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Ashlok OS-What More Life Can Give





Shlok entered the room expecting an excited astha but instead he saw her walk past him expressionlessly...

She was wearing a black night gown with lace work done on the sleeves with a deep neck line...

It had thin straps to hold on to her body and was perfect enough to make her look sexy even at this hour of the night...

Her hair was let loose in a careless manner and with tired eyes she sat on the bed...

Shlok found her too inviting at the moment but he chose to control his urges...

There was complete silence for seconds...

I am not too comfortable with this idea of a honeymoon trip so soon...you are right that I love to travel and explore new places... but...astha stopped abruptly...

But...but what astha? You still can't get over your ex-fiance ?" Shlok asked in a stern voice...

Astha looked quizzically at him...

She so much wanted to tell him that she had got over her ex-fiance long back and from the time she had agreed to marry him she had not thought of that cheater even once...

There was silence again...

Give our relationship a chance astha... shlok said in a mellowed tone and went to sleep...

He was having no regrets with his married life afterall marrying astha was his own choice...

As he slept astha pondered over his suggestion whole night...

She thought that what happened in past is a old chapter now and she cannot dare to reopen those pages...

Shlok didn't force her for this marriage but still she needed time to know him more...

She wasn't sure if it was going to work out between them but there was a ray of hope...

Marrying a businessman like shlok, with a completely different background had been a tough choice for her...

At only 28 he was already included in top businessmen of the country...

He had actually agreed to marry astha even after knowing the truth that her previous fiance has cheated her with her friend...

It was strange but true that he fell for her at first sight...

After their engagement they spoke like friends, behaved normally all the period but on their first night after marriage, thoughts of honeymoon made her feel jittery... shlok on the other hand was relaxed and poised...

It was 4:00am... astha was still awake...

She waited for shlok to wake up...

He was getting ready when he saw his beauty walk up to him...

I just wish I could hold her tight in my arms right now...shlok thought to himself...

He was still lost in his dreams when her melodious voice interrupted his thoughts...

Astha:Shlok... I... I... will give our realtionship a try ...

There was an abrupt pause as she lowered her head in nervousness...

At first he was numb but then he suddenly spoke breaking the trance he was in...

Really you will give it a try...he asked with a glimpse of happiness in his eyes lifting her chin with his index finger...

Yes because you are the only one important and special for me..the only one for whom I care...she answered softly in a low voice...

He found it impossible to control his emotions and took her in a tight hug...

She smiled faintly hugging him back and said moving away from him ...we need to pack for the evening flight...

They reached Airport by morning... shlok had booked a small motor boat that took them to Paradise Island in Maldives...

It looks exquisitely amazing shlok... astha chirped out loudly...

One island only for us..she questioned in disbelief...

Breaking into a crooked smile ...Only for you astha...he said very softly rubbing his thumb on her face...

Shlok was a guy who was disciplined yet cool, challenging yet generous, modest and mostly fun loving...he was opiated by his work yet he made sure he arranged this trip...

He wanted to make astha feel comfortable and special with him in every way...

Maldives was just meant for them...

Cool blue water, exotic tropical flowers around, a private villa, breathtakingly picturesque surroundings and a beautiful couple like them...the sparks were missing though...

Astha was having a child like excitement to visit the place...as it was her wish to see maldives on her honeymoon...

Though she dreamt it with someone else but destiny was having other plans for her and today her husband shlok was fulfilling her wish...

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She was looking superbly sexy in western outfit ... shlok had seen her for the first time in such a dress...

She was a bit conscious regarding her dress but it was shlok's wish to see her in that outfit...

Shlok was a handsome man with black hair and strong sharp features usually sporting a calm smile...

He was 6 feet and astha came exactly till his shoulder...their height difference was what made them more cute and different from other couples...

Astha caught shlok staring her and asked mockingly...I am sure I am not the first girl you have seen in a western outfit... this must be so common for you based on your popularity and extensive travel schedule overseas...

I do have seen but not someone so close to me, not someone who is mine already... saying this he moved close to her...

His reply stunned her...for once she loved what he said...

Shlok hardly controlled his desire...if he were given a chance he would have taken her to their bed and make love to her...

She could feel his breath close to her face...

A sudden surge of deep desire swept inside her but she was too stubborn to accept it...

Awkwardly she moved away from him and went down and sat on the bottom stair lowering her feet in the crystal clear water present all around their staying place...

Shlok smiled the way she ignored him but he was happy that atleast she is trying to move on with him...

He slowly walked down and joined astha in her silent admiration of the place...

They spent the day together... though there were less talks and more silence but their eyes were conveying what their tongues were not...

A delicious meal and an exhausting day made them lazy...

Astha lay on the hammock wearing a white linen halter top that had been tied in a single knot at the back of her neck and two knots at her back and a pink abstract printed straight cut skirt that reached till her knee...

Her small silver studded earrings were shining and that delicate silver anklet that adorned her soft feet looked perfect when teamed up with a beaded multicolored necklace...

Her long slender creamy legs were revealed slightly from one side to shlok...

He was staring at her as he stood at the entrance of the Villa having an official conversation...

Astha was always too much conscious about looks and knew how to dress perfectly according to situations...

Shlok was continously glancing her making her heart to fill with desire...

Astha thought that his black shorts looked comfortable and his hair was just fit to be entangled in her delicate fingers..the tanned look on his face due to the day's activity made him look breathtakingly hot...

He kept ruffling his hair each time he went out of control during the conversation looking at her...

Once the conversation was done, he walked towards her and tried to engage in a romantic conversation...

She didn't speak much...but simply stood up, came close to him and planted a soft kiss on his cheek and said...Thanks for taking me here...I always wanted to come here...I must have done some good deeds because I am having you as my life partner...she spoke out her emotions slowly placing her head on his shoulder...

Shlok stood still...the impact of that kiss remained... No other woman had made him feel so aroused or wanted...The sticky gloss was still there...

He wished he never have to remove that from his cheek...but he had to remove it unwillingly before going out with astha to take a look at the sunset by the beach...

The situation was perfect...

The crimson sky with slightly cool breeze, typical of the tropical evening climate made them ease out a bit...

Shlok had already started feeling his passion bubbling inside seeing his beautiful wife getting close to him moment after moment...

By night they were back to their place...

They sat close by in open and enjoyed the silence with a few conversations about the next day's plan...

Astha's legs were folded and she sat in a reclined posture resting her body weight on one hand...

She didn't realize that shlok was so close to her until she could feel his warm breath on her ears...

He was already moving his finger slowly at each sensitive point, tracing his path from her earlobe, to the nape of her neck and down her arms...

She quivered with excitement inside...

Shlok gently removed her both earings and sucked her earlobes...

His touches already started affecting her... she made a low moan and removed his hand...

Instead, he pulled her close wrapping her by one arm and let her weight fall on him completely...

She was enveloped in his arms and didn't dare to look up...

There was immense anxiousness inside her...

She felt a slight discomfort but it vanished with the magic that shlok was creating...

He made her feel excited and nervous every second he touched her...

He could feel her breath harder with her chest pounding...her stomach was twisting inside...

She gave out a small shriek with a shiver and looked lovingly at him...

His fingers raced across her lips only to get them parted for a moist kiss...

It had been their first passionate kiss...

He let her hair loose that was tied in a careless knot...

The perfume of her shampooed hair was intoxicating him...

For few seconds his hands played with her silky hair while his lips attended to her face...

His fingers moved to the back of her neck where he released the knot that held her top...and then slowly he released the other knots at the back of her top... It came off in a jiffy...

She gasped as his hands moved carelessly on her bare back ...while his tongue was busy exploring her mouth...

Her fingers automatically went to his hair... as he desparately started kissing and biting nape of her neck and her collar bone...

He stamped every inch of her exposed skin with his kisses and bites and next his hands moved slowly to her skirt...

But astha stopped him and shyly whispered in his ear...Please...Not here shlok...

And he stopped suddenly with a shocking expression that changed into a smile soon and looked at her hazel coloured eyes which had the answer that only he could understand...

He slowly lifted her in his arms and took her to their bed to strike the last chord of intimacy...to make her his wife in true sense...


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Sorry for mistakes...

Please hit like button and leave comments to let me know that you liked the story or not😊...

Waiting for silent readers to break their silence😃...anyways love my all sweet readers...

And
after my coming exams ...if time permitted and if possible...will try to convert this os into a short story😃...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
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unres
fabulous meerab
really awesome
superb
great job
keep writing more
thanks for pm
iam first yayyy
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ok...waiting😃
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congrats u r first today🤗
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Originally posted by: meerab...

congrats u r first today🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
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@zaya-firdose

Thank u sooo much dear for liking the os...and sure will try to write more stories whenever I will get free time...now-a-days I am bit busy with studies...
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it was so sweet and romantic dea..
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bahut sundar likha hai.. didi climax likhney se bach guyi. didi aapne khaa tha na ki i am leaving due to exams . but aap hai.. n u r still writting...so i am so happy..
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Such a brilliant update loved it.okay dear we will wait for it next update pls convert it ss loved it so much meerab
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@ crazygul

Thanks vishu ...for the lovely comment...
And yeah I ended it without writing more as I was not in a nirma mood ...and I already had my exams last month and another coming this month so this was all I managed today after so many days...and will definitely try to give os's until my exams end...

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