The fluttering hearts - An OS P3 Pg20

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Davi

@Davi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Hi mohini

Your OS is awesome.

You totally bring words to life.

Love the romantic parts especially where arnav teases khushi.

Keep up the great writing.

Can't wait to read more.

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: maria2285
haiii haiii... Mwwahhh Mohini... 🤗

Mindblowing Again... loved it completely... ❤️

i really would love to see ASR talking softly to kushi as in ur OS... haii... Kya main tumhe itna napasand hoon??... haiii 😍

Waiting for the next part eagerly... 😍😍😍😍😍

Hey Thanks so much maria 😳

Arrey yaar the most khadoos of men get naughty and soft as soon as they realize they've got the upper hand with their lady love

ASR ka din bhi aayega!! Ek do saal mein toh aahi jaayega 😆🤣😉

last part coming up soon! 😊

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: senorzorro12
Awesome Awesome Awesome Update
Absolutely loving the way Arnav is changing 😃

Will b waiting for an Super duper Update

awww thanks so much!! 😳🤢

yes yes this was bound to happen sooner or later right? How long can someone possibly stay khadoos for? 😆

will update very soon!

Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Minnie.
Lovllly update ohhh arnnavv calling khushis name nw there's a shock lol

Thanks soo much minnie - well remember this is a month later na! Things have already evolved! 😆

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kiran255
OMG OMG OMg

oh god i sooo love it

Loving ASr naughty side

cant wait Mohini for the next installment

Thank you soo much Kiran! Your comments mean a lot!

Last part coming up soon! 😳

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: monsi08
ooo... LOVED IT... LOVED Arnav's total control on heart mind and soul of khushi .. 😉

Update sooonnn...

Cheers,
Monsi

WOW thank you so much dear! 😳

I like the way you put how Khushi's state of being must be at the moment. Total loss of control over her heart mind and soul to her very own - Rakshas. Well said dear 👏

Update coming up! 😊

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: ArnavKhushi1996
Arre Waah! 👏 I loved every bit of this Story! Continue PLEASE! 😃
And do Pm me when you do yaar! What a love story ❤️

GREAAT JOB 🤗Love ❤️

WOW mindblowing comments dear! 😳🤢

Thank you soo much for such kind words! I shall PM you as soon as the next part is up! 😛