The fluttering hearts - An OS P3 Pg20 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
It was the perfect ending
The way he FINALLY pours out his heart
That was so dreamy😍
Shyam arrested
That's the happiest news one can get
And finally that La is out of scene
A perfect fairytale ending👏
the prince finally belongs to the princess
Arnav sirf Khushi ke liye bana hai

loved ur OS...finally do dil mil hi gayeee
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

OMG...Where have you been girl?
Anyway I'm happy that you're back...🤗
The last part was so awesome!!
I love the way Arnav's mood changes through the confrontation with Khushi. Their confession was just...😍
It was so romantic the way he had her trapped, with his arms on either side.
It was totally my kind of an ending...happily ever after types!!!
I loved this OS hun, and I hope you will write more!!!
Thanks for the PM and keep me posted when you write!!!
😊

Sorry sorry sorry Zeba I am just such a slow writer 😳
I am glad you liked some of the mood swings of Arnav!
Awww Thanks so much babe! I am truly overwhelmed by the response!
I will surely let you know when I write! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice ending. loved the confession.
great update.
Raunika
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was an awesome ending...hope to see another os soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashiii17

It was the perfect ending

The way he FINALLY pours out his heart
That was so dreamy😍
Shyam arrested
That's the happiest news one can get
And finally that La is out of scene
A perfect fairytale ending👏
the prince finally belongs to the princess
Arnav sirf Khushi ke liye bana hai

loved ur OS...finally do dil mil hi gayeee

arrey inko toh milna hi tha 😳
Thanks for your lovely comments dear!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

very nice ending. loved the confession.

great update.
Raunika

Thanks so much Raunika! That's really sweet of you! 😳
Thanks a bunch for liking it!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

that was an awesome ending...hope to see another os soon

Thank you very much dear! Hope I can think of something soon! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you so much dear! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: desigirlx5

i LOVED the confession! i loved the way arnav made khushi confess! and i love how u wrote tat the mean mami was left alone in her unhappiness! lolzz this was such a niiice FF! awesome :)

Hey I am so glad you liked it. Yeah I enjoyed writing the Mami bit too! 😆
Thanks for such heartwarming comments! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aahana1

WOW such a lovely FF this was.

Very beautifully written ! 👏

Thank you so very much for liking it dear!!! 😳

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