OS: My Heart Goes Dheem Tana - Page 3

Originally posted by: littlemoi

this is really very good!!

Originally posted by: realraul2307

Haaayyyeee...😍...that was just...😍 i can't find the right words...just that my dil goes hmmm hmm hmm..

Originally posted by: maghalakshmi

it was sssooo sweet!!! loved each and every bit... you have even remembered jayprakash and his part was so cute

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Very nice write up of Khushi's halat...hoping something like this happens tomorrow!!!

Originally posted by: anita_21492

OMG that was amazing

i love how u incorporated that song

i love that song!!!!! Navya really has some good songs

keep up the great work

Originally posted by: curry-sistah

lovely!!!!

( btw - i love this song from navya-it was a happier time for Anya)

Originally posted by: Missbantu

WOW amazing no words to describe. You are one great, awesome writer, May God bless you always.:)

Originally posted by: american_desi

That was really good! I have not seen the episode or the precap as yet...waiting to go home and watch it! All the posts about today's episode are driving me nuts as I am now dying to watch it!!

You have captured Khushi's feelings really well...i hope something like that happens in the serial!!

Originally posted by: nyxx

Omg this was just sooo serene and perfect! I have this really gut feeling that tonight's episode will be soo soo much similiar to what you have written, infact, youve probably written much better than what viewers can see. You have a great way with words for sure :) I loved the whole part when Khushi was just thinking and talking to herself when Arnav was talking to everyone else...and dhak dhak dhak...the sound of life loll! Loveddd the OS for sure...infact, i say you should just continue it this way...it may just come out much better than the show! ahaha! Anyhow..reading this part makes me more excited for the episode now!

Great job once again!

Originally posted by: monsi08

O MY DEAR GOD !!!... what did you do girl... ! truly AWESOME... you created such a beautiful scene.. that i could feel it.. I am in trance now ...
You deserve a BIIIGGG HUG from me 🤗

*edited*
I also liked the inclusion of Jayprakash in this ... we girls are truly smitten by his charm 😆

She didn't for one second think how ridiculous she was looking, holding a plant, talking to it as if her life depends on it. It was Jayprakash who found her like that. Ye lo! Only Khushi madam was a bit sane compared to the Raizada's and now she's acting all weird. Pakka, the effect of Arnav Baba. Kya pata, maybe tomorrow she'll start yelling Jayprakash! Jayprakash! like the rest of them instead of her sweet 'namaste Jayprakashji!'.

Cheers,
Monsi