a haze. It's just that you became the center of my world and everything else just revolves around you.


@incandescent : Brilliant description of the yet to be realized feeling. I hope it "incandescently" dawns upon her that he has always been the center of her universe ... even in their painful past, through the upcoming turbulent times and eventually in their blissful future.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, what a beautiful scene...and you described it beautifully...loved these lines "It's not that the world turned into a haze. It's just that you became the center of my world and everything else just revolves around you."
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Originally posted by: mommy2000


@incandescent : Brilliant description of the yet to be realized feeling. I hope it "incandescently" dawns upon her that he has always been the center of her universe ... even in their painful past, through the upcoming turbulent times and eventually in their blissful future.


Thanks a lot!! Well she is just beginning to feel his importance in her life. it will take at least a few days to sink in. But nevertheless, it will amazing to watch their journey of love!! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...Beautifully described..
and truly a matrix like moment...frozen ..well that is what it reminded me of..😆😆
Thank you

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