ISHQ UNLIMITED--FINAL PART 21 AND EPILOGUE UPDATE IN PAGE 89 - Page 35

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coolhi1988 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006



Thanks a looot for all your appreciation yaar...😃
All your guess work for the upcoming story is somewhat correct..😃
Plzzz keep reading to know more..


u keep on writing & i wil keep on reading...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Update Naina...
Sojal and Varad are back to normal...
Sid is totally in his own world with jo...
Poor Ashlok try to avoid each other...
I love the way astha is jealous with aditi...
Wow...Finally they danced together...wonderful writing dear...
Now they r staying close to each other...Hope to see more fun...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago



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PART 12

{{RECAP: All the six youngsters get into the bus..Shlok and Aastha enjoy dancing with each other in the bus. Siddharth and Jyoti enjoy each other's company..Varad and Sojal patch up with each other..Aditi is after Shlok all the time..Aastha gets jealous of Aditi..Aastha and Shlok sleep in the bus sitting close to each other..They all reach a private resort of Shlok's friend Karan and everyone gets a room each..Shlok deliberately gets the keys to the room opposite Aastha's}}

Aastha walked inside her room and looked around. She liked it very much. Suddenly her gaze fell upon the bed on which there was an ornate envelope. Feeling intrigued, she took it in her hands. It was an invitation- invitation for a Beach party on that evening.

She opened the invitation card and found out that the dress code is Black for girls and Red for the guys. The venue was the private beach behind the resort and the time was from 7 p.m.

She looked at her watch and checked the time. It was already 5.30 p.m.

She had a quick shower and after that started to get ready for the party. She was partly excited and was partly anxious about this party. And the main reason was- Shlok Agnihotri.
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At 6.50 p.m Aastha was looking gorgeous in this dress



She was checking her reflection in the mirror. Her hair was set in beautiful curls (like the hairstyle which she had in the Haldi ceremony of Jyoti in our show). Her lips were shining and glossy and her eyes had the perfect make up.

Suddenly she heard a knock on the door. She frowned and decided to check who it was. She opened the door and there stood Shlok, who was looking hot in a red jacket and white shirt with blue jeans. Shlok checked her out from head to toe with his passionate stare.

Sh:(huskily) You look hot..(smiles wickedly)

Aastha was at a loss of words and she blushed profusely. Shlok was quite delighted at the way she was reacting to his compliment.

Sh: Let's go then..Would you wish to come with me..?
As: Shlok..(uncertainly)
Sh: As a friend of course..
As: (smiles) Oh..Ok..

Shlok offered her his arm and suddenly she remembered something.

As: Oops..I forgot my footwear..

Aastha went and sat on her bed and put on a pointed heels slipper on her one foot. Shlok walked towards her and looked at her amusedly.

Sh: Are you sure you can manage with these high heels on the sand at the beach..?
As:(looks up while wearing the slipper on the next foot) Why not..?

Saying so, she smiled at him confidently and got up from the bed. Next moment she slipped backwards and she caught onto Shlok's collar for support. Both of them fell on to the soft mattress and Shlok's face was on her neck. He inhaled her smell and was totally feeling addicted. Aastha could feel his hot breath on her neck and she closed her eyes since she was turned on for a moment. But still she couldn't lose control like this. She pushed Shlok away from her and he lay next to her on his side. She turned her face to him.

As: Sorry Shlok..(nervously)

Shlok laughed suddenly with an amused expression.

Sh: I told you that you shouldn't wear those high heels..(laughs)

Aastha also felt funny and she too laughed looking into his face..

Shlok got up from the bed and kept his hands on his hips.

Sh: Now get up and change your footwear..We are getting late..I will be waiting for you outside the room..
As: Ok (smiles)
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Meanwhile Jyoti was walked out of her room wearing this:



She was looking extremely pretty. Her room was on the second floor. Soon she was joined by Varad, Sojal and Siddharth who occupied rooms next to hers.

Sojal was wearing this:



Siddharth was wearing a red shirt and blue jeans whereas Varad was wearing a Reddish maroon velvet suit and black white jeans. Everyone was looking good.

Jo: Daada..How am I looking..?
Va: You are looking great, Jo..

And then his eyes fell upon Sojal. He thought that she was looking extremely pretty in that outfit. Sojal wanted him to say something . But he was afraid if he would hurt her again and so he just smiled at her amicably. Siddharth approached Jyoti in no time.

Si: Jyoti, would you like to be my pair in the party..?

Jyoti smiled and agreed and they walked off arm in arm. Varad looked at Sojal with a "What about us?" kind of look. Sojal was cross with him for not complimenting her. So she walked off in a huff. Varad gave a "Now what did I do..?" kind of look and followed her to the party.
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Aastha and Shlok walked into the beach party area arm in arm. There were lots of strangers too in the party. All of them were staying at the resort. Aastha was dying to find Aditi and show her that she was paired up with Shlok. There she was and she was paired up with Karan. Aditi eyed them with shock and gave a fake smile to them as they approached near, but Aastha was quite sure that she saw her eyes widen with shock just a moment before. Aastha smiled heartily at her. Karan came near Shlok and hugged him.

Ka: Buddy..You look cool man..
Sh:(smiles) Thanks Karan..
Ka: Listen, I have to talk something with you..Girls, please excuse us huh..We will be back in a minute.
As& Ad: Sure..
And they walked away together.
Ad: Aastha..are you and Shlok dating each other..?
As: (smiles) Why are you asking..?
Ad: No..I was just..
As: Well..I am so sorry Aditi..I don't think that I should answer your question..It's way too personal..

Just then Aastha spotted Jyoti, Sid, Varad and Sojal standing together in a group..

As: (smiles) Now..please excuse me..

And she walked towards them. She looked at Sojal and was amazed.

As: Woww Soju..You are looking great..
So: (delighted)Thanks Aasthu..(eyes Varad irritatedly)
As: And Taii..You are looking awesome..quite classy..(winks)
Jo: Thanks my dear..And by the way my little sis is looking like a princess..I've never seen you dressed up like this..What is the secret behind this huh..?
Si: (smiles)That's so true Aastha..You are looking really nice..
As: (laughs gently) Nothing Taii..Just felt like getting dressed up..
Va: Where is Shlok, Aastha..Have you seen him..?
As: Oh yes Daada..We came together to the party..He went off somewhere with his friend Karan..
Va: Let me check..(walks off)
Varad was walking along the crowd and when he collided with someone accidentally.
Va: Oh..I am so sorry..
He saw that it was Mansi..
Ma: It's ok Varad..I am sorry..I should have been more careful..Varad..I wanted to ask you something..
Va: Ok..go on..
Ma: I saw that you are not having a partner..So I thought if I could be...err...your pair for tonight's party..(smiles nervously)
Va: (smiles) Sure..I would be delighted..(holds out his hand)
Ma: Ok then..(takes it happily) Let's go and have something to drink..(indicates the bar at a side)
Va: Why not..(laughs gently)

Sojal spotted Varad walking hand in hand with Mansi and she was too surprised to find out that she was actually feeling bad. But she couldn't understand why. Just then a guy who was with them in the bus, approached her.

Guy: Hii...I am Shlok's friend..You are his sister, right..?I have seen you in our college..
So: Hii..My name is Sojal..What is your name..?
Guy: My name is Krish..I just came to say that you are looking gorgeous..
So:(happily) Thank you..
Kr: You are alone, right..?
So: No..I am here with my friends..
Kr: No..No..You are not having a pair, right..?
So: Hmm..You are right..
Kr: Then be my pair for tonight..
So:(eyes him doubtfully) Only for tonight ok..I don't even know you well..
Kr: (laughs gently) You are so funny..Ok babes..Only for tonight..Shall we..?(offers his arm)
So: (takes it) Alright..(smiles)
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Friends..Did you like this part..?
The next part is going to be pretty exciting for you all..
Lots of romance will be there..
Plzz let me know your comments and views..
Love,
Naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Nice Update Naina...

Sojal and Varad are back to normal...
Sid is totally in his own world with jo...
Poor Ashlok try to avoid each other...
I love the way astha is jealous with aditi...
Wow...Finally they danced together...wonderful writing dear...
Now they r staying close to each other...Hope to see more fun...
Thanks for the PM...



Thanks a looot my dear Sathya..
Glad to know that u loved this update..
Plzz keep reading for more fun and romance😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update❤️
You make use of your profession here too??!!
Party wears you preferred were so pretty😉 😆
But why not pics for gents costumes🤪🤣
" You look hot"☺️
And footwear 🤣
"Are you dating"🤬
In short,👍🏼
Edited by anu123. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update once again... naina🤗
loved it entirely...
girls clothes r fab...
ashlok, jo-sid 2gether in d party...
sojal angry on varad for he dint comment on her dressing... & varad afraid to comment...😆😆
sojal jealous on varad-mansi pair...
aditi jealous on seeing ashlok 2gether... & astha naughty created a doubt in aditi's mind with her double meaning sentence...🤪😉😆
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nicee
Like the part between aastha and shlok
Hiw they fell on the bed and that aastha liked it and was turned on
Poor shlok i wonder what he must have felt in that moment
And the aditi and aastha conversation was to good
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update..
dresses were so good..u have good taste
loved Shlok and Astha fall
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
you revealed about next update so please update it soon difficult to wait for romance
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok so party has just begun
waiting for the next part
do update soon

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