#2 Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 19 on 96) - Page 70

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison

First of all, Thank you sooo much Sam for an early (comparatively early) update! I've been waiting for this update! And thank you for keeping to your word of updating soon. And thank you for this looong update 🤗 And thank you for the PM 🤗

I loved each and every bit of it! Loved how Shlok did not bother to answer Swathi and ran after Aastha ... Loved that he has understood her a little more that he knows where she would be... Loved Aastha's expressions of being hurt ... Loved the way he tried to explain to her that he DOES have feeling for her... Loved that she did not give into him and asked for some time till things sorted out...

Loved their first kiss the most... It seemed so perfect, so beautiful, so pure, so heavenly... And now he has found her book If Awesome would have a superlative, then that would be the word for this update!

Beautifully written Sam Sam 👏 Keep the updates coming,,,

P.S I know you're busy with things, but do try to update sooner, considering that we are dying like thirsty travelers to read thine update! 😃

Big hugs, take care 🤗

Originally posted by: miac

Wow sam,it is Indeed emotional and u did an amazing job. .so he is going to read her diary,wounder what stored for us.

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

excellent update dear,great job👍🏼

whloe ashlok part are wrote beautifully,emotional one but i loved it😳❤️

shlok's confession part was awesome👏

and their first kiss😳❤️☺️

finally all misunderstandings are cleared😃astha demands some more time😊

hope everything will be alright soon,waiting for astha's confession

update soon dear...

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Wonderful update Sam...

Finally the MU got cleared...

Poor Astha...Need time to trust him...

Hope Shlok will win her trust back by his love...

Shlok is going to read her dairy...Interesting...

waiting for the next part...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

Originally posted by: latha_555

that was a great chapter...really enjoyed it. loved the way you described the anguish and pain from both sides...i also loved the way shlock reacted...how he wanted to clear the misunderstanding and his anger and frustration at her lack of trust...also glad that aastha has trouble still trusting him and that they still need to resolve some issues. i especially liked his frustration with swati when she was questioning him about aastha...loved the line about needing to get back to his wife...and i loved aasthas comeback lines when she was at the beach, about the gift and how it meant nothing now that she knew he was meeting his gf...i think it was perfect:)

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

Sam you re so mean...

You can't end the chapter like that😡

Ppl, they kissed... It was beautifully written, muaah... It was a soulful update Sam, I totally fell for it...

Under any othe circumstance, I would've jumped at the fact that Swati knows about Shlok's marriage, but now that she doesn't even love him, it doesn't matter... Jeez, now I'm keen on breaking ppl's heart😆

The confrontation was just mind blowing, I was applauding here... Your choice of words are real great...

Now, wanna see how Shlok wins her trust...

The scrapbook, I just hope Aastha doesn't blast him for opening it😆

Originally posted by: akashavani

SAM...it was a really beautiful update...and the emotions were absolutely true to the situations...ur a great writer...to feel the characters...yeah it could be so draining too ...but it makes the characters...alive...thank u...pm next update.

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Extremely emotional n soulful update Sam ❤️ it 👏. I really enjoy the way Astha n Shlok open their heart out n share every damn thing they feel for each-other & that kiss but I like Astha's decision she is right she have to trust Shlok first to make this relation work properly n truly. Omg Shlok saw her scrapbook n open it & u stop it like that 😡 very bad now how can I wait for 1 long week 😭. Plzzz update soon don't kill this cat with curiosity 😉!