OS: My Heart Goes Dheem Tana

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Bristy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Aw Bristy!
This was a splendid OS.
It was so sweet.
I love the way you've expressed Khushi's thoughts and feelings. I really liked the part where she caught Arnav staring back at her!
It was perfect.
Thanks for the PM sugar!!
😊

Hi dear,

Thankuu sweetie...😳

I had a grand time writing it and am happy that you enjoyed the scenes well...😳

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Bristy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: monsi08
Read it again... !!!
It's pure Magic ... 😊

Cheers,
Monsi

Awww, Monsi dear, you are now making my day...😃😳

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Bristy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ashvez
@the..Awesome!! Amazed to see the translation of her feelings into a beautiful realisation.

I loved the part where the guy who has put those lines in Khushi's head is to be "erased" hehehhe!!

All of a sudden words floated in her sense. "If your heartbeat increases just by going near the person, then something is ofcourse amiss."

She couldn't remember who said those words to her but it didn't matter.

LOL!!!

Ash.

Hey Ash,

Thanks for commenting!

I didn't want to mar the beauty of Khushi's feelings by taking 'that' name 😉

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Bristy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Nina90
This is so perfect!!!!!! Khushi's thoughts and actions...funny yet endearing...

I especially loved the 'Arnavji' slip and the apology to 'Plantji' lol :)

Aww...thanks a lot honey...😛

Hehe, I liked the Arnavji slip too while writing, I wish to see something like this in the serial...😉