Posted: 11 years ago
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hi guys, i know today we r missing our ebp alot so i thought of writing an os. plz bear as im not familiar with os. and guys i thought of making my os special .plz read this os and give me ur precious comment. plz plz plz plz commmenttt guys im waitinggg

unveiling the mask

Shlok started to yell at aastha " aastha what the hell r u doing dammit. How many times im warning u aastha but u r still not listening me or do u like to hurt me aastha. What do u want? Why r u doing like this aastha" he screamed in his top voice. Aasthas body started shivering on witnessing shloks kamina mood. She never ever dream like this. Is he is the same shlok who loves aastha a lot. But aastha didn't shows her fear to him as it is her weakness. She need to fight for justice. She cant take aback. Whats going on in agni manson is completely wrong. Sure everyone will regret for this.

Aastha also started to roar like a tigress infront of her shlok. "shlok even I also knows to scream like u. I don't know shlok why this love is hurting me again and again phir se. from the beginning shlok this love is hurting me a lot . its broking my heart again and again but u don't care about it he na. leave it shlok trust is more important between every relationship but u didn't trust me so whats the big deal? Leave me shlok I don't wanna live my life in this hell anymore"

Shloks eyes begin to change into red bcoz of his anger towards his cutie wifey. He tightens his fist to control his anger but her every single words are adding more fuel to his anger. He hold her very tightly and some tears begin to fall in her cheeks. Then shlok realizes its hurting her and he leaves her and goes out. Aastha sits near the bed and cries a lot. She didn't know this face of herrr shlok. Is it he?.finally she decides to leave the agni manson as no one including her beloved shlok is also not beliving her so, whats the need of staying in this house.

Aastha comes to her house. I mean now she is at krisolakars mansion. She knocks at the door. Her mom kalindi opens the door and shocked to see aastha in the midnight. Aastha suddenly hugs kalindi and breaks into tears. Kalindi is very very shocked by aasthas sudden action because her daughter is strong enough to face all the trouble. But now she is crying that means what wrong in her in-laws.

Kalindi brings aastha inside the room. Avdhoot signs kalindi to leave aastha alone. Kalindi,avdhoot and ajju leaves from aasthas room. Kalindi says to ajju "maa im soo scared. Do u remember the pandit ji who looks at our aasthas jathaka have told us that she will face many trouble he na. im soo sad maaa". Ajju cosoles kalindi saying"leave it kalindi. Our aastha is very very brave maybe there will be a small misunderstanding between shlok and aastha. Let it be. I hope they will re unite sooon. Tum chinta mat karo sab theek ho jaya(don't worry everything will be okay)

Aasthas monologue

Is this is the same shlok who loves me a lot . he is about to slap me. I don't know shlok why this love is very hard to mee. I thought u will trust me shlok but u didn't and u have broken my trust into thousand nahi million pieces that cant be rejoinable. U cant win my trust shlok never ever. U have proven me once again that u don't care about me. U don't care about my pains my sorrows...(aastha cries thinking their sweet memories)

Shloks monologue

Aastha I didn't mean to hurt u. but u r hurting me a lot aastha. Why r doing things against my baba. Aastha u don't care about me. Aastha once again u have reminded me never to trust girls.aastha I hate u aastha. U have broken my love towards you. Love is blind aastha. It's a big spell to all human being. It will give only pain only tears only sorrows...(shlok cries thinking his sweet memories with aastha)

Flashback

When abhay comes back from the jail he pleads everyone NA says "joyti is my happiness abhay u have hurt my joyti agar meri khushi again don't make this mistake otherwise I will spare u" and asks joyti to leave with abhay as she and her daughter needs him. NA says that what will society say about u meri bachhi I cant bear those rumours. Ur daughter needs a father joyti leave with him"

Aastha brokes the silent and says "busss. Enough baba im not going to let joyti tai leave this house. R u ruining tumare bachhi ka life for ur prestige. And I know u r the one who gets joyti tai ka sign to get abhay released and u have blamed saasu bhai for that. I know u r the one who is behind everything.i know baba saasu bhai is obeying only ur command". Shlok becomes angry on hearing aasthas statement and drags her to their room. The third world war held in their room and finally aastha leaves the house.

Present

Shlok is lying on his couch.he goes to kitchen to get water and hears a sound there he founds Anjali crying agar mrs.agnihotri crying. He is shocked by seeing mrs.ahnihotri in this state. Her eyes r red and she is having bruises in her hand . he hides himself behind the door. NA comes and bends to Anjali he caress her hand and says "Anjali I have told u to keep everythinh under u but tumare bahu is crossing all the limits. Yes of course I make joyti sign on that papers to release abhay whats wrong in it? I don't want my prestige to be ruin. I think I will be happy rather joyti suicide or something but she is after meee she is after my prestige. today even tumari bahu have crossed all the limits but I know mera beta will never give up me for his wifey.anjali says "sahib plz beat me or punish me. When shlok is child he loves me a lot but u have ruin my love for my childrens. U have made them hate me. plz sahib don't ruin mera beta shlok ka life. Plz sahib plz let my children to stay happy...plzzz (she is about to touch NA ka feet shlok jumps between them ). Na and Anjali r shocked seeing shlok. Shlok is having tears in his eyes he says "aayi". Anjali gets emotion on seeing her son calling her aayi again. Shlok hugs his mom and cries a lot. He cries hugging her tightly.NA is shocked to find out that shlok has seen all the whole conversation between him and Anjali. Na says " shlok beta" shlok interrupt him saying " u have lost the rights to call me like this mr.agnihotri I consider u as my god but u have...shloks voice breaks.he says to Anjali "plz forgive me aayi. Plz forgive me for everything I have done with u. even aastha tries to prove the truth but I have broken her heart tooo. Aayi im sooo sorry aayi as im a big foolish one who don't know what is truth and what is fake. Ur love for me is pure aayi but I forget to notice that plz forgive me" he cries in his mothers lap.anjali caress his face and says "no beta im khush as my son is back u go and bring my bahu. So is sooo poor my dear go and bring her" shlok says"u r right aayi I have hurt her a lot I will bring her back"and he leaves to krisolakars mansion.

Aastha is in her room crying alone.shlok comes to her home kalindi is shocked to find shlok in their house. Shlok asks"maaa where is aastha?". Avdhoot says"she is in her room beta u go".shlok leaves to her room . kalindi questioned him for letting shlok to go inside avdhoot says "kalindi I thin there is a small misunderstanding between them let them to solve it by theirself". Kalindi nodded yes.

Shlok comes to aasthas room and locks the door. Aastha turns and find shlok there. She runs to the door to open it but shlok lifts her and put her on bed. Aastha saya"shlok what r u doing? This is my house and my room I will scream what the hell r u trying to do?". Shlok bends to his knees and says"plz aastha don't leave me. I cant live without u even in my dreams. Don't dare to do me this. Plz aastha I trust u more than me. plz listen look at my point aastha will u belive if I file many complients against ur baba? No he na like that aastha plz plz understand my situation".

Aastha firstly thought not to forgive him but after seeing his guilty conscious she hugs him very tightly. Shlok hugs her tooo. He says "aastha plz forget everything. I just want u and me only to be in our love land no one else. U r right aastha thanks for showing me the right path thank u sooo much for being with me". aastha cries in happiness she feels like all her sorrows r vanishing at that moment. Shlok bends to her lips and kisses her.

Their kiss was full of desire. They kiss eachothers lips equally. He sucks each an every corner of her mouth and she does the same tooo. After their hot kiss she blushes to find her boldness. Shlok bends to his knees and ask "aastha, will u forgive me and love me a lot. Will u accept me as urs forever?". Aastha is having tears in her eyes she nodded yes and suddenly locks her lips with him. He was shocked but later he responds to her kiss equally


guys thanks alot for bearing my os i hope u will like it

dont forget to comment and suggest a name for my os

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MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Aww thaat was awesomeee realy waiting fir that day to happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
nice os hope something like this does happen in serial
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Wowww...aishu it was mindblowing os👏👏👏👏...
Loved it sooo much😳😳😳😳😳...
Keep writing more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice OS!
Loved it yaar..
Keep giving us more..
Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: meerab...

Wowww...aishu it was mindblowing os👏...
Loved it sooo much😳...
Keep writing more...

have u got any name for my os meerab
and thank u sooo much for motivating me
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
thanks alot honey
keeep motivating me
Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: mehare

Amazing os loved it

thank u sooo much dear
keeep suppporting me
have u got any name for my os
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
thank u sooo much sweety
have u got any name for my os
Posted: 11 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Efinah36

Great OS
Suggestion: TRUST

thank u sooo much honey
gr8 name buddy let me see others suggestions tooo

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