Ashlok SS-Iss Dil Ka Kya Karoon(Note For Readers On pg9)...22/11/201

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Prologue



Nothing new...Actually it was my first piece of writing...which I started last year when the show almost started then due to a huge gap inbetween I stopped writing it...but as my lovely reader geeta was asking me to write something on NA's exposure...so I thought to continue this one once again as its plot is same...

Starting this ss is like putting one more knife on my neck...😆as I have already sooo many stories to update...
but anyways enjoy😉...



It was ashlok's wedding day...everyone in both families was happy...except for anjali...who like always was angry at shlok for selecting astha as his life-partner...

Anjali's this harsh behavior and anger was a constant reason for kalindi's worries and fears...but she was sure that shlok will always take her daughter's side and will protect her from anjali...

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As the barat reached at kirloskar's door astha's friends left her alone in the room...

Looking herself in mirror she muttered with a smile...
Astha:so i win mr.akdu...i make u confess ur feelings for me first😳...and today is the day when I will openly tell u that how much I love you...


On the other side shlok who was sitting on the white horse thought...
Shlok:so its time for u MISS ASTHA KIRLOSKAR ...to get ur punishment...I just wanted to break ur ego...but u said..." u cannot tolerate me close to u...u cann't tolerate my existence anymore...now its time to tolerate me for the rest of ur life''...






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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1


After completing with the small wedding rituals astha was taken to shlok's room...❤️❤️

She sat in the centre of beautifully decorated bed with her red lehenga spreaded out in circular manner...waiting for her love...Shlok Agnihotri...dreaming about her sweet future...😊

After sometime Shlok entered the room with a smile on his face... while staring his tiny and cute lady... he closed the door behind him,,,,,

Aastha tooo returned his smile with a huge one...😊

Taking small and slow steps he came close to bed and sat near astha...

Feeling extremely shy she lowered her head...☺️.

He gently lifted her chin and said...so finally u are Mrs. Astha Shlok Agnihotri...
She blushed more...but he softly cupped her face...

Shlok:now u have to carry my name with urs for the rest of ur life...u have to see my face everyday...u have to bear me for whole of ur life...are u having still any problem with me ????...😉

Astha listening to shlok quietly...just smiled at his words...😊
Shlok:Come on Astha say something ...
Being nervous she remained quiet...
Shlok...(in a husky voice)... waisey tu kitna bolti hu yaar...but now when i want to hear ur voice...u r quiet...😈

She softly asked...what u want to hear from me shlok???...
Shlok:wohi baat jo ab tak tumhari zubaan par nahi aayi Mrs.Aastha Shlok Agnihotri...

Astha whispered again...konsi baat??????
Shlok:u know me very well astha...I am not like others...I am simply a straight forward person ...i want ur confession... i want to hear what u feel about me...do you love me??????

Astha thought to herself...U already won by making mr. akdu confess his feelings for u first... now u can tell him what was ur feelings for him...

Astha:Mr.shlok
Shlok:
ssshhh...he placed his finger on her lips saying...only shlok from now onwards...

Astha:ssshhhloookkk...
Shlok:that sounds good...and then for next few seconds there was complete silence...

Shlok:now i am waiting...
Astha:for what???
Shlok:for your confession...
Astha:lekin shlok...
Shlok:no lekin vekin...keh bhi do ab... kitna wait karwayo gi Mrs. Shlok Agnihotri...

Astha listening Mrs. Shlok Agnihotri again and again from him was feeling very happy...

And very soon she started pouring her heart out... to her mr.akdu...

Astha:shlok i was afraid at that time when u want to hear my confession on that puja day...i was afraid that u will break my dreams...u will make fun of me...ur family will never approve me as their daughter in law...but today i have got my all answers...aaj main aap ko batana chahti hoon... ke... main bi aap ko bohat...she paused...

Shlok:aap ko bohat ... kya astha???...he left the bed and went near the window and again said...bolo astha...I am listening...

Astha slowly walked to where he was standing and holding his hand she softly whispered...
Astha:main bhi aap ko bohat pyaar karti hoon mr. shlok agnihotri...
☺️☺️☺️

Shlok instantly turned and looked at her with a huge grin...so finally you give me what i wanted...what i was trying to hear from u...

Astha gave a soft smile and questioned...never leave me...

Shlok with wicked on his face spoke...
Shlok:no question of leaving u ever miss astha kirloskar...his tone suddenly changed to sarcastic one...he hold her hand tightly...😵

Astha was confused at his looks and behavior now...she questioned again... what u mean by this???...

Shlok pulled her closer...with rage visible through his eyes...
Shlok:this is what i want ...ur confession for me to break your ego...to show u how weak u women are...u fall for anybody so easily...😡😡😡

Astha left shocked...what r u saying shlok?...u did all this because u want to break my heart????
Shlok:not only to break ur heart but to break u ...😈

Astha was all in tears now...how could u shlok??? u played with my emotions...she shouted...

Shlok:shut up ...i hate u ...
.. i deparately wanted to break ur bloody ego...now u r left with no other option miss astha kirloskar except to bear me for the rest of ur life...

Astha:so what was that confession of yours??? ...what about my confession u want to hear???...what about our marriage????...u did all this to satisfy ur ego...speak shlok...astha shouted at the top of her voice🥺...

Shlok...haan...haan...i did all this to satisfy my ego...now i will teach u a good lesson u will never forget...

Astha tried to slap shlok...but he grabbed her hand and pushed her wildly on the bed and left the room in anger..

Astha was in complete denial phase ...she started crying badly on what her destiny brought for her...only tears.💔...



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Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres
I knw my pm box is filled with ur updates, I will surely read all n comment during hols..lm supposed to be on break nw...
Nw, y so saddie saddie update? Bt yep, it is supposed to be frm d start, bt still ws very sad...
I knw u hav smethin else in store fr us😉
Waiting of Baldy Baba's exposure... 😈
Nice update👏
Edited by .Natasha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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all for his ego!not fair shlok...hope ur exams went well...beautifully written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story, poor Astha feel bad for her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

all for his ego!not fair shlok...hope ur exams went well...beautifully written.

thanks neelum...done with my first subject's exam now next exam on wednesday😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

thanks neelum...done with my first subject's exam now next exam on wednesday😃

U hav holidays? V guys hav to study overnight😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

thanks neelum...done with my first subject's exam now next exam on wednesday😃


Ok best of luck buds😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Natasha.

U hav holidays? V guys hav to study overnight😔

Hahaha..only your thought dear...I slept 4:00am last night just for two hours and after that i haven't slept even for a second...and holiday🤢only after seeing the length of my course you can decide that one holiday is enough for it or even a whole week is less ...🤪... coming to forum is the only thing which ends my all stress...thats why love u all😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti


Ok best of luck buds😃

thanks buddy🤗

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