Arnav-Khushi: Payal ki Kahani OS Part 5 pg 8..END

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fj08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Bachi Fatima... great work.. inspired by the payal i see...

looking forward to reading more...

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Flame.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow very nice part !!

I loved the water droplet's part. It was HAWT 😍

Please continue soon and of u have a PM list then add me 😊

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Zeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Loved the update Fatima!!!

Khushi makes me laugh. She walked in backwards and kept her eyes shut...😆

The way Arnav held her was so romantic...😍

I wonder what he wants to say to her!!

Update soon hun, looking forward to the next part!!

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littlemoi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

The part between arshi is sooo awesome love the idea plzz continue!!

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: dusk
OMG OMG OMG OMG *First one to read* 😆 gal wat u want me to do *faint* 😆 ur two parts made me made 😉 love it to the core of ma heart do cont and if u want to write to updates together u can do dat too 😆 very well written 👏 lovely update dying to read next part... 😍❤️ do pm me plz 😳 btw em dusk ur new fan 😳 nd u can call ur fan, nimz 😊

Awww thank u soo soo much Nimz for such kind words!! U brought a big smile to my face!!! 😃 So so nice of u!! and yup will update it soon!!!😳

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Naina--
Fati 🤗 Long time! How have u been?
Your OS is amazing as usual , both parts <3 Do I have to even tell you that btw ? You're the OS queen remember? :P Post the third part soon. Hmm ! Payal ki kahani .. sounds familiar 😉

Naina!!!🤗OMG i knew i'd seen u on this forum, GK sig says it all!!😃 OMG missed ya soo much!!! Awww u r too sweet!! will post it soon and hehe omg miss the good old days!!

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: fj08
Bachi Fatima... great work.. inspired by the payal i see...

looking forward to reading more...

thanks badi Fatima!!🤗 OMG we r having a YPNHK reunion here!! so happy u and Naina watch this show too!! will write more soon!

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SillyPepper

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey its awesum!

ASR is so hot n cool!

Looking forward for next parts! If possible add me 2 PM list!

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.Saraa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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omg omg omg...very goood plzzz continioue...and update next part soon.i want payal stuff...i want him to do so in serial too and make her wear the payal by him..i had this idea in my imagination that ASR is with payal and later he make her wear that...i was really dreaming of this..