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sathuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Lovely update Naina...

Sojal's dream...wow so well written...

As soon as she saw Varad her heart starting to play its own game...

Sojal still in confusion and got hurt herself...

Varad is so caring...Loved the way he took care of sojal feet ...

Finally after asking so many question...Sojal got the guts to confess her love...

Varad has sensed his feeling for her...

Hope varad use the opportunity to confess his feeling to her...

The other four going to have the fun in their own way...

Hats off to you Naina...for giving equal importance to all characters...

waiting to read Josid confession...

guess that would also be in a unique way like the other two...

Thanks for the PM...

Waiting for the next part dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Lovely update Naina...

Sojal's dream...wow so well written...

As soon as she saw Varad her heart starting to play its own game...

Sojal still in confusion and got hurt herself...

Varad is so caring...Loved the way he took care of sojal feet ...

Finally after asking so many question...Sojal got the guts to confess her love...

Varad has sensed his feeling for her...

Hope varad use the opportunity to confess his feeling to her...

The other four going to have the fun in their own way...

Hats off to you Naina...for giving equal importance to all characters...

waiting to read Josid confession...

guess that would also be in a unique way like the other two...

Thanks for the PM...

Waiting for the next part dear...

Thank you sooo much Sathyaaa for your wonderful comments..😃😃😃

Glad that you liked this update and that you also enjoyed the other character's love story also..😃

I will update sooon😉

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: srilotus
Awesome update😃

Thank you soo much Srii😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: niki795
Awesome part
Loved it

Thanks yaar Nikiii...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

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PART 18

{{RECAP: Sojal has a romantic dream in which she says "I love you" to Varad..Early in the morning, both of them go for a walk in the beach and Sojal's toe gets injured..Varad take care of her and gives the necessary first aid..She asks about Varad's past relationships..She hugs Varad and tells him that he is really a nice person..Varad takes her to room and asks to take rest..When the others leave for the outing trip he suggests that he will be with her.. }}

In the bus, Shlok and Aastha sat with each other and Siddharth was left to sit with Jyoti again. They behaved like friends, but Siddharth was not at all able to forget his love and attraction for her. But still, for her happiness he tried to give his 100% to maintain this friendship.

Today, they were all going out to visit some famous churches in Goa.

Aastha and Shlok were really happy to be together. Shlok put his arm around Aastha and they were sitting like a romantic couple going for their honeymoon. Aastha wanted to be in his arms forever.

Siddharth and Jyoti couldn't see them since they were sitting at the back, away from everyone's eyes. Jyoti was reading a book as usual, wearing earphones and listening to her favorite songs. Sid was enjoying the view outside and the rain was drizzling slightly on the glass windows. Jyoti was sitting near the widow. Hence glancing outside the window from his seat had two benefits.

1. He could enjoy the view outside
and
2. He could glance at Jyoti now and again.

Jyoti was acting as if she was unaware of this. Actually she knew that she didn't want to be in a relationship, but still she couldn't help enjoying his attention. From the night he proposed to her, she had been in deep thought. Her mind was full of confusions. She had great opinion about him as a person. She had never met a boy as thoughtful and considerate as him in her life. He was funny and loving too at the same time. But still she didn't want to be in a relationship, she was afraid of being committed. She didn't want to be tied down to a married relationship for her whole life and she knew that Siddharth wants her as his wife. That was the main thing which was restricting her from getting close to Siddharth.

They reached the church and everyone got down from the bus. It was a beautiful church which was rich with ancient architecture. They all walked inside and everyone admired its breath taking interiors.

All of them settled down along the rows of benches in order to offer their prayers. Aastha knelt down and began to pray and Shlok followed suit.

Jyoti also knelt down with her palms joined in prayers. She prayed "Oh Jesus..Please bless Siddharth with all joys in his life. Please give him a nice girl who would love him more than herself. He deserves a really good wife and I don't think that I am the one for him. "

Meanwhile Sid was praying "Jesus..Please please please make Jyoti realize my love for her..She is a really nice girl and I don't want anything else in my life. I will try my level best to give her all the happiness in this world..Oh Jesus..Please listen to my prayers.."

After offering their prayers both of them opened their eyes simultaneously and glanced at each other's faces. Jyoti smiled at him and he smiled back.

After some time each of them got up one by one and walked out of the church. Siddharth and Jyoti walked out of the entrance door together. Jyoti was walking down the steps with her thoughts about Sid and suddenly she slipped and fell backwards. But just then he caught her by his one arm around the back of her waist and his other hand closed in around her wrist. Jyoti was in shock and she stared into his eyes for sometime as if in a trance. She was brought back into her sense when she heard his voice.

Si: Jyoti..Are you alright..?
Jo: Hmm..Yes..(straightens herself) Thank you Sid..(smiles at him)

After that they all got into the bus and started their journey to the next church they were going to visit.

Jyoti felt a tingling sensation in her heart as she thought about the way he caught her when she was about to fall. She gazed at him and saw that he was leaning back to the seat with his eyes closed. She smiled gently and kept on gazing at his innocent face. Because of some reason, she didn't want to take her eyes off him but she was finding it strange too. Slowly she too closed her eyes and slept off. But after some minutes she leant onto his shoulders comfortably in her sleep.

After sometime, they all reached the other church and the bus came to a halt. Siddharth was the first one to awake and he saw Jyoti's head on his shoulder. Without waking her, he kissed on top of her head gently. Jyoti opened her eyes as she felt him kiss on her head. She didn't let him know that she had woken up. Then he raised his hand and patted her forehead gently.

Si: Jyoti..Wake up..
Jo: (raises her head as if she is waking up then only) Huh..We reached..? (looks outside)
Si:(smiles) Yes..Come on now..(gets up)

Siddharth was so happy about the kiss and walked down the bus excitedly. Jyoti gazed at his back and she felt her heart flutter with excitement as she thought about the way he kissed her head. She could feel the love he felt for her in that simple gesture.
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After visiting that church and having lunch from a nearby restaurant, they all started their journey back. This time Jyoti purposefully leant onto his shoulders again and feigned sleep. Siddharth could feel the fragrance of her long and lustrous hair. He could feel the smell getting into his head. He rubbed his cheek on top of her head gently and he too dozed off within minutes. But Jyoti was waiting for a long time for him to kiss again, but it never happened. Jyoti felt a little sad when they finally reached a famous market place where there were lots of stalls.

Everyone got down and left off in separate groups. Shlok, Aastha, Siddharth and Jyoti were grouped together and Jyoti deliberately walked behind and she knew that Sid would walk with her. Their hands were brushing each other due to the rush in the market and so they had to walk close to each other. Slowly Jyoti slipped her fingers into his and intertwined with his hand. Sid was surprised and he looked at her. But she wasn't looking at him and so he also thought that she might just have held his hand for a sense of security in the rush of tourists. The warmth of his palm was seeping into her skin and she felt really good.

She saw a particular stall which showcased beaded ornaments. Beads of different sizes were glowing in the lights casted by the bulbs in the stall. She walked towards it pulling him along with her.

Jo: Wowww..These are lovely..Isn't it Sid..?
Si: You are right Jo..They are beautiful..

She took up a particular necklace with turquoise color stone beads and admired them. She turned to the shop keeper and asked.

Jo: This is so good..How much for this..?

But the cost of the necklace didn't appeal her so much. It was too costly, she thought. She kept it down and walked off again.

But Siddharth handed the money to the shopkeeper hastily and pocketed the necklace, unseen by her.

They all did some shopping.
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In the evening, they all walked out of the lift at the second floor and went to Sojal's room. Varad was still there and he was reading a magazine, sitting on a sofa. Sojal was reclining on her bed, with pillows supporting her back.

After spending some time with her, all of them ordered for a dinner in the room itself. When it was time to sleep, all of them including Varad left the room wishing her good night.

Aastha and Shlok walked off towards the lift to go back to their rooms in the third floor. Varad, Siddharth and Jyoti unlocked the doors to their rooms which were nearby.

Jyoti walked inside her room and opened her new bag which she had purchased. But she was surprised to find a small lump wrapped clumsily in tissue paper inside it. Feeling curious, she un-wrapped the tissue and found the same turquoise color stone necklace inside it. On the tissue paper there was a message.

This is a token of our beautiful friendship

This will make you cherish this Goa trip
-Sid-

Tears of happiness filled her eyes and she blinked her eyelids in the various emotions which were arising in her heart. In an instant she stood up and ran out of her room. She knocked upon his door in excitement and he opened the door. She flung her arms around him and held him close to her.

Jo: (still hugging)Thank you Sid..You are so nice..You bought it for me..!
Si: (smiling) I just wanted you to be happy Jyoti..You had liked it so much na..
Jo:(pulls out of the hug and faces him) My happiness is so much important to you Sid, even if it comes at a huge price..? You are spoiling me, Sid..
Si: Well..Your happiness is priceless for me..

Jyoti had understood that by now. She didn't need him to tell it to her. But Jyoti had decided to stop playing hide and seek games with her own feelings. She realized that she loves him dearly and decided that she will surely put an end to this "only friendship" mode.

Still she decided to tease him a little bit.

Jo: Well your friendship is really priceless for me too..

Siddharth's face fell for a second and he forcefully made himself smile again.

Jo: You hold this..

She handed him the necklace, walked towards the mirror and stood before it. Feeling perplexed, he followed her and stood behind her looking at her reflection. He thought that her expression looked different, there was a special glow to her face and the way she smiled at him was simply breath taking. She raised her hand to the side of her head and shifted her long hair sideways baring her back neck.

Jo: Sid, can you wear it around my neck. I want you to do it.

Siddharth felt as if he was dreaming. With shivering hands he placed the necklace around her neck and clasped the ends together. Still he couldn't understand why she was making him do all this.

Jo:(happily) How do I look, Sid..?
Si: You look...(smiles) Gorgeous..

She turned towards him with a blazing look in her eyes and hugged him tightly. But he instantly felt that it was not a hug of friendship. It was full of pure love and he could sense the waves of attraction passing through their bodies. He hugged her back and held her even more tightly.

Jo: I love you Sid..I love you..

She raised her face to him and gazed into his eyes intently. He got the message and he kissed her lips softly. It felt magical and he gently sucked on to her petal like lips with all his love and she hung onto his shoulders for support. The kiss lasted for about a few more minutes till they were fighting for dear breath. And then they hugged each other again.
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