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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Wahh re wahhh Mohiniii! 🤗

LOL I liked the 'precap' and ur little comments/songs in the brackets haha!

Ew shyam stalker stalking my Khushi pyaari...and La-ASR shaadi?!! :O

Khushi revealing all her feelings to Devi Maiyya was so sweet!

I love the whole scenario...now, I dont want ur mood to be bad, but if thats wht it takes to make u update..well...kuch paane ke liye kuch khone bhi padta hai naaa Mohiiniii...I'll help u get in a bad mood *evil muh* LOL

Fantabulouuuss, like always :D

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Mohini this is so amazing!!!! Really loved the concept and the scenario you chose. Aaahhh and ArHi?? WOW! 😍

Please please update soon. I'm a sucker for stories like these.😳 And plz add me in your PM list. Would really appreciate it.😊

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..-Niru-..

@..-Niru-..

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

wow mohini beautiful !!!
love d way u describd khushi's emotions !!!
pls do update !

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pollypolly

@pollypolly

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Sometimes fan fictions are better than the real thing😉😆😃

I can't wait 😳

This was wonderful!❤️

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wow loved it Mohini. Its too good. Please continue soon even though your mood is crappy 😆 And thank you so much for the PM 🤗

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
lovdd it dear

😳 Thank you so much dear!!

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: lostlove

mohini
these golden words that you wrote them are really magical👏
i love the idea
i wait eagerly for the next 😃

WOW Lost love, Thank you so much for your comments! These are truly very humbling! I shall write more very soon 😳

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: senorzorro12
Aww ITs is wonderful

But u left me hanging in the mid air...😛

Jaldi jaldi Update kero

Your wish my command 😆

Thanks for the beautiful comments Zorro! 😳

Sorry for the cliffhanger! 😛

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: music1
Wow Mohini!!! Awesome track my friend.Do continue soon.

Thanks so much musician! Will write more very soon! 😳

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Awww this is soo cute!!!... Arnav in the quest for Khushi's love... Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mahi 🤗

Thanks for liking it darling! 😳

It gave me immense pleasure to write it!

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