HOT PATI-DEV AND COOL BIWI (Beware in Between Beech Mein B-abes).

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THOUGH LOVED..AVINASH'S HOT SHAVED AND SPICY LOOK ...MR DEV BABU ..SEEMS TO BE BACK ...BUT HOPEFULLY ...POSSESSIVE AND AGGRESSIVE...SHLOK BACCHA RETAINS ...HIS HOT BEASTY TO BEST ENEMIES ... AND BEST LOVER AND PATI---DEV...SHLOK QUALITIES TOO :::::::AS SHREWD SHLOK AGNIHOTRI. ...FOREVER. ...TILL ETERNITY. ...

LOVED..ALL ASHLOK MOMENTS ..., IN BETWEEN ::::::ALL THE BEECH MEIN ...BUZZ ...ESPECIALLY ...THE HOT NEAR KISS ..OF ASHLOK ...SHLOK'S TASTE FOR DELICIOUS ...BIWI ASTHA ...AND ESPECIALLY SHLOK'S REJECTION OF ...THE SINUOUS SIREN ...LUSTY APSARA.. ...ASHLOK'S... BEECH MEIN BABE NOW

PATI--DEV SHLOK BABU ... WAS LOOKING ...HOT ...SPICY AND DEFINITELY ...DROOL WORTHY ... YUMMY...AND WAS VERY VERY...TOUCHING TO BIWI ASTHA ...AND VERY TOUCHY TOO WITH BABE APSARA. .. :::::AS PATI-DEV -SHLOK HAS...EYES...EARS ...AND TASTE ...ONLY FOR ...HIS OWN DELICIOUS HOT AND COOL ...BIWI ASTHA::::::::::NOT ANY OTHER BEAUTY OR BABE ...AT ALL ...

WHILE ...COOL AND CUTE ...CHOTI SI BIWI ASTHA ...LOVES PATIDEV LIKE HER PARAMESHWAR ... AS A FRIEND ... SOULMATE... ADVISER...PARTNER. ...LOVER...AND DEFINITELY ...A HOT BIWI TOO ::::::::WHATEVER PATIDEV SHLOK. ...DEEMED BEST ...BIWI ASTHA ..FOLLOWING PATIDEV TO HELL OR HEAVEN...WITH LOVE .

SO BEWARE IN BETWEEN... ASHLOK...BEECH MEIN ...BLADY BABAS...BIG BHAI'S...BEECH MEIN BABES ... SINOUS SIREN SNAKES :::::::OF BIG BABY BEAR :::::::::::PATI-DEV SHLOK BABU...WHILE PATIDEV SHLOK BABU ...IS AWARE AND BEWARE OF...NON OTHER THAN ONLY ...HIS HOT AND COOL ::::::MADCAP ...BIWI ASTHA :

Ashlok came back home ...after celebrating their marraige anniversary ...as well as their Deep Love Too...happy and satisfied...to fall on their bed...together ...Astha remininising how it will be the best anniversary they will ever have ...Shlok praising himself as Best Patidev ...for making it possible ...only to fall asleep immediately ...exhausted...disappointing Biwi Astha a little bit ...as women do tend to talk ...before or after...making love...because for A WOMAN. . it was more of their Hearts which needed LOVE ...WHILE MEN ..seemed to need more Physical intimacy IN LOVE ...and shloky boy ...maybe for the first time ...didn't make passionate love to biwi ...that too on their ...first anniversary ...So Loving Astha ...who seemed to need patidev's shlok's loving touch ...though dissapointed ..saw instead ...Patidev's red and sore feet ...remembering that he had walked all the way back ...to save money ...for Anniversary celebrations...now felt deeply touched in the heart...tears flowing with Love...and so immediately...BIWI ASTHA WITHOUT... A Thought...took the Butter or Ghee...offered to GOD ...AND APPLIED IT TO ...HER PATIDEV'S SORE SOLES ...WITH ALL HER HEART AND SOUL ...IN OFFERING TO ... HER OWN PATI-DEV SHLOK AS HER PARAMESHWAR ABSOLUTELY. ... and then covered him lovingly like a biwi ...and caring like a mother too...touching his head and placing her palm on his hands and heart ...AS IF SAYING ...DON'T WORRY. ...I WILL ALWAYS BE THERE WITH YOU ... SLEEP DEEPLY...WHILE... POSSESSIVE PATI-DEV AND LOVING SHLOK BOTH...placed his own hand on ..Astha's hand as if...Holding onto her Loving and Touching Presence ...and also seemed to reassure Astha...that he will be a responsible Patidev too...ASHLOK SLEEPING CLOSE ...TOUCHING LOVINGLY AND DEEPLY ...AS ONE SOUL ...

Next day both ..ASHLOK ...were ...discussing matters and business ... related to their life and ways to make money for ..THEIR LIVING NOW...IN THEIR OWN PRIVATE WORLD ...laughing and teasing ...eachother easily...LIKE CLOSE BEST FRIENDS...ONLY TO BE RUDELY AWAKENED BY ...THE NEWS...THAT SHLOK'S ..NA.. BABA HAD DISOWNED SHLOK FROM ...HIS PROPERTY COMPLETELY ANNOUNCING TO THE WHOLE WORLD ...THAT SHLOK WAS NO LONGER ...ANYONE ..OPENLY ...

SHLOK WITH PRIDE OF PUBLICALY BEING DISOWNED ...at first though seemed angry ...went out into the open courtyard instead of going into the room ...where everyone was present ...and seemed to feel...DEEPLY HURT ...TEARS FLOWING WITH A SAD SENSE OF BEING BETRAYED ... BAAR BAAR ...IN LOVE AND TRUST ...EK BAAR PHIR ...BUT SHLOK ...again seemed to regain ... His Pride and Determination. ...thinking it was for good that even the last link ...was broken ...NOW FREEING SHLOK IN EVERYWAY ...though seemed to be hurting deeply in his heart for being discarded by the baba who loved him very much like his life ...BUT EK BAAR PHIR ...Shlok found that ...it was the heart that loved not the Relationship or Riches ...and so... CHOKSI BHAI ...A PERFECT STRANGER ...who understood ...shlok's deep hearfelt sense of loneliness ...Hugged shlok with love and understanding tightly to him ...LIKE A MOTA BHAI...OR BAPPA HIMSELF ...and diverted shlok by inviting him to his son's birthday party...GIVING GYAAN TO SHLOK ..NOT TO FOLLOW HIS BABA INSTEAD FOLLOW HIS OWN IDENTITY ... WHILE SHLOK ALSO realised that ASTHA. .. who always seemed happy and chirpy...THOUGH SHE HERSELF WAS HURT MANYTIMES ... ...HURT DEEPLY FOR HIM TOO ...FROM HER HEART AND SOUL ...TOUCHING SHLOK'S HEART AND SOUL With her declaration ..THAT ASTHA TRUSTED SHLOK AND HIS ABILITY TO ACHEIVE GREAT HEIGHTS ...and so instead stopped being sad himself ...making Astha happy instead with his own teasing ... BOTH CHEERING EACHOTHER . ...ASHLOK SEEMED TO BE .. RELAYING EMOTIONALLY ON EACHOTHER... .LIKE PERFECT PARTNERS...Astha also now advising shlok ...how to spend money sparingly ...and give gift to mota bhai's son ... WHILE SHLOK. .. refusing to sell Ajju's Gold Coin when Alive ...RISING FROM DEPRESSION ...IN PRIDE AND DETERMINATION ...EK BAAR PHIR ...ASHLOK. .. with their love and support ...made MOTA BHAI'S CHOKSI SON'S ... birthday successful by... Astha cooking food and ...Shlok's song and dance ...seemed to touch mota bhai's heart deeply ...declaring Ashlok as his family ...MOTA BHAI CHOKSI...A KINDERED SOUL LIKE ASTHA ...HIS GOOD heart and family . ...now bonded with ASHLOK THROUGH HEART ...WITH LOVE ...


ASTHA though did all the cooking ...still seemed to need PATIDEV SHLOK'S support and Approval as her strength and energy ...WITHOUT WHICH ASTHA SEEMED TO WILT AND BECOME BEREFT ...and patidev's one eye gesture of assurance ...calmed all of Astha's fears ...and more than the guests praises and mota bhai's Thank u in gratitude...SHLOK'S PRIDE IN HER AND PATIDEV'S PRAISES ...SEEMED TO MAKE ASTHA...MORE HAPPY THANKING PATIDEV ... MEANING GOD ...THAT HER PATI-DEV HAS FINALLY DEIGNED TO PRAISE HER EFFORTS AND CAPABILITY...AS A WIFE AND WOMAN ...WHILE RIGID SHLOK who had loosened enough with Astha's persistence to entertain the children ...seemed to now freely mingle and help in the party ...FELT HAPPY WITH COMPLETE PRIDE ...IN BIWI ASTHA BEING PRAISED ...BY ONE AND ALL ...FOR HER DELICIOUS AND TASTY FOOD ...AND SO SHLOK DECIDED TO TASTE ...HIS HOT DELICIOUS BIWI ASTHA TOO...BY TASTING HER DELICIOUS LUSCIOUS LIPS ...WITH A HOT KISS...


ASHLOK sittting comfortably in their small room and now smaller bed too ...the size of one ...meaning that now Ashlok were completely one soul and body too ...in a sense that both could not even spare one inch of distance between them in any way now ...SO TOUCHING AND LEANING DEEPER INTO EACHOTHER ...AS ONE ...NO SPACE FOR ANYONE ELSE .. Astha in Shlok's arms ...head on shlok's shoulders...leaning even her legs on and into Shlok's legs in a complete posture of uninhibited position...SHLOK holding biwi to him.. ... with his arm around her shoulders ...and holding Astha's hand in his hands ... with a sense of ...POSSESSIVE BELONGING TO EACHOTHER ...BUT NOW ...like...Partners...Friends ..and Lovers ...talking to eachother ...SHLOK telling Biwi that ...He was proud of her being his wife ...and that nobody would have done what Astha did...help with love ...,.when needed ...that even Choksi had tears of happiness in his eyes ...ASTHA happy that she was finally getting PATI-DEV'S PRAISES AND APPROVAL ...ACCEPTANCE AS ...HIS WIFE WITH HIS WHOLE HEART ...SO PRAISED PATIDEV TOO...saying that ...IT WAS BECAUSE OF SHLOK'S PRESENCE AND SUPPORT ...THAT SHE COULD DO EVERYTHING AND MAYBE ANYTHING TOO...As Shlok had diverted the children's mind ...with a song and dance ...AS SHLOK WAS ASTHA'S SOUL TOO...ASTHA SAYING THEIR JODI WAS GOD MADE...MAKING...POSSESSIVE PATI- DEV SHLOK ...SHOW BIWI ASTHA ...THAT HE WAS HER GOD ...PATI-DEV...AND ASTHA WAS HIS OWN HEART BY SHOWING BIWI ASTHA ...THAT IT BIWI ASTHA ...WHO WAS PRAISEWORTHY TO SHLOK IN EVERYWAY ...LOVELY IN HEART AND BODY ...TO HIS EYES ...TRUTHFUL AND PRAISWORTHY TO HIS EARS ...AND VERY MUCH DELIGHTFUL AND DELICIOUS TO TOUCH AND TO HIS TASTE ... PATI-DEV SHLOK KEEPING BIWI ASTHA ...ALWAYS WITHIN ...HIS SIGHT ...HIS HEARING ...AND WITHIN... HIS POSSESSIVE TOUCH ONLY ... KISSING ASTHA ...WITH LOVE AND DESIRE TOO...

BUT MOTA B-HAI and wife ...interrupted them ...but only to give ASHLOK ...FOOD ...AND...A FARE WAY ...TO GO FORWARD IN LIFE ...IN THE FOOD TRUCK ...WITH LOVE AND GRATITUDE ...FOR ASHLOK'S SERVICE IN SUPPORT AND LOVE IN CRISIS ...WHEN ASHLOK'S OWN ... MEANS AND WAY ...WAS NIL ...ASTHA ACCEPTING ...THE FAIR MEANS...BUT SHLOK REFUSING. ... RIGHTLY AND LOVE ...that they did not have ...Knowledge or Flair ...in hotel business. ...which could create problems in future ...AND BECAUSE SHLOK DIDN'T WANT ASTHA TO SUFFER ANYMORE TOO...BOTH ASHLOK ...AT CROSS ROADS NOW ...IN THEIR JOURNEY. ..,EK BAAR PHIR ...

ASHLOK arguing with eachother...SHLOK trying to pacify ...HOT BIWI WITH LOVING HUG AND TOUCHING COOL WORDS . ...as to who was right or wrong...ASTHA ...FOR THE FIRST TIME ...HOTLY REPRIMANDING PATI-DEV HIMSELF ...SHLOK GOING AWAY IN ANGER OUTSIDE ...BUT BEECH MEIN ...APSARA BABE ...listening to their arguments ...and now showing her true colours...COMING ONTO SHLOK ...BY USING HER WILES ... HOLDING SHLOK'S ARM WITH HER HAND...SHLOK LOOKING VERY... TOUCHY AND ANGRY ... WITH HER FAMILIARITY...WHEN HE HAD KEPT EVEN HIS LOVE ASTHA WHO HE LOVED AND DESIRED AT BAY...WHEN IN ANGER ... though keeping quiet...IN DIGNITY ...AS APSARA WAS A STRANGER AND WOMAN TOO... BUT DIGNITY ...AND SILENCE ...never works with ...SINUOUS LUSTY SIRENS ...AND SO ...

APSARA made the mistake of ...taking shlok's silence ...as His Consent ...and started to Degrade ASTHA ...FOR WHOM SHLOK LOVED AND LIVED FOR WITH ALL ..HIS HEART MIND BODY AND SOUL ...LEAVING BEHIND ALL THE RICHES AND NAME...BABA... BHAI FAMILY TOO ...WITH LOVE FOR ASTHA ...Apsara saying Astha was wrong in not listening to Shlok and how ...A Handsome Shlok married Average looking Astha ... RAISING SHLOK'S ANGER AND IRE WITH TOUCHINESS ...WARNING APSARA. .. to be in her limits and not create problems between Ashlok just because they argued...BUT APSARA ...now seemed to have set .. THE HOT HANDSOME SHLOK...in her targets ...and so tried to cool down his anger by making him drink the LUSTY LASSI ...she made ...meaning using her beauty and lusty feelings to slake his desires.. BUT PATNIVRAT SHLOK... WHO HAD SET ALL ...HIS INTENSE EYES.. ...EARS ...AND ..TASTE ...ONLY FOR BIWI ASTHA ...WITH LOVE AND DESIRE BOTH...SHLOK REJECTED APSARA'S WILES ..WITH A FLICK OF HIS TOUCHY HAND...throwing the glass of lassi away from him ...to Apsara's shock ...and going way from there. ..only to be waylaid again ...BY APSARA...who now seemed to be intent on turning Shlok's attention from BIWI ASTHA ...TO HERSELF. ...and so was not caring about ...ALL THE WARNINGS OF GROUCHY SHLOK ...INSTEAD COMING CLOSER TO HIM ...ONLY TO FIND ...ASTHA ...who now cooled down and was worried that maybe she wrongly approched the TOUCHY MATTER of OF FINANCES AND SHLOK'S INABILITY TO FIND A JOB ...ON HIS OWN ABILITY. ... EVEN WITHOUT ANY CERTIFICATES...AS SHLOK WAS ON A QUEST FOR OWN IDENTITY ...DEPENDING ONLY ON HIS ABILITIES ...WHEN ASTHA'S HELP OR WORK MEANT ...SHLOK'S FAILURE TO LOOK AFTER ASTHA TOO AS HUSBAND ...HURTING HIS PRIDE ... WATCHING THEM BOTH ... ...INTENTLY ...

SHLOK angry with ASTHA...for not listening to him and rejecting his ADVICE and LOVING ADVANCES TOO ...AND SHLOK ANGRY...with APSARA...for not listening to him ...and refusing to heed...HIS WARNINGS AND REJECTION OF HER LUSTY DESIRES. ...FOR HIM...going away from there ANGRILY ...WITHOUT HEEDING ASTHA'S CALL OF PLEA ...NEVER LOOKING BACK AT ALL EVEN ONCE ... INSTEAD ALWAYS PULLING ASTHA ...BIWI OR NOT ...BEHIND HIM POSSESSIVELY .. ...WHILE LOVING BIWI ASTHA AS ALWAYS ...NEVER HEEDS ANY DANGER TOO ... IN OR ON HER WAY ..TO PATI-DEV SHLOK HER SOUL ...HURT HERSELF ON THE HEAD ...ISS BAAR...THE DIFFERENCE BEING ONLY ...HEAD OR TAILS ...BED OF THRONS OR ROSES...FOR PATI-DEV ...

SHLOK ...had never once looked back to see Astha's plight or suffering...IN BODY AND HEART ...on the SR DARK NIGHT ...OR ON ..THE HATE CONFESSION OF SHLOK OR AFTERWARDS ...WHEN ANGRY SHLOK HAD LEFT ASTHA ALONE AND BEREFT IN THE DARK ...WITHOUT ...HIS WARM PRESENCE. ...AND LOVING TOUCH ...TO HOLD ASTHA WHO NEEDED SHLOK LIKE HER SOUL AND LIGHT... ..WHICH MOTA BHAI CLEARED FOR SHLOK ...WHO NOW SEEMED TO BECOME AWARE OF ASTHA'S SUFFERING AND PLIGHT ...CAUSE ASHLOK NOW HAD ONLY THEMSELVES. ...TO HOLD EACHOTHER. ...IN LOVE OR ANGER...IN FRIENDSHIP OR PARTNERSHIP. ...AS THEY WERE NOW ...ONE SOUL ...TOGETHER. ...

SHLOK ... not looking back and rejecting her beauty and lusty advances ...is now going to make . ...Apsara turn into a ...Revengeful ...Jealous ...SINOUS SNAKE ... so is going to coil herself more tightly ...AROUND SHLOK . ...AND TRY TO POISON ASTHA AND ASHLOK ...WITH DOUBTS ...BUT IF ASHLOK NEVER LET...THEIR OWN BEASTY AND BOASTY QUALITIES ...BHAGWAN BABA ...BIG BHAI'S AND BABI OR ANYTHING CREATE A BREACH BETWEEN THEM .. ...THEN ASHLOK DEFINITELY ARE NOT GOING TO ALLOW ...ANY BEECH BABES...EVEN SINUOUS SIRENS...TO COME BETWEEN THEM TOO ...

BUT DESTINY AND LIFE ...HAS IT'S OWN WAY OF ...THROWING CHALLENGES...SO LETS SEE ... HOW ASHLOK WILL DEAL WITH THEM. ..FOR WORSE OR BETTER...BUT DEFINITELY TOGETHER. ..



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Priya_ShrAvi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hot n cool review vin👏
As usual loved reading...ur choice of words❤️ n the rhythmic pattern u follow...⭐️

Astha in Shlok's arms ...head on shlok's shoulders...leaning even her legs on and into Shlok's legs in a complete posture of uninhibited position...SHLOK holding biwi to him.. ... with his arm around her shoulders ...and holding Astha's hand in his hands ... with a sense of ...POSSESSIVE BELONGING TO EACHOTHER ...

Very descriptive...with amazing interpretations...ur words makes ashlok scenes more sensuous...

Keep writing😳 bcos...we love reading😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice vani...loved ur words...keep writing...
Edited by Dogan1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for a wonderful review ! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vinni, amazing WU on some of the recent events in Ashlok's life in the chawl. Hope the lizard learns to crawl away or her tail is going to be chopped off by Shlok himslef as she is not heeding his warnings to keep her hands to herself and away from him.

Aastha with the help of choksis will make something of the hotel business which will be a stepping stone for their future.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 awesome...by reading your post is like watching the serial ek baar phir
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Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Hot n cool review vin👏

As usual loved reading...ur choice of words❤️ n the rhythmic pattern u follow...⭐️

Astha in Shlok's arms ...head on shlok's shoulders...leaning even her legs on and into Shlok's legs in a complete posture of uninhibited position...SHLOK holding biwi to him.. ... with his arm around her shoulders ...and holding Astha's hand in his hands ... with a sense of ...POSSESSIVE BELONGING TO EACHOTHER ...

Very descriptive...with amazing interpretations...ur words makes ashlok scenes more sensuous...

Keep writing😳 bcos...we love reading😳

PRIYA...😛...Thank you very very much ..😉..for the Love too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Hot n cool review vin👏

As usual loved reading...ur choice of words❤️ n the rhythmic pattern u follow...⭐️

Astha in Shlok's arms ...head on shlok's shoulders...leaning even her legs on and into Shlok's legs in a complete posture of uninhibited position...SHLOK holding biwi to him.. ... with his arm around her shoulders ...and holding Astha's hand in his hands ... with a sense of ...POSSESSIVE BELONGING TO EACHOTHER ...

Very descriptive...with amazing interpretations...ur words makes ashlok scenes more sensuous...

Keep writing😳 bcos...we love reading😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dogan1

Very nice vani...loved ur words...keep writing...

Thank you very DIVYA.😃...Loving Ashlok scenes...even today ...the truck romance ...and Avi was great ...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful analysis Vani...
Shlok looking damn hot after trimming his beard...i was only watching him today...
in the Anniv.epi ,Wen they came back to their room ,the way Shlok sat on his bed ,i felt ,they did something ,not anem ahem ,but something...
Shlok's teary scene was worth watching...Avinash made me cry too wid him...
i jus loved Shlokie singing and dancing for kids...he looked more cute
that hit n miss kiss ...i watched that scene again ,it was cut n action ,but action ke time Shlok full active ho gaya...
yaar ,plz i dnt want to talk abt Apsara ,Mota uncle is good...



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