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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

sorry ywr...i went at my grand mother's home and suddenly signals went...i just returned and the first thing i checked was your update sowwy...

will untes soon too😳

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...Ayesha...

@xayeshax

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

you two understand each other so well😃

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Dearest finally a uodate! We were waiting for it with bated breath xD anyway looks like Sameer that scumbag is having an affair with one of aasthas friends ( my conclusion after the last line that she knew bith of the faces)

Wondering what exactly went wrong between our sweet Aasthu and Sameer and hoping that she will find her inner Voice to realize she is in love with Shlok that she always has been in love with him :)

Continue soon and pls pm me 😳

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Samia

@Sam_15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Unres..

Woah...what a thrilling update!!

Ok first let me clarify my confusion. In the end it was Shlok who Astha saw hugging a woman? 😕 I would have imagined Sameer par yahan to kuch aur hi lag raha hai.

So Shlok has tumour! Nice twist though I had guessed it soon after reading ur last chapter. The way u built up story leading to his migraines were indicative of that. Anyways good to know he got operated.

Btw what's going on between Sofie and Shlok? IS Sofie interested in Shlok? It looks like Sameer too is having an affair. Gosh, so many mysteries here. You better unravel them soon.

As much as I love Ashlok together, I really appreciate and admire Astha's loyalty and commitment towards her marriage.

Great to see the wind chime back 😆

Loved the part where Shlok plays guitar to a crowd of people. The tune is one of my fav songs 😳

Overall it was an awesome update. Loved it. Also like the pace at which u r taking the story forward. Update the next chapter soon 😊

Edited by Sam_15 - 10 years ago

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Samia

@Sam_15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

why is your bhatti i mean batti red🤔

Ahem Ahem!! 😳

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...
you two understand each other so well😃

who?

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

who?

no one😃

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: AshesToDust
no one😃

ohkie😃

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Natasha

@.Natasha.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Res... Three unres to make😔 I sometimes wish I weren't lazy

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
I accept any punishment you'd give Suri, because I am super duper late*looks away guiltily*
I reread the chapter to help me give big comments, and the next time I do this, don't hesitate to spank me... Now to the update,
This was so emotional, it made me teary Surs, I simply loved the way you brought in the flashbacks here... I swear it is very difficult to meet people like Shlok here in this world of cyinics, he is so very good friend and much more... How Hoor changed Aastha's life, impeccably portrayed... It happens to many, but not all get affected like this... I can surly tell that this girl's heart is crystal...
And Shlok's words were really touching, it was so true... You jinxed me with this update...
Hoor has been through a lot, had she had to die😭
Aastha did many things to mend her marriage, to make it work... She even spent the money she'd earned for the eye foundation She was lying to herself about liking her scumbag husband, she deserves more... The last part tugged my heart, it is important to confess on time and make no delay, Aashlok did a mistake not expressing...
Loved it, love you n sorry once again🤗

oh seem so ancient now😆

Its okay nats i am pretty sure you did not have the time or will😉 to read it but since now i am given the permission i will defo love to spank you for being late😆

hahahah i liked how to took to all the characters with their shortcomings😆

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