ISHQ UNLIMITED--FINAL PART 21 AND EPILOGUE UPDATE IN PAGE 89 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
I really really really like it. Shlok and astha are in fight at first sight?. I like the dialogue of shlok, Vaasthuuu. Huhhh... and the incident in the girls room was excellent. I really like it. Update soon and Tf pm.
Posted: 11 years ago
superb naina
love it dear
sojal and varad sooo funnny
sooo pooor varad
i think in next update
sid and joyti will meeet
superbbb dear
still ashlok jagda mode on
great going
do cont sooon
sooo sorry dear
4 commenting late
sooo sid is a poeter
lets seee how jo and sid
gonna be frnds
and the war between ashlok
is going on
the concept is superbbb
i love their cute little fights
they r reminding me
my bro and siss

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthykarthika

I really really really like it. Shlok and astha are in fight at first sight?. I like the dialogue of shlok, Vaasthuuu. Huhhh... and the incident in the girls room was excellent. I really like it. Update soon and Tf pm.



Hiii Sruthii😊

Thanks for commenting my dear😃
Happy to know that you like the Vaaastu part😆 and the incident in the girls room
Keep reading and supporting yaar😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashlok

superb naina
love it dear
sojal and varad sooo funnny
sooo pooor varad
i think in next update
sid and joyti will meeet
superbbb dear
still ashlok jagda mode on
great going
do cont sooon
sooo sorry dear
4 commenting late
sooo sid is a poeter
lets seee how jo and sid
gonna be frnds
and the war between ashlok
is going on
the concept is superbbb
i love their cute little fights
they r reminding me
my bro and siss



Hello my dear Aishuuu...😊
I am glad to know that you liked the So-Var Part
Hmm yes..Sid and Jo will interact in the next part😳
Ashlok war is on..and we love it right😆
Thank youuu sooo much for alll your appreciation yaar...
Love,
Naina
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Fantastic update naina..


Thanks a looot yaaar😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART 6


{{RECAP:...The youngsters tell the elders that they are not coming with them to attend the wedding at Pune...Sojal snores at night and Jyoti and Aastha get disturbed...Aastha and Siddharth become good friends...Aastha and Shlok silent fight continues..Sojal attacks Varad when he tried to wake her by shocking her}}

They had breakfast; Ranbir went off to the office...All the 6 youngsters were sitting in the living room...

Sh: Varad, Siddharth...what about a game of basket ball...?
Va: Sure..But where is the court..?
Si: Great idea, Shlok..The court is in our backyard Varad..Come on boys..
So: Only Boys..!! No way..We will also come with you.. Isn't it, Jo..?
Jo: Of course...Come on Aasthu...
Sh: Girls... and basket ball...!!(laughs)What a joke...!

Aastha went and stood in front of Shlok and looked at him with her brows raised...

As:(haughtily) Why can't we play basket ball, Mr. Shlok...?
Sh:(looked into her eyes angrily) You are only as tall as the basket..Need any other reason..?
Va:(patting Shlok's shoulder)Shlok...Aastha plays basketball well...Better than me anyways...
Si: Is it..?!! Then she is in my team...(comes to Aastha)
As:(smiles and gives a high five to Siddharth)You're my best friend, Siddharth..
Si:(smiles)Always Aasthu...!
Sh:(surprised)Siddharth...?!
So: Whatever !! I am with my brother, Shlok...(holds his hand) And I know that we are going to win...For your information...Shlok is the basket ball champion of our College...
Jo:(smiles) Is it..? Then I will join his team...(moves to him)
As:(surprised) Taii...?!
Va: And I'm with you Aasthu...(smiles)
Sh:(moves closer to Aastha's face)We will see who is going to win...!
As: Yeah..We will see...!

And the both teams walked out to the basket ball court which was in the back yard...When they reached the basket ball court...

Sh: Come on Soju and Jyoti...

And his team huddled together in one corner and discussed their team plans while Aastha called her team mates and did the same in another corner...

The game started and the ball was with Shlok...He dribbled the ball deftly and avoided Varad who was trying to get the ball from him...But Aastha came and blocked him and before he realized anything, she snatched the ball from him and proceeded towards the other team's basket...Jyoti and Sojal tried to block her, but they couldn't...She reached under the basket and threw the ball and it fell right into the basket...Siddharth and Varad clapped and cheered loudly for their team...Shlok was surprised at her ability to play so well...

Shlok: Come on Sojal...Get the ball...

Sojal caught the ball and she dribbled it running towards the opposite team's basket and Aastha snatched the ball from her...She ran again to the opposite direction, but Shlok caught up with her and snatched the ball from her and he ran towards the opponent's basket..Aasthu tried to block his way and snatch the ball but she couldn't...He threw the ball towards the basket and it fell right into the basket...

So: Great Shlok...(ran and hugged him)

Siddharth caught the ball and he kept on dribbling (bounce on the ground) it and he didn't move from the spot...Aastha was waiting for him to pass the ball to her...

Va:(impatiently)What are you doing Siddharth..?Come on...pass the ball to Aastha...
Si: But I'm going to score Varad..(smiles at him and continues to dribble on the spot)
Va: But Siddharth...What are you doing man...?

Just then Jyoti came to him and tried to grab the ball from him...But he didn't allow her to take the ball..

Si: Ha..ha..ha...Jyoti...Poooh...(laughs and dribbles)
Jo:(tries to get the ball) Uff...Siddharth..!!

Shlok came from behind and deftly snatched the ball from him..Siddharth, who didn't realize it, was still acting like bouncing the ball stupidly..Jyoti laughed seeing this and she ran after Shlok to help him, in case anyone blocked his way...Varad blocked him and Shlok passed the ball to Jyoti and she ran towards the basket...Varad snatched the ball from her and passed it to Aastha, who took it and ran towards the opponent basket..

So: Shlok..Get the ball...

Shlok ran after her and tried to get the ball, but this time she didn't allow him to snatch the ball from her..She moved towards the basket and threw the ball into it and scored again..Shlok grew impatient and caught the ball, but yet again Aastha snatched the ball and tried score...Feeling angry, Shlok caught hold of her waist (with one hand) from behind and turned her vigorously to face him, their abdomens touching each other...She was surprised and she dropped the ball...At first he looked into her eyes with a fierce look, but his look softened when he gazed into her beautiful, sparkling eyes...He just couldn't take his eyes off her face...
She also stared into his eyes and was lost in them...They were unaware of what was happening around them..Sojal was shouting "Come on Shlok", Varad was calling "Aasthaaa" and Jyoti and Siddharth were just staring at them surprised...

Suddenly Shlok came into his senses and he released her and looked down nervously...She came into her senses but she was feeling flustered and she didn't know what to do...
Siddharth took the ball from the ground and threw it up to the basket, but the ball bounced at the board and fell down...Sojal came running to him laughing...

So: (laughs)..Let me score now..(takes the ball)
Si: Oh No...(runs after her)

She took the ball and ran as fast as she could towards the other basket...Jyoti and Varad ran after them to help Sojal and Siddharth respectively...Shlok came back to his usual self and he clapped and cheered them...Aastha was still feeling flustered and she was wondering what made her stare into his eyes like that, even when he was trying to stop her from scoring...She gazed at Shlok who was clapping and cheering for Sojal...She looked at his strong and well carved biceps, his broad shoulders and then to his handsome face...She began to think that she hadn't seen anyone so handsome in her life...

Sh: Come on Soju...score

But Varad took the ball from her...But Sojal didn't like it...

So: Hey..(pulled his collar from behind) Where are you going huh..?!
Va: This is cheating...Leave me..!!Leave me...!!
So:(bullies him) Give me the ball...
Va:(struggles in her grip) Are you going to tear my shirt..? You are crazy..?!
Si: No cheating, Soju...(caught hold of Sojal's hand and tried to free Varad's collar)

Shlok and Aastha came running to them...Shlok also tried to pull Sojal off and at last Siddharth and Shlok freed Varad from her grip...

Va:(sighs)Phew...Shlok, Siddharth..You guys deserve some special award for staying with this Sojal...Oh God..!!(shakes his head and sighs again) How do you put up with her.?!
So:(irritated) What did you just say..you monkey..(tries to get him again)
Sh: Now Soju..Behave yourself Ok..I will tell Kaaki when she calls..(then naughtily) If you don't want to come to Goa with us, then it's Ok haan..

This worked...!Sojal controlled her anger at once and became a totally cheerful girl...

So:(smiling)No Shlok...(shrugging her shoulders)See..I am a good girl...Come on..Come on..Let us play...

Va:(laughs)That's like a good girl...

Sojal smiled artificially to him and thought " I will show you later..you idiot"
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The game resumed...As the game progressed, Shlok and Aastha didn't understand what melted the cold, frozen barrier between them...They were feeling cheerful than before as they competed with each other in scoring...They were laughing a lot while one tried to snatch the ball and the other was not allowing to snatch...The whole revengeful attitude to each other started to change...
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After some time they all grew tired...Aastha's team was leading now with the score 16-12...

Si: Guys..I am tired..No more basket ball haan...(bends down and touches his knees)
So:(irritated) Sid...You want to stop now because your team is leading right...I want to play ..Our team will win..
Jo: No Sojal..We are really tired..Let's stop this...
Va: Wow Aastha...So we won this game...(happily gives a high five to her)
So: Hey you monkey Varad..Just Shut up haan...Shlokk..Come on..Let us play..We will surely win..

Aastha looked at Shlok...

Sh: Leave it Soju..Everyone is tired..What if they won..? Let it be...
So:(frowns) Alright...Congrats Aastha..(smiles and hugs her)

Shlok, Sojal and Jyoti began to congratulate Aastha, Siddharth and Varad one by one..When it was Shlok's turn to congratulate Aastha, he came near her and held out his hand...Aastha took his hand and smiled...

Sh: Congrats..(smiles)
As: Thank you...(smiles) Has your opinion changed then..?
Sh: What?
As:(naughtily) Regarding girls and basket ball..?
Sh: Oh..(laughs) I still think that girls can't play basket ball well...
As: Uff..?!!You are so mean...!
Sh: No...I was telling that our team lost because of the two girls in my team...(smiles)

Sojal and Jyoti heard this and they turned to him..

So:(shocked) What...!! What did you say..?
Jo:(irritated)What did you just say, Shlok..?
Sh:(laughs) Just joking girls...!!(then whispers to Aastha) But it's true...

Aastha smiled at him..

Jo: I am feeling thirsty yaar..come on Sojal..Let us go to the kitchen and drink some water..And then we will bring water for everyone else too..

So: O.k..

Jyoti and Sojal went inside the house to bring some water for all to drink...

Shlok and Aastha were the ones who had played wonderfully all along...And by now Shlok really started to admire this smart and beautiful new girl from Australia...He was standing under the basket and was casually practicing by putting the ball inside it again and again...He looked at Aastha, who was standing with Siddharth and Varad at a corner...They were talking cheerfully to each other...

Si: Aastha..You play really well...
As:(laughing)Thank you Siddharth...

Shlok thought "She looks more beautiful when she laughs..."

Va: Siddharth..(claps on Siddharth's shoulder) I am her coach..That's why she is the best..
As: That's true haan..(smiles)
Si: But she plays even better than you Varad..What about that...?
Va: You know what..Some students are excellent...They could be even better than the coach himself..

Aastha suddenly thought about Shlok and she looked at him...She was surprised to see him staring at her...She smiled at him slightly...But the way he was looking at her..man!!His eyes were so passionate...Her smile faded and she also began to stare back at him with equal intensity...Varad and Siddharth, who were busy talking with each other didn't realize that a love story was blossoming just beside them...

Jyoti and Sojal came back with two bottles filled with water...

So:(cheerfully) Come on everyone..We have brought water for all of you..

Shlok and Aastha came to their senses and they broke their stare...Siddharth, Varad and Aastha went towards Sojal and Jyoti...But Shlok stood there itself and continued practicing...

Si : Give me Soju...I am feeling so thirsty..

Sojal handed over the bottle to Siddharth and he started drinking..Jyoti handed her bottle to Aastha, and after drinking some water, Aastha handed it to Varad...

Va: Shlok...You don't want...?
Sh: I am coming now..

He threw the ball down and walked towards them..Shlok took the bottle from Varad and drank some water...But then Kanya came to the back yard and announced that their lunch was ready..

They all sat around the dining table..Ranbir had come from office to have lunch and he was already sitting at the table which was set with food...
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After the lunch, Ranbir went back to work...Aastha, Sojal and Jyoti decided to help Kanya in cleaning up the table and kitchen...Shlok, Varad and Siddharth came and sat in the living room...

Va: What are we going to do this afternoon...?
Si: Varad..We shall play something like an indoor game..(thinks for some time) Let us play caroms..
Va:(excitedly)Wow!!Good idea..
Sh: Ok then..Let's go upstairs...Siddharth's room..
Shlok, Varad and Siddharth walked upstairs and went inside Siddharth's room...
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After cleaning up, Kanya, Aastha, Sojal and Jyoti came into the living room...

Jo: Where is every one...?
As: They were here..(looks around)
So: I know..They would have gone upstairs..
Ka: Girls..You all go upstairs..I need to have some rest..ok..?
Girls: Ok, vahini..

Kanya went to her room and the three girls walked upstairs..Sojal led them towards Siddharth's room..She opened the door and they saw the boys who were playing caroms in high spirits...

Va: Wow!!Good shot Shlok..!!
Si: Now my turn...(gets ready to strike)
So:(cheerfully) GUYS..!! WE HAVE COME..!!
Siddharth was shocked and his strike didn't go well...
Si:(annoyed) What is this Soju..? Why do you shout always..?
So:(annoyed) What did I do..?
Si: You spoiled my shot..with your shouting..!
Jo: Ok chill Siddharth..! Shall we also join in, boys...?
Va: What is this, Jyoti!! You girls go and do something else..Can't you all let us boys have some fun ..(shakes his head in disapproval)
So:(angrily) Monkey Varad.? Just shut up haan..We are not some kind of 'Aliens' who have come to conquer your world..
Si: 'Aliens'...!!(laughs loudly)
So: Siddharth..!! I will stop your laughing now..

Angrily, she went towards the carom board and scrabbled all the caroms pieces and began to upset the board...

Sh: Sojal...SOJAL...What are you doing yaar...?
Va: You...!!

So:(annoyed) Now you all play..huhh...(walked back towards Jyoti and Aastha) Come on girls..

Si: (annoyed)Offo..This Sojal...!

The girls didn't turn back and they walked out of the room and shut the door...

Sh: It's ok Siddharth..!! Let us start again..
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Thank you for reading this part..😊
Plzzz let me know your views about this part..
Love,
Naina

Edited by hp_2006 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great part Naina!
I loved the whole basket ball game...
I love Sid n Aasthu's frndship...
Shlok thinks Aastha is beautiful wen she smiles nah? Aha
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NatashaRia

Great part Naina!

I loved the whole basket ball game...
I love Sid n Aasthu's frndship...
Shlok thinks Aastha is beautiful wen she smiles nah? Aha



Thanks my dear..Tashu..😊
nice to know that you liked the game..
Yes Shlok is truly attracted to her..😉
Keep reading yaar

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Update Naina...
Its full of masti between 6 of them...
Loved the way u have described the basket ball game...
Shlok started falling in love... he is admiring her...
Sojal as usual annoying everyone...
Sid and Astha getting well with each other...
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for the update dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Nice Update Naina...

Its full of masti between 6 of them...
Loved the way u have described the basket ball game...
Shlok started falling in love... he is admiring her...
Sojal as usual annoying everyone...
Sid and Astha getting well with each other...
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for the update dear...



Thanks my dear😃

Glad you liked the game..

For more masti and romance keep reading yaar😊

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