Ashlok SS-Falling For You....(Part4-pg30)15/10/2014

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Devu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

yayyy again a new story

interesting concept dear😛

waiting 4 ur update

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It's really good concept... Waiting fr more

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

thanks😳...so when is 1st ch coming?😈

my exams got delayed by one week so will try to update chapter 1 soon😃

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logambika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

nice concept yaar... do continue...

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saasu123

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Loved the teaser.. waiting for story😉

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Samia

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Interesting concept 👍🏼

Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago

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meerab

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Part 1

Shlok finally closed his eyes to sleep after the long day at office...

Being tired it took only a few minutes for him to went into restful slumber...and shortly the room filled with his loud snores...

He was sleeping peacefully when the sudden slap on his face made him to almost jump in his bed...he got shocked at the sudden attack...

His eyes rolled around in the room but there was no one around... even the doors were close...

Shlok:I must be dreaming...he thought to himself and again went to sleep...

But in next few minutes he again experienced as if someone slapped him...he was sure this time that its not a dream...

He moved out of his bed and checked every single corner of the room...again there was no one...

Suddenly he thought of a plan and went to his bed acting to sleep and to snore but keeping a check on the room with his half open eyes...

As soon he faked out those snores ...two figures appeared in front of him from under the bed ...and one of them slapped him...then both slightly giggled and immediately crawled back beneath the bed...

Seeing their naughtiness he became a bit angry...
He immediately bent down and pulled both of them out lightly holding their ears...

Ouch ...chachu please mera ear choro mujhey pain ho raha hai...little kavya shouted...

Aur mera bhi... prem requested in his childish voice...

Shlok:When I told you not to disturb me when I am sleeping then what are you doing here???...

When they both didn't answer and kept standing there making innocent and crying faces he leave their ears ...and shouted repeatedly at the top of his voice... sojal bhabhi...and she came there running ...

Sojal:what happened devar ji...why you are shouting my name...

Shlok loudly said...cann't you control your kids ...how many times I have said I don't want disturbance in my sleep timings...then why they are again here...

Sojal:Ok ok that's enough devar ji ...these are small kids of just 5 years ...how could you except them to behave maturely like maa and baba...

Shlok muttered in taunting way...like maa baba behaves in a mature way ...they themselves behave as kids...

And then he warned sojal that next time he will behave badly with them if she didn't control her children ...

But sojal was no less... she started giving him a lecture...when prem and kavya both complained about shlok...

Being irritated shlok pushed the three of them out of their room and bolted the door from inside...

Kavya and prem were sojal and varad's children... twins of five years and were extremely naughty... that's why they always get scolded by shlok but it was not like that shlok only used to scold them all the time ...he also loved them a lot but was slightly short tempered...

After pushing them all out he slept with great difficulty as his house was no less than a zoo...
At times he thought that his family is the only reason for all the noise pollution in their city...

Even next morning he woke up before time with the sound of the shrieky whistles ...
He looked out of his window rubbing his eyes and found his nephew vansh whistling while playing with his baba,kavya and prem...

Vansh was jyoti and siddarth's 4 years son...as jyoti was pregnant for the second time and siddarth have to go in different cities for office work so jyoti was also staying at their house for her delivery as siddharth was orphan and there was no one to look after jyoti...

Niranjan was playing with his grand children to make them happy...producing different animal sounds ...walking like a horse giving them rides on his back...the whole house was filled with loud giggles and lot more sounds from the surroundings...

Shlok:My family is no less than a circus as all are mad...he thought to himself...

Recently his vinayak chacha also added more honour to the left over madness of the family...by marrying their maid rani...

Initially whole family opposed him but then finally everyone accepted rani as their family member...when vinayak secretly married her...

Shlok immediately took shower and went to his cupboard to select a nice shirt for his important meeting...but there was not a single ironed shirt...

Bhabhi...jyoti di...where is my ironed shirt...shlok shouted again...

Jyoti slowly came to his room...
Jyoti:Why you are shouting shlok bhai...cannot you see everyone is busy in kitchen...God has given you hands then go and iron your shirt yourself...

Shlok gave her a little angry look...

Shlok:I know jyoti di why you all are irritating me day and night...but your tricks will not work...I will not agree for marriage...no matter what...

Jyoti:OK fine do your work yourself...no one is gonna help you then ...

Shlok:You don't worry I will do it myself...he stare her in anger once more ...

Jyoti:Arey bhai you became serious I was joking give it to me I will iron it...she said seeing him leaving the room...

Shlok:no need I can do it...he shouted from the corridor...

He somehow managed to iron his shirt ...after getting ready he joined his family on breakfast table...

He wished good morning to everyone...

Anjali:Shlok beta take these aloo parathas ...I specially made for you...

Shlok:I am taking maa...he said in a nice way...

Anjali thought that his mood is good so it will be right to ask him now...

Anjali:By the way shlok...what you have decided about the marrige proposal nandini bring for you...

Suddenly he frowned making a irritated face...

Shlok:Maa..my decision is still the same...I am not interested in getting married...my life as a bachelor is going great and I don't want a one more disaster in this house...

Niranjan:Look anjali your son is stubborn like you...I am telling you if I get a heartattack then it will be only because of your son...

Anjali:Shlok your baba is right you will be the reason if something happened to him ...I will not forgive you then...

Shlok:Oh God their nautanki started again...he ignored them and continued his breakfast...

But after warning shlok anjali turned to niranjan...by the way he is your son niranjan and stubborn like you not me...remember you also took a long time in saying yes to me for our marriage...

And there started a world war 3 between anjali and niranjan...

Shlok gave them a disgusted look and leave the table saying that he will eat something in office...

As soon as he left anjali and niranjan became normal suddenly...

Anjali:he again left the table without eating...I don't understand what is his problem with marriage...

Niranjan:don't worry anjali...I have a sure shot plan after which he will definitely agree for the marriage...

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Kalindi:Astha...wake up its tooo late...she said shaking her shoulder...

Astha hugged her slightly ...arey let me sleep na...waisey bhi kuch din main meri shaadi ho jayegi tu thora hi achey se soney ko miley ga mujhey sasuraal main...tu samajh rahi haina mera matlab maaa...

Kalindi smiled...I think you are world's first girl who is talking so boldly about her own marriage...besharam kahin ki... chal ab jaldi se uth...she said softly hitting her shoulder...

Astha said rubbing her eyes...waisey maa nandini aunty ne merey liye koi lardhka dhoonda bhi hai ab tak ya main aisey hi buddhi ho jaon gi...

Kalindi:You are impossible astha...now don't waste my time and come down in 10 minutes all are waiting for you at breakfast table...

After instructing her kalindi went to kitchen...

Astha stretched her arms like a lazy cat while yawning for some minutes and then she slolwly came out of her bed and went to her balcony to enjoy the fresh morning breeze...

Then suddenly she started praying for herself...

Astha:God please give me a very handsome husband...I mean good looking,hot and very much romantic...but one thing more...he should be calm and caring...and please I want all this soon...you know na I am getting old...

Gauri who came behind her to call her again loudly said...You are just in your twenties not in your nineties...have some patience astha...

Precap:

Niranjan gets a heartattack ...

Shlok somehow agreed for marriage...

Agnihotri family visited kirloskars...

Astha asked where is her dulha ...without seeing his face she will not say yes for marriage...

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

loved first chapter😃, twins r really cute but poor shlkie was trying to sleep...loved this NA ...so heart attack could be fake😉..n chachu married rani🤣👍🏼...i m chachu-rani fan😉😆

Edited by Neelum.drashti - 11 years ago