SS: Second Chance- A Veneer of Hope... (Completed)

First Previous

Page

102

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: tinkylove
First Of all take my bow di , for this wonderful story..!!
👏👏
I really appericiate u for this wonderful work u have done..!!

IM glad that i just read it by chance..!! IM soo glad that u like writer is my elder...!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

U R AUSOME , AMAZING AND WHAT NOT...!!!😃😃

I RESPECT U AND UR WORK..!!!👏👏

Now the news this is my last comment im giving on ur story after that I wont be able to give or i may give very very late.!!!😭😭

Enough of my rambling..!!

Coming to update:

Wow ..!! Its the word that comes from my mouth after this splended update..!!!

Ausome ending..!!
everything is well at time haan..!!
Alll is well at the end..!!
U described Shloks emotion wen he held his child..!!😭😭 That was soo emotional moment...!!! cnt describe in words..!!😉😉

THEIr meeting after 6 mnths was like miles years and what not..!!!

I loved that part wen shlok was there By her side..!!!

Epilogue was more that wonderful..!!
PERFECT ENDING..!!👏👏

Ohhh Ur sweety hotty update are soo good..!!😳😳

What to say more abut ur work..!!

I dont have enough words to describe..!!

U R MORE THAT AMAZING..!!

IM SPELL BOUND ..!!!

LOVE U DI..!!
BE BACK WITH ANOTHER STORY ILL BE WAITING TO READ..!!!

UR CRAZY FAN..!!

SAUMYA😳

Thanks a lot Saumya :)

Quote

Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#982

Oh! One of my fav stories is over. It was such an amazing story. Loved the ending. So emotional and so well written. You are a superstar. As I've said before as well you write emotions of every kind so vividly. Be it romance, pain or happiness. You make us feel each and every heart beat.

Thank you for taking the time to write this amazing creation and sharing it with us. It was such a joy to read each line.

Hope you'd start another. And continue your FF as well. I'm so addicted to it too,

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: mehare
Awesome update with happy ending loved it

Thanks a lot Mehare :)

Quote

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#984

Originally posted by: Serviana
Amazing story Tan Tan..please come soon with another one.

Thanks a lot Yasna :) wil be back with another one once i finish His Secret Desire :)

Quote

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#985

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
Awesome story and very well written

Thanks a lot Bobbie :)

Quote

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#986

Originally posted by: nim_var
Tanvi, great update and a superb finish to the tale. The hospital scenes were so heart wrenching and warm. Glad that Varad was there by his side to help him out and also dig into the past of ABhay. Now, NA is in jail and want to see that happen in the show too. a fitting end to his evilness.

Ashlok found their rainbow at the end of the pot after all and it was beautiful. Forgiving his ayi is another step forward. Loved it. 👏

Thanks a lot Nimmy :)

Quote

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Final Part

I really really loved this part Tanvi..Really beautifully written yaar..⭐️

The way shlok rushed to the hospital and NA caught by the Police was the brilliant part👏

Aastha and Baby escaping from the accident was miraculous⭐️⭐️⭐️

A really Happy ending as you had promised all of us😃

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Epilogue

Fantastic Epilogue yaar...I totally loved it...

Shlok and Aastha's love is still afresh..😳😳😳

The kids, Samaira Karan Kavya Pranav..All are cute😃

A happily ever after Story..Awww..Please come up with another FF yaar..Will miss you till then🤗

Thanks a lot dear :) Glad you liked it :)

Quote

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#988

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
Beautiful

Thanks a lot Mishty :)

Quote

Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: avi_ashi
Awww such a cute epilogue tan.. Loved it..
Loved both parts.. I ws scared wat will happen to their unborn child.. Thank god.. She is alive too.. Perfct ending to d story.. Shlok astha nd their cute daughter samaria..
Bt I ll ur stories... Tan start writing another ff on ashlok... Plz plz..

😳
Thanx for writing such amazing stories on my fav couple ashlok..

Thanks a lot Ashi :) Glad you liked it :)

will start another one in February or so... i have my hands full wit personal work till then :)

however I'll try completing His Secret Desire by November... if not, it'll be on hold till i return from my break :)