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@ashlok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Ohhh myyy Goooddd...😃
What a long comment my dear...😃
Thank youuu sooo much for appreciating me like this..
You really boost up my confidence with your comments..
Love you Aishu..❤️

love u tooo naina

actually naina its a gr8

update plz update the

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ashlok

love u tooo naina
actually naina its a gr8
update plz update the
next part sooon
waitinggg

I will update next part by the evening 😃

Edited by hp_2006 - 11 years ago

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
great update...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

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PART 3

{{RECAP:Kirloskar family's intro...Aastha, Varad and Jyoti's vaction is going to start the coming week..So Avdhoot also take a one month leave..They are planning to come to Mumbai to attend the wedding of the daughter of Avdhoot's colleague (Mr. Khanna)..After attending the wedding they had planned of spending their one month vacation in India}}

One week later, Mumbai:

Shlok and Siddharth were returning from a farewell day party at night...Shlok was driving the car and Siddharth was sitting near him..

Sh:Siddharth..the Party was really nice na..
Si:Yeah..you are right Shlok..now that our college is over, we will miss our friends...
Sh:Yeah..Anyways...And the good part is that we are going to have a 3 month vacation..(smiles)
Si:True..And after that we both will be joining for M.B.A..
Sh:Poor Sojal..She has only 2 months holiday..(laughs)
Si:Poor girl..(laughs)
A girl who was travelling in a car at their right side waved at Shlok..
G:Hey Shlok..
Sh:Hii Pooja..
P:(blows a flying kiss)Goodnight Shlok...
Sh:(waves)Goodnight sweetheart..(smiles)
And then he took the car forward and overtook that car...
Si:(laughs)Now you are going to miss these girlfriends too..
Sh:Who cares Siddharth..!!(laughs)All these girls were just for time pass...
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Meanwhile, at Melbourne(Australia) :

Their vacation started finally and the Kirloskar family was busy with their packing...Jyoti and Aastha were in their bedroom and were filling their suitcases with all the necessary things...
Jo:where is my handy cam..?(searches here and there)
As: Tai..Did you check inside the cupboard..?
Jo:No..I will check now..
As:Offo..Now where is my mobile charger...?
Jo:I saw it over there..(indicates the place)
As:Yes ..Got it...
Just then Varad came into the room..
Va:Aasthu, Jo, Did you see my i pod..?
Jo:Yes ...It's in the sitting room..I kept it on the couch..
Va:What is this Jyoti..?How many times I have told you not to keep it here and there..you are so careless ..(shakes his head disapprovingly)
Jo:Sorry dada...
Varad left the room and Jyoti and Aastha continued with their packing..
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Siddharth and Shlok reached home..Sojal was watching the TV, sitting on the couch. She didn't notice them coming...Shlok winked at Siddharth and went behind her slowly, without making any noise..He pounced on her and grabbed the remote...
So:Ouch...!!Who is that?...(sees Shlok) Shlok..!!
Sh:(laughs and sits on the sofa beside her)Come Siddharth..Sit down..Let's watch TV...(starts changing the channels)
Si:(excitedly)YES..!!(sits on her other side)
So:(irritated)Shlok..Give me the remote..I want to see that film...(and tries to grab the remote from him)
But Shlok didn't let her have the remote and he kept on changing the channels, while Sojal struggled with his hand..At last Shlok kept the cricket match which he wanted to watch and then he sat on top of the remote so that she couldn't get it...
So:(angrily)What the hell is this..!!.(and starts to beat him and pinch him)
Sh:Oww..Oww..Stop it Sojal..Ouch.. Siddharth..Help me yaar..She is a monster...!!
Siddharth holds her from behind and started to pull her backwards...Sojal turned back and started to hit him too...Anjali came into the hall hearing all the noise...
An:Siddharth..Sojal..Shlok..Stop it...
So:Kaaki..See this..These two are not giving the remote ..(and starts pinching Shlok again)Give it to meee...
An:Shlok..Just give it to her ..Why are you troubling my Soju..?
Sh:But Aayi...We wanted to watch the match now..
An:You guys have just returned from the party right..Go to your rooms and freshen up..
Si:(leaves Sojal and gets up)Ok Kaaki..
Sh:(makes an irritated face at Sojal and gets up)We will come NOW..You just wait..
So:(stuck out her tongue at him and takes the remote)Thank you Kaaki..(smiles at Anjali)
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Next Day morning, in the Flight to India:
Jyoti,Aastha and Kalindi were sitting together in the central row where as Varad and Avdhoot were sitting together at the seats near to the window..
Jo:Aasthu..It's a good thing that we have 1 month holiday..
As:Yeah..That is right...(smiles)
Jo:Aayi..When will we reach Mumbai Airport..?
Ka:In the afternoon..
As:The wedding is tomorrow right..?So will we be staying at Khanna uncle's home tonight..?
Ka:Yes beta..
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Siddharth was sleeping peacefully on his bed in the morning...Sojal came to his room and sat beside him..
So:(shaking him)Siddharth..Wake up..
Si:(closed eyes)Hmm..Go away Soju..Let me sleep..(turns to the other side)
So:Siddharth..Please..I have an idea...
Si:(closed eyes) Just go yaar..Don't disturb me so early in the morning..
So:SID..!!If you don't get up now..I will pour water over your face..Its 8 am...(hits his arm)
Si:(opens his eyes)Ouch..!!Why are you hitting me..I am getting up..(sits up)Now tell me..What do you want?(rubs his eyes and yawns)
So:(excitedly)Siddharth..I have an idea..Let's go for a one week tour..Only Me, You and Shlok..
Si:(smiles)Idea is really nice..But will they give us permission..?
So:Who...?Aayi Baba and all.? We will make them allow us to go..
Si:Hm..You really think they will let us...? They all know that you always fight with us both boys ..They won't let you come with us even if I and Shlok get the permission..
So:(angrily) What do you mean..? Why is it so that only you both get the permission..? ..That 's not fair haan..After all it my own idea..I won't let you go without me...Haan..!!
Si:Ok..Ok..Let us discuss this topic with Shlok..Come on..
Siddharth and Sojal came to Shlok's room and found him asleep on his bed...Both of them went and shook him..
Si:Shlok..Wake up..
So:Get up..Get up...
Sh:What is this Sid...Let me sleep..
So: Its already 8 o clock..
Sh:Soju..Go away...(opens his eyes)What do you both want..?(sits up and stretches himself)
Si:Shlok..We have a brilliant idea...
So:Hey..It's MY idea...
Si:OK yaar..It's her idea..Let's go for a one week trip to somewhere..Just the three of us..
Sh:What..?!!We both are going along with this Sojal..?Are you out of your mind, Siddharth..?
So:Shlok..!!
Sh:(laughs)Ok..Ok..But where will we go..?
So:That I don't know..You suggest some place..
Sh:(thinks)Alright...Let's go to GOA ...!!(looks at them with excitement)
Si:Wow!!Great idea..!!..Isn't it Soju..?
So:(smiles)Yeah...!!
Si:But Shlok..I guess that Aayi won't let Sojal to come with us..She always keeps fighting with us na..
Sh:Yes Soju..Siddharth is right..Kaaki won't let you..
So:Offo..What will I do now..?
Sh:You do one thing...We will plan the trip for day after tomorrow..So you should behave nicely with us today and tomorrow..So that Priya kaaki will allow you to come with us..Is that o.k..?
So:Ok..
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Khanna's Residence, Mumbai:

Jyoti and Aastha were sitting among the girls in the bride's bedroom..Jyoti and Aastha were looking beautiful in Indian outfits..The bride (Mr.Khanna's daughter) was looking really beautiful in her wedding outfit...Suddenly a little boy came running to the room..

Boy:The "Baraat" has arrived..

All the girls went to the balcony and looked outside..The 'baraat' was indeed coming towards the house..Jyoti and Aastha were excited when they saw the bridegroom sitting on the horse, and with a head gear adorned with flower strings..
Jo:Why is that fellow sitting upon the horse..?(giggles)
As:The tradition is like that Tai...I have seen in Hindi films..
Jo:Ohh...?Well..It's really funny...And we can't even see his face..What is that he has on his head yaar..?
As:It's called the 'Sehraa'...

They all walked down to the hall where the marriage was going to take place...Jyoti and Aastha went and stood with Kalindi who was talking with Mrs.Khanna..After some time Varad came to them..He was wearing a sherwani...
Va:Papa is calling all of you..
Ka:Me too..?
Va:Yes Aayi..

Jyoti,Aastha and Kalindi went with Varad...They saw Avdhoot looking at them and smiling and he was telling something to two men who were standing beside him..They were none other than Niranjan Agnihotri(Shlok's and Ranbir's father) and Ram Agnihotri (Siddharth's and Sojal's father)..As they came near...
Av: These are my daughters, Aastha and Jyoti..
Jo and As:Namaste...(smiles)
Ni & Rm:Namaste bete..(smiles)
Av:And this is my wife, Kalindi..
They also greeted each other..
Av:Kalindi, This is Ram and Niranjan Daada..Ram was my best buddy during my school days...and this is his elder brother..(indicating Niranjan )
Rm:(to Jyoti and Aastha) You both are in college right..?Which course are you doing...?
As:I am doing my Journalism degree..I have finished my first year...
Jo: Finished my second year degree in English Literature...
Rm:Oh..That's good..(smiles)
Av:(smiling)Kalindi, I am very lucky to meet them here..We are meeting after so many years..
Rm:Since he had gone to Australia , we didn't contact with each other..
Av:Yes..We were all very busy in our own life..
Ka:Do you all know Mr.Khanna then..?
Ni:(smiling)No ..We are from the groom's side..His father is our business partner ..
Rm:Yaaar Avdhoot, You remember Deepak..?
Av:Of course Ram..How can I forget my friends..?
Rm: Two days from now, it's his daughter's wedding..
Av:(smiles)Is it?
Rm:Haan..He was telling that he wanted to invite you too..But none of us knew your contact number or address..now if I tell him that you are here in Mumbai, then he will be really happy..

Niranjan: We would like you all to come and stay at our place, Avdhoot..
Rm:Daada..Even I was telling him the same thing..How can we let you all to stay in a hotel when we all are here..
Av:But...
Rm:Listen Avdhoot..No more excuses haan..You are coming with us ..That's final...I will just call my wife, Priya and inform about your arrival..
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Meanwhile at Agnihotri Mansion:

Since Sojal had after all behaved well for two days with her two brothers, the elders had given them permission to go for the trip..So Sojal, Shlok and Siddharth were all packing their bags to go to Goa..
Sojal was humming some songs as she was doing her packing...Just then Priya came to her room...

So:Aayi..Please help me to do my packing..
Pr:Sojal beta..I have come to tell you something else..
So:(concentrating in her packing) Tell na...
Pr:I am sorry beta..You all will not be able to go for this trip..
So:(turns to face her mother) What?!!
Pr:Yes beta..Your Baba just called up now..His best Friend and his family are coming here to stay with us..They will be staying here for some days..So he told me to cancel your trip..It won't be nice if you all go away when they are here..

Sojal was so shocked hearing all this and she was feeling really bad since her great plan had flopped...

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What will happen when the six youngsters meet?
Keep reading to know the answer..
Hope you all liked this part..
Plzz tell me through your comments..
Love,
Naina
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Natasha

@.Natasha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Awesome update Naina..

The reunion was very nice..

I felt like fighting with my brother while reading Sojal Sid n Shlok's fight...

Nw, Sojal's plan failed...

Update soon

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athmi

@athmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

brilliant update dear. 👏 👏 👏

each and every update of this story is giving me the memories of the times i spent with my sister. 😳

sojal the mistress in making plans 😃 loved the way the used to convince there parents. i really execute such kind of dramas 😆

astha seems to have good knowledge about Indian tradition than jo.

wow finally destiny is going to make the 6 youngsters to meet up their respective life partners 😉

waiting eagerly to read the next part. 😃

plz bring it today yaar. 😳

love you a lot 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Edited by athmi - 11 years ago

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Nicely done,...can't wait for them to meet. Update soon

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seeheeryou

@seeheeryou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Waiting for the 3 couplets 2 meet.. Do update soon!

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sruthykarthika

@sruthykarthika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Waw. Really really like it. I like the bonding b/w varad,astha and jothy.update soon and thanks for the pm..finally they are going to meet each other. Waw. Waiting for next part.